"Hate On Me" - Intermental (Best Song Yet From Inter)
 

My best song yet...

www.soundclick.com/intermental

took a long time and id appreciate sum feedback..

its called "Hate On Me Now"

Drop Links and Ill RTF straight Away

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206552
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206552

its nice i dont think its ya best personnally the flow is good heard it go off only like 3 times thru the whole song for a short period i like the lyrics nice the delivery is good i thought you dont the backing vocals a bit much n a few but its nice you should have put a lil more emotion into it overall good drop keep up

ok......thanks upin

beat:is ok...different kind.........
song is like hiphop...u know...not like raw rapping...like hip hop....but kinda cool,
ur quality is way more better....................and this is gd drop

lol thanks for the feed...but hiphop not rap???....lmao...im confused now...but thanks alot

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Listenin:

Beat is nice i like it,but like The Name said its alot more hiphop and your quality is ALOT better,flow is nice too!!!:D

some of the l lines seemed forced

didn't like the echo ablibs

felt the beat and some of the lyrics

not bad

keep elevatin




-Storm

thanks...........

thanks alot..........

I liked the beat...

about your flow...ur flow will be on point for a few bars...then, it'd seem like you lost site of the beat...that's partially breath control, but the rest is simply writing lyrics that fit the beat...Listen to the flow, if it seems like you're off beat, re-write or re-spit a line


Lyrics: pretty decent in spots


This was a good attempt...u got heart dawg


But, I agree that this wasn't your best. I think the Dabatos track was your best.


good try though...keep elevating


ur making progress


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thanks i appreciate imm re-try at lyrics on this

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*listening*

ok you have a good choice of beat i love these smooth type beats man its my style to i like how to toned your voice to it nice fit. i like your hook nice and catchy, good flow overall on the track, emotion aint to bad but it could be better, also i dont like how you layed that lil thing after you said a word you'd repeat it kinda, sometimes it sounded good but mostly it didnt, maybe dont do it all the time. but anyway this was pretty good man really lookin forward to a collaberation man

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no doubt....thanks...........

listening:
yeah this is your best man, nice flow seriously, flows off sometimes, nice second voice, watch ur flow finaly lol, nice quality man, nice emotions, u really elevated man, pretty good, mmm u start rapping slow, i prefer fast man, u should of keep it fast feel me
overall dope track

yeah thanks alot..........

this was a good concept...an aight drop...ya flow seemed off a majority of the time...u would have certain bars that flowed nice and then others would just crumble...lyrics were aight...i like the hook...only thing holding this back was ya flow fam...find that certain spot on the beat and just kill it...keep at it though fam...rtf on "Tell Me"

Feeling the beat for real but I feel your flow was better on other tracks because you started out good and then it seemed like you were rushing it a bit every now and then. Seek a bit more consistency on that point maybe. The lyrics were good, I'm loving the hook. It's catchy and a nice add-on to the song you know. Keep on at it boy, I definitely see a lot of elevation.

And I'ma get to that collab soon...I'm sorry, I was so busy with school and topicals. I'ma buy new mic though so I'll do it then you know. Hope you don't mind

Its koo....thanks alot for the feed....iite debit im on that rtf now

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