Mike McGuire vs InfiniteStan
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-31-05 at 11:34 PM

Must drop verse in 360 minutes after check in.

InfiniteStan has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-05 11:45 PM.

listen.

your verses & rhymes are droppin easily like a feather
imma write you a note on helpin ur lyrics wich will make u a little better
runnin this cat over until his guts come out and spill
if he survives the attack then im comingout for shoot2 kill
closing the walls on ur ass until u cant breathe & speak
mean while i got chur mom bending down on her right knee
you need to put 911 on speedial for a a quick use
to bounce of the walls when im coming after you
you should of saved your credits on rapverse
now all the rappers are coming & snatching ur purse
im leaving and closing this case once and for all
leave this game to the pros and go back to playing T-ball

........InfiniteStan

Mike McGuire has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-05 02:57 PM.

I'll rip through ya ribs and ''hand-cuff'' your heart and call it cardiac ''arrest''
Messin with the wrong man, Mike McGuire, is just like the fan and Ron Artest
Attack is my code of arms, like you ''deepthroatin'' my rhymes is your destructive bomb
This ''pussy'' is gettin ripped and leakin of blood, so give this bitch a larger ''tampon''
You got a somewhat dirty mouth only cuz you spit jack shit
Unlike you, I spit dirty lyrics from my mouth like I got gingivitis
I came and burned you like 3rd degree, and melted your spine
How can he be called Infinate when you don't got one punchline

Line #2 - Wrong man, Mike McGuire....Ron Artest attacked the wrong fan during the brawl.

Ok we both dropped.....Honest votes....and good luck stan....and me

coo coo....good luck to you too...
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... INFINITESTAN V.s MIKE MCGUIRE`

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... STAN Vs. MC'GUIRE

Voted For: Mike McGuire

InfiniteStan-Your structure wasn't all that great...no hard punches, no multis, and no wordplay a pretty shitty drop...ya need to elevate some man

Mike McGuire-Structure wasn't that great either, but you came a lot harder...no multis...some decent wordplay i liked that cardiac arrest line

V-Mike McGuire for comin harder with the punches n wordplay

Voted For: Mike McGuire

MIKE MCGUIRE
I'll rip through ya ribs and ''hand-cuff'' your heart and call it cardiac ''arrest''
Messin with the wrong man, Mike McGuire, is just like the fan and Ron Artest
^good wordplay as well as diss 6/10^
Attack is my code of arms, like you ''deepthroatin'' my rhymes is your destructive bomb
This ''pussy'' is gettin ripped and leakin of blood, so give this bitch a larger ''tampon''
^again nicely planted diss..5/10^
You got a somewhat dirty mouth only cuz you spit jack shit
Unlike you, I spit dirty lyrics from my mouth like I got gingivitis
^kinda gross self glor. but i liked it 8/10^
I came and burned you like 3rd degree, and melted your spine
How can he be called Infinate when you don't got one punchline
^good ending and personal proof down below 8/10^
OVERAL:your verse was plain with hott original and fresh punches nothing was played you had good wordplay only flaw was structure, but u still had good flow.

INFINITESTAN

your verses & rhymes are droppin easily like a feather
imma write you a note on helpin ur lyrics wich will make u a little better
^terrible self glor. wasnt funny nor diss 0/10^
runnin this cat over until his guts come out and spill
if he survives the attack then im comingout for shoot2 kill
^weak punchline...bad flow 4/10^
closing the walls on ur ass until u cant breathe & speak
mean while i got chur mom bending down on her right knee
^mom jokes are played gutta be creative 0/10^
you need to put 911 on speedial for a a quick use
to bounce of the walls when im coming after you
^no..........................bad 0/10^
you should of saved your credits on rapverse
now all the rappers are coming & snatching ur purse
^hes a guy i doubt he has a purse, weak punch 0/10^
im leaving and closing this case once and for all
leave this game to the pros and go back to playing T-ball
^weak closer but actually dissed weakly prob. best line 3/10^
OVERALL:your lines was whack and weak..no hate man but you got a lot of elevation to do...try making your verse about dissing your opponent not self glor. second be more creative wit ur wordplay and ur disses dont just throw out played punches and expect to win

v/Mike Mcguire

Please rtf since i kindly analyzed your battle its in the sig or front lines pz. 1

Voted For: InfiniteStan

InfiniteStan: Your structure was good but that was about all that was, flow was ok as well I guess. First bar was weak, worded poorly and poor concept, second bar same again, third same again but this was very played, mum jokes are really played out, fourth bar weak, fifth bar was probably your best but still real weak, and sixth bar really weak. Basically, you're just saying how you're gonna hurt him which isn't good, you need to think up creative concepts and word them so they hit, where as all your doing is just typing out stuff without any real meaning. So yeah overall, a weak typical newb verse basically.

v/ Mike McGuire

Would you both drop a vote on my battle please:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973

Ah shit, I cut off the first part of my breakdown by accident.

Mike McGuire: Had some nice wordplay, structure was a bit stretched, flow was ok. First bar was pretty decent, I only got it after the explanation though, second bar not bad but really played, third bar was a bit weak, and fourth bar was the best of the battle, I liked it.

Ah shit, I voted for the wrong person as well. Remove my vote please.

So it should be 3-0 me now since that mess up vote thing.

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Sorry for messing up the voting Mike, but could you drop a vote on my battle please? It's only 8 lines each, thanks:

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Voted For: InfiniteStan

mark mcguire

verse was ok some punches all werent that good, good structure

infinite stan

morepunches and personals, better structure overall infinite stan has this battle down pat, so this vote goes to infinite stan

Voted For: Mike McGuire

your verses & rhymes are droppin easily like a feather
imma write you a note on helpin ur lyrics wich will make u a little better
runnin this cat over until his guts come out and spill
if he survives the attack then im comingout for shoot2 kill
closing the walls on ur ass until u cant breathe & speak
mean while i got chur mom bending down on her right knee
you need to put 911 on speedial for a a quick use
to bounce of the walls when im coming after you
you should of saved your credits on rapverse
now all the rappers are coming & snatching ur purse
im leaving and closing this case once and for all
leave this game to the pros and go back to playing T-ball

Infinite Stan- u tried 2 hard n tried ta act gangsta wit yo rhymes. u didnt use n e punches at all. try ta use mo personals n punches. Yo structure wuz iight i cud read it.
Overall ya verse was pretty weak n needs lotta help
work on personals, punches n work on ya structa n u b iight
6/10

Mike Mcguire
I'll rip through ya ribs and ''hand-cuff'' your heart and call it cardiac ''arrest''
Messin with the wrong man, Mike McGuire, is just like the fan and Ron Artest
Attack is my code of arms, like you ''deepthroatin'' my rhymes is your destructive bomb
This ''pussy'' is gettin ripped and leakin of blood, so give this bitch a larger ''tampon''-(DAMN!!!!!!)
You got a somewhat dirty mouth only cuz you spit jack shit
Unlike you, I spit dirty lyrics from my mouth like I got gingivitis
I came and burned you like 3rd degree, and melted your spine
How can he be called Infinate when you don't got one punchline

ay yo u came hard on dis 1 ya punches n personals hit da spot n u left dat nigga n da dust. U 2 need ta improve ya structure but eething else wuz str8.
Fav Line:Attack is my code of arms, like you ''deepthroatin'' my rhymes is your destructive bomb
This ''pussy'' is gettin ripped and leakin of blood, so give this bitch a larger ''tampon''
DAT LINE RITE DERE DID IT 4 U NICE SHIT
8/10

my v/ Mike Mcguire fa betta verse


P.S RTF wit an HONEST vote on dis battle
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INFINITE_STAN Vs. MIKE MCGUIRE

This was feedback posted for Mike McGuire
 

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It should be 4-1 cuz of that vote that the one guy messed up...He said it went to me and accidently went to Stan.

This was feedback posted for InfiniteStan
 

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Voted For: Mike McGuire

Infinte Stan first:
Ok I think your rhyme was ok. It punches were not hard and your structure was a little off. Your strongest bar was probably: "runnin this cat over until his guts come out and spill
if he survives the attack then im comingout for shoot2 kill"! NO disrespect but there was alot of self glorification in the verse too! I think you should focus more on your punches adn personals when you batttle!

Mike McGuire:
Your structure was not that good homie but your punches hit harder than Infinites! The line of yours i liked was "You got a somewhat dirty mouth only cuz you spit jack shit
Unlike you, I spit dirty lyrics from my mouth like I got gingivitis" I thought it was kind of clever! Again its your structure add more personals and that's it!

So I give this battle to Mike McGuire!

Dope shit emcees! Peace & Hip Hop!

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Voted For: Mike McGuire

Nice job on obth, but
Mike Had better Vocab, punches, better overall verse..nice job to both

V/Mike McGuire