one mic vs KempoMRK
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-01-05 at 09:47 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

KempoMRK has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-05 09:18 AM.

I'll post real fast cos it doesn't take long to rip ya,
Leaving your 'camp' mind 'concentrated' as if I'm 'Adolf Hitler',
You joined before me and I'm still a hundred times as dope,
You could easily pass for an 'atheist'...'God's' giving you no 'hope',
I'll merk you like my name suggests yet I'm missing an E,
Damn, I could be missing a brain and you'd still struggle against me,
Ha dude, i've noticed that you like posting pitiful drops
Shame, cos 'Nas' is the only one who gives 'One Mic' props.

one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-01-05 09:41 AM.

C’mon man, kempo, you and I both know you aint hot/
Wots up wit your sig??, cuz there’s sumthin that luks similar to a cock/
You think that’s kool??? Well I don’t, but gud for you/
Your flow’s tacky like ringtone adverts on channel U*/
You aint creative, you bore me like playin scrabble/
Wanna elevate, but your posts are mainly bad votes in battles/
Why we even battlin, im out of your range for certain/
You dope?? How???, wen you got beat by a nameless person!!

*Channel U is a uk hip-hop channel

haha gud drop man. uppin this shit................

This was feedback posted for KempoMRK
 

would rtf, but no crew votes allowed..............

Voted For: KempoMRK

I'll post real fast cos it doesn't take long to rip ya,
Leaving your 'camp' mind 'concentrated' as if I'm 'Adolf Hitler',
^^okish but worded as threat and badly worded anyway
You joined before me and I'm still a hundred times as dope,
You could easily pass for an 'atheist'...'God's' giving you no 'hope',
^^concept is not bad, needed better wording to make it hit hard
I'll merk you like my name suggests yet I'm missing an E,
Damn, I could be missing a brain and you'd still struggle against me,
^^too simple
Ha dude, i've noticed that you like posting pitiful drops
Shame, cos 'Nas' is the only one who gives 'One Mic' props.
^^ok

vs.

C’mon man, kempo, you and I both know you aint hot/
Wots up wit your sig??, cuz there’s sumthin that luks similar to a cock/
^^no. gay.
You think that’s kool??? Well I don’t, but gud for you/
Your flow’s tacky like ringtone adverts on channel U*/
^^too simple
You aint creative, you bore me like playin scrabble/
Wanna elevate, but your posts are mainly bad votes in battles/
^^nah
Why we even battlin, im out of your range for certain/
You dope?? How???, wen you got beat by a nameless person!!
^^too simple

no hate, just opinion

vote in my sig please

ight then. uppin..................................

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uppin this........................................

I leave votes all over the place asking for return votes, and STILL no one votes? What the fuck?

Upping. Come on, vote, leave and link and I'll definitely vote on your battle.

yer init man, no1 votes. uppin this!!.....................

Voted For: KempoMRK

damn kempo got dis by a long shot his punches were way better, one mic u harldy had any punches, i liked the adolf hitler line one mic the only line i liked was your last line because it was a good personal but overall kempo gets this vote

Voted For: KempoMRK

KempoMRK

I'll post real fast cos it doesn't take long to rip ya,
Leaving your 'camp' mind 'concentrated' as if I'm 'Adolf Hitler',
^nice wordplay in second line, first is bleh 6/10

You joined before me and I'm still a hundred times as dope,
You could easily pass for an 'atheist'...'God's' giving you no 'hope',
^lmao @ second line, giggled at that, first is ok 7/10

I'll merk you like my name suggests yet I'm missing an E,
Damn, I could be missing a brain and you'd still struggle against me,
^haha, nice going against yourself but turning it into punch 8/10

Ha dude, i've noticed that you like posting pitiful drops
Shame, cos 'Nas' is the only one who gives 'One Mic' props.
^good nameplay, aight punch 6/10

Total: 27/40 = 67,5%, work bit more on creativity maybe and better first lines, better built-ups to make punch hit harder


one mic

C’mon man, kempo, you and I both know you aint hot/
Wots up wit your sig??, cuz there’s sumthin that luks similar to a cock/
^don't get the last line, first one is bleh...3/10

You think that’s kool??? Well I don’t, but gud for you/
Your flow’s tacky like ringtone adverts on channel U*/
^nice wordplay in second line, wasnt feeling first 6/10

You aint creative, you bore me like playin scrabble/
Wanna elevate, but your posts are mainly bad votes in battles/
^nah at first line, good punch with personal touch in second 6/10

Why we even battlin, im out of your range for certain/
You dope?? How???, wen you got beat by a nameless person!!
^nice shit 7/10

Total: 22/40 = 55%, work on more hardhitting punches with personal touch and complexity aight...

RTF on link in sig (against chip)...thanks...

Voted For: KempoMRK

very close battle. But I have to say punches are more effective from kempo. Lyrics are more effective and its just a all round better more hard hitting drop.

return the favour link in sig

ight then thanx for votin you lot anywayz. uppin this, i know i probly aint gonna win now, but uppin to get it closed loooool....

Voted For: KempoMRK

C’mon man, kempo, you and I both know you aint hot/
Wots up wit your sig??, cuz there’s sumthin that luks similar to a cock/
concept weak N played no punch weak

You think that’s kool??? Well I don’t, but gud for you/
Your flow’s tacky like ringtone adverts on channel U*/
ok but had no effect

You aint creative, you bore me like playin scrabble/
Wanna elevate, but your posts are mainly bad votes in battles/
weak

Why we even battlin, im out of your range for certain/
You dope?? How???, wen you got beat by a nameless person!!
nah poor hit no effect elevate ya diss'es and use punchelines to help u win



I'll post real fast cos it doesn't take long to rip ya,
Leaving your 'camp' mind 'concentrated' as if I'm 'Adolf Hitler',
played concept but it had effect decent

You joined before me and I'm still a hundred times as dope,
You could easily pass for an 'atheist'...'God's' giving you no 'hope',
a punch kinda sorda creative more like a flip line but decent


I'll merk you like my name suggests yet I'm missing an E,
Damn, I could be missing a brain and you'd still struggle against me,
ha now thats more creative simple hit decent

Ha dude, i've noticed that you like posting pitiful drops
Shame, cos 'Nas' is the only one who gives 'One Mic' props
aint feeling you're ending but you already did more then enough to win this battle