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infinitestan vs ThA NoToRiOuS D
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6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-02-05 at 05:19 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
ThA NoToRiOuS D has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-05 04:52 AM.
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InfiniteStan has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-05 04:52 AM.
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ayo.....dis kids a clown man
first of all who comes up with a name like infinite stan..?? imma have ta merk dis nigga must be a dumb kid...cuz he dont even no how 2 werk dis trigga but ay! imma show u a lesson or two.... dis fagget has been rejected by evry single crew.. the words coming outta your mouth is probally who the fuck is dee?? but still ur rhymes are as weak as da dude jorge from scary movie 3 ayo kid you aint wanted around so imma spin you around in circles like a merry-go-round... |
only a true genius wud know that battlin me aint smart
u only got 13 posts n' dat aint enough to climb my chart now u gotta get rid of dat picture of u lookin all retarded i should smack u in da head n' teach u a lesson like coach carter ur 'bout to be extinct from this world in 'bout a second now u got me started so im now bustin a tekken* you need to get an antivirus from infecting your self uve been wackin it so much u betta' scream for sum help ur weak punches n' throws are missing n' only hittin air but im graspin and breakin you as if i were a grizzly bear .... my mouth is blank 2day.. cant think of anythin.but ohwell... tekken*- from the game tekken .......................good luck |
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Voted For: InfiniteStan
aight i read both verses and my vote goes to stan.... damn you got better lol your structure was cool "only a true genius wud know that battlin me aint smart u only got 13 posts n' dat aint enough to climb my chart now u gotta get rid of dat picture of u lookin all retarded i should smack u in da head n' teach u a lesson like coach carter" that shit made me laugh nice shit...your personals and punches hit...nice vocab..the only line i wasnt feeling was the tekken line you coulda reworded it better overall it was decent and gully id say 7/10 gud shit... notorious you came weak ayo.....dis kids a clown man first of all who comes up with a name like infinite stan..?? openr was kinda gay it seemed like filler imma have ta merk dis nigga must be a dumb kid...cuz he dont even no how 2 werk dis trigga wtf? wasnt feeling that at all...so your callin your self a trigga? dosent make sense at all but ay! imma show u a lesson or two.... dis fagget has been rejected by evry single crew.. hmmm this semmed like filler too wheres the punchlines? the words coming outta your mouth is probally who the fuck is dee?? but still ur rhymes are as weak as da dude jorge from scary movie 3 ehhh this was ok.....didnt like it that much ayo kid you aint wanted around so imma spin you around in circles like a merry-go-round... gay closer this was a weak verse bro overaall stan took this nuff sed |
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Voted For: InfiniteStan
ayo.....dis kids a clown man first of all who comes up with a name like infinite stan..?? Terrible, no concept or punch there at all imma have ta merk dis nigga must be a dumb kid...cuz he dont even no how 2 werk dis trigga Nah, weak and played but ay! imma show u a lesson or two.... dis fagget has been rejected by evry single crew.. If thats a personal best line of your battle so far, but it was worded really basically and still wasn't even good the words coming outta your mouth is probally who the fuck is dee?? but still ur rhymes are as weak as da dude jorge from scary movie 3 I dunno Jorge, but the concept was better here ayo kid you aint wanted around so imma spin you around in circles like a merry-go-round... Nah, weak and played only a true genius wud know that battlin me aint smart u only got 13 posts n' dat aint enough to climb my chart Weak, bad concept now u gotta get rid of dat picture of u lookin all retarded i should smack u in da head n' teach u a lesson like coach carter Concept was there, wording wasn't ur 'bout to be extinct from this world in 'bout a second now u got me started so im now bustin a tekken* Concept was there again, but the wording was well off you need to get an antivirus from infecting your self uve been wackin it so much u betta' scream for sum help Eh? This was weird ur weak punches n' throws are missing n' only hittin air but im graspin and breakin you as if i were a grizzly bear [B]Concept was a bit unoriginal, and didn't really hit. Tha Notorious D had nothing, just a typical newb verse, keep writing, read tutorials and then you'll elevate. Infinitestan at least punched, but none really stood out to me. Still, v/infinitestan Both drop a vote on my battle please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206973 |
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Voted For: InfiniteStan
ayo.....dis kids a clown man first of all who comes up with a name like infinite stan..?? 3....2nd line stretched like fuck.....and punch is basic imma have ta merk dis nigga must be a dumb kid...cuz he dont even no how 2 werk dis trigga 2...stretched...n punch was shit.. but ay! imma show u a lesson or two.... dis fagget has been rejected by evry single crew.. 2....post links for proof or sumtin..cuz i think this is a fake personal the words coming outta your mouth is probally who the fuck is dee?? but still ur rhymes are as weak as da dude jorge from scary movie 3 3...basic punch and dee? ayo kid you aint wanted around so imma spin you around in circles like a merry-go-round... 2...said round too much and not a punch..this a threat. only a true genius wud know that battlin me aint smart u only got 13 posts n' dat aint enough to climb my chart 2...set-up was stupuid an punch was basic now u gotta get rid of dat picture of u lookin all retarded i should smack u in da head n' teach u a lesson like coach carter 5....first decent punch in this battle i guess ur 'bout to be extinct from this world in 'bout a second now u got me started so im now bustin a tekken* 3...tekken lines are really played now you need to get an antivirus from infecting your self uve been wackin it so much u betta' scream for sum help 2...no punch.... ur weak punches n' throws are missing n' only hittin air but im graspin and breakin you as if i were a grizzly bear 2....no punch again OK..this battle was weak...nothing really hit.What the 2 of you need to know..is that you can't go "makin threats"..if you know what I mean.Like Notorious's merry-go-round line.And stan's hittin air/grizzly bear line. But Infinite stan got this for actually havin one decent punch with the coach carter one.Elevation is greatly needed here. Vote-Infinitestan Rtf in sig, |
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Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D
yo im given this vote to notorious d...i liked sum of tha puches but they didnt hit really hard and ur structure could use a lot of work but keep at it...bnoth verses werent that great but notorious had tha better one...fo real Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
thnxs..........ay!! dis battle is dead we havent got any votes but ay!! vote pplz
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yo i wanna battle u real soon notorious...set it up wenever u git tha chance cuz im outta credz...thanx mayne...fo real
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Voted For: InfiniteStan
This battle was weak, not much to work with, no beef either to both of ya'll...i'm just telling the truth... Stan- you had the better verse here. Ok lines that had at least some multies, weak ones though, but your punches did come across hard hitting in this verse. you had some creative punches, tried to use some creativity, i feel you could have done better though overall, try next time to really diss your partner, look up some shit about them. D- your verse was overall in need of help, you should look up personals about your partner as well, i'm just trying to help, no beef here. You're rhyme scheme was basic, try to be more creative and use wordplay,multies...a different approach, this will help you in the long run.you said "i'ma show you a lesson or too, this faggot been rejected by every single crew"...you could have gone off on that tangent with more words, it ended too abruptly.Feal me? Then you skipped onto a completely different consept without explaining why this cat is like this..Again no beef people, just trying to help..overall, i feel stan won this battle. Goodluck both and 1 |
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Voted For: InfiniteStan
Ah HELL NAW BOTH U NIGGAZ ARE WACK BUT DIS 1 IS DFENTLY 0.1% more Less WACKer |
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