Batman vs Dopey
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dick Riding
You spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-02-05 at 01:03 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Batman has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-05 11:34 AM.

you wanna battle already your less than a newbie son
you dont even have a post and u wanna battle a mini pun
when i start to blaze the last thing i need is gas
cuz im already on fire so u better run fast
my skillz are as high as snoop smokin that weed
im the rymin monster,and your the next "emcee that i eat
fuckin wit me and u must be on dope
when u accept this challenge you've lost all hope

Dopey has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-05 11:58 AM.

yo my shit wack but itz the first ting that popped off...i can do better but im pretty sure u got this...good luck mayne and no hate after itz all said and done...holla at shya boy...peace

sorry for not droppin 1st, but i cant see ur drop until i post mine, so it really dont matter

itz coo mayne jus drop...let tha best muhfucka win...holla at shya boy...peace

Get ur mind right this is rap, man, not the place for a superhero
Just sit here and watch, Batman, as I burn ya shit up like Nero
I’m couldn’t be hit with more “wacks” if I was doing “karate”, ho
White boys never sounded so good, that’s cause u don’t do audio
Thinkin ur Eminem, bitch, but in reality, u don’t want no drama
U bomb on bitches who think they can rap, makes u a suicide bomba

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You should get most of this by lookin at his sig and profile, if u don’t then don’t vote
If ur too lazy to read his profile, it lists “Bombing on bitches who tink they can rap” as an interest

If u don’t get anything else, pm me about it before u vote

ill be 0-2 madd soon...damn...i gotta start thinkin b4 i drop damn....nice verse mayne...holla at shya boy...no hate

u n mike jones are the only people i know who say holla at shya boy after everything they say
u arent mike jones, are u? :D

do my bitch ass rymes sound like sum Mike Jones shit mayne?...lol...holla at shya boy

Voted For: Dopey

BATMAN
you wanna battle already your less than a newbie son
you dont even have a post and u wanna battle a mini pun
^self glor. no diss. 0/10^
when i start to blaze the last thing i need is gas
cuz im already on fire so u better run fast
^No diss in this just blabbering about ur self 0/10^
my skillz are as high as snoop smokin that weed
im the rymin monster,and your the next "emcee that i eat
^first decent punch though nothing special 4/10^
fuckin wit me and u must be on dope
when u accept this challenge you've lost all hope
^bad closer, no diss once again self glor. 0/10^
OVERALL:ur verse was plain...filled with self glor and lacked hard personals and punches...gutta work on those still..though ive seen improvement in ur verse....still lacked punches....flow was simple and plain

DOPEY

Get ur mind right this is rap, man, not the place for a superhero
Just sit here and watch, Batman, as I burn ya shit up like Nero
^OK opener nothing special self glor. 3/10^
I’m couldn’t be hit with more “wacks” if I was doing “karate”, ho
White boys never sounded so good, that’s cause u don’t do audio
^Stretched line forced words...good wordplay...5/10^
Thinkin ur Eminem, bitch, but in reality, u don’t want no drama
U bomb on bitches who think they can rap, makes u a suicide bomba
^iight closer, coulda been better....punch was ok 4/10^
OVERALL:ur verse was simple yet filled with a little wordplay and punches....personals were there and a little effective....overall you took this for more punches and better wordplay

V/dopey

rtf on the battle in my sig within 3 days or this vote will be dq'd

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Voted For: Batman

you wanna battle already your less than a newbie son
you dont even have a post and u wanna battle a mini pun
didnt really feel dis....no punches3/10

when i start to blaze the last thing i need is gas
cuz im already on fire so u better run fast
good punch....i like dis line 7/10

my skillz are as high as snoop smokin that weed
im the rymin monster,and your the next "emcee that i eat
nice punch.....8/10

fuckin wit me and u must be on dope
when u accept this challenge you've lost all hope
good closer...8/10

Get ur mind right this is rap, man, not the place for a superhero
Just sit here and watch, Batman, as I burn ya shit up like Nero
no punches....1/10

I’m couldn’t be hit with more “wacks” if I was doing “karate”, ho
White boys never sounded so good, that’s cause u don’t do audio
good punch......8/10

Thinkin ur Eminem, bitch, but in reality, u don’t want no drama
U bomb on bitches who think they can rap, makes u a suicide bomba
good closer...8/10

well ma vote goes to batman for he ahd betta punches....n flow

RTF AT MA BATTLES IN MA SIG

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This was feedback posted for Batman
 

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Voted For: Dopey

Dopey
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Get ur mind right this is rap, man, not the place for a superhero
Just sit here and watch, Batman, as I burn ya shit up like Nero
I’m couldn’t be hit with more “wacks” if I was doing “karate”, ho
White boys never sounded so good, that’s cause u don’t do audio
Thinkin ur Eminem, bitch, but in reality, u don’t want no drama
U bomb on bitches who think they can rap, makes u a suicide bomba
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you need to work on your vocab n punchlines mate....not disrecpect...but yea..what you have done..was sortta weak, but gets my vote.
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Batman
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you wanna battle already your less than a newbie son
you dont even have a post and u wanna battle a mini pun
when i start to blaze the last thing i need is gas
cuz im already on fire so u better run fast
my skillz are as high as snoop smokin that weed
im the rymin monster,and your the next "emcee that i eat
fuckin wit me and u must be on dope
when u accept this challenge you've lost all hope
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totally weak in here bro...you need mager elevating...again no disrespect...but if you had some vocab in this you would of gotten my vote......werd.

v/ dopey

can i get a RTF on my battle as well...i 4got to add that in my vote post.................................werd!!

Voted For: Dopey

hmmm batman never really dissed Dopey at all ... the closest thing he had to a diss was "I'll eat you" hmmmm yeah so I gotta give this to Dopey just for at least trying to throw some real punches...

Opener: Neither
Closer: Neither
Punches: Dopey just for effort alone
Personals: None
Enjoyment: None

Vote: Dopey

Voted For: Dopey

Vote - Dopey.

Pretty one-sided...here's the breakdown.

Flow- Dopey...pretty basic, but a lil more complex than Batmans...not the greatest.

Punches- Dopey, he threw some punches, kudos to him I guess...I liked the karate line, made me laugh...pretty generic punches from both though.

Personals- Dopey. He had them...Batman didn't have any. Pretty self-explanitory.

Multis- Nothing worth commenting on...

Wordplay- Dopey. Pretty basic, but good. Batman had none.

Throwing punches wins battles, straight up. Personals are great, too. Dopey threw some punches, tossed in some personals, hence...he wins.

Please RTF and vote in my battles Antic vs. JC Real and Antic vs. Rexless.

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This was feedback posted for Batman
 

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Voted For: Dopey

Batman:
you wanna battle already your less than a newbie son
you dont even have a post and u wanna battle a mini pun
2/10 - Bad Opener.
when i start to blaze the last thing i need is gas
cuz im already on fire so u better run fast
4/10 - ok punch.
my skillz are as high as snoop smokin that weed
im the rymin monster,and your the next "emcee that i eat
2/10 - didnt rhyme.
fuckin wit me and u must be on dope
when u accept this challenge you've lost all hope
3/10 - ok closer.
11/40

Dopey:
Get ur mind right this is rap, man, not the place for a superhero
Just sit here and watch, Batman, as I burn ya shit up like Nero
4/10 - Good Start.
I’m couldn’t be hit with more “wacks” if I was doing “karate”, ho
White boys never sounded so good, that’s cause u don’t do audio
4/10 - Good Punch.
Thinkin ur Eminem, bitch, but in reality, u don’t want no drama
U bomb on bitches who think they can rap, makes u a suicide bomba
4/10 - good closer.
12/30

Vote - Dopey