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§ick§eed vs Payn
Battle Rules 5-7 bars// 10-14 lines
No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 40 Check in by: 09-03-05 at 02:03 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
§ick§eed has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-05 03:26 PM.
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jeaaaa back like i neva left....listen dude
Payn Ain Worth Disses, Since He Bitches...So Much I Mistook Him 4 Misses Upset Cuz Everyone Dismiss His, "SLAVE TRACS" Like Their SUBMISSIVE! Like a Fiend Dis Crack Twitches, Ya Washed Up Raps Should B On Dishes Father Used Ta Fuck Him "UPON A STAR"...So "PAYN" Was His "WISHES"! (omg think) Killin §eed Ya Cant Do, Who Amped U?? Wears Spongebob On His Ankles Mama Used Ta Spank U, For Not Standin Up For Yaself Like.....Fat Crews!! Merked Wit No Thank You's, Ur Gay In Your Heart You Really Want Dudes But You Proved, Ta Da Whole Site U Got Fucked...Whut Laxatives U Use!? (lmaooo) If You In Payn Its Cause §eed Stole Your Reign, Now You Have No Name Unless You Borrow An "ATHLETES INJURY"...& Call Yaself "PRO-PAYN"! (propane) *slaves are submissive (give in) **his raps washed up so are dishes ***wish upon a star......get it now ****fat people neva stand up 4 themselves when they get bullied, they jus sit there n shit *****he got fucked, he cant shit so he needs laxatives ******an athlete is a pro, injury indicates pain.....pro-pane.....aha GONE! |
Payn has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-02-05 10:27 PM.
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...SiccSeed A.K.A Daubs...get ready 2 feel tha Payn
[I][CENTER][COLOR=Purple]havin sex w/ out protection, is tha only time ur considered a Sicc~Seed cuz ya rhymes r like Infectionz, eva time u spit ya passin out STDS i silence kids like duct tape and violence shit..i'll Wrap~A~Watch~Round~My~Fist then punch ya eye lids just ta Show~U~What~Time~It~Is This guy's bitch..it take time ta trip i'll tie is kicks togther..and watch him fall, as I~Walk~All~Ova~Daub~Lotz.. like i can't find my whip what kind a shit is this, a laugh is all i'll give his ass..and maybe a punch i ain't say'n wut up when i Extend~My~Fist~Ta~DaP forget the raps, there's no alum-in-um.. and they foil still You just make Ah-Sea look back like Trash and Oil spills(Aussie) boi you'll feel sick alot but not cause ya tinka drops after deaths occur is the only time people Digg'n in ya Flower Box |
WOW........how u figure that i'm daubs??? we always on at tha same time lmao ne ways vote up
BTW...i'm from NYC...he from uk?? so get cha facts straight dunn dunna |
This was feedback posted for §ick§eed
just peepin battle....nice drop fam...............
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Voted For: §ick§eed
ight. sick- good verse had personals punches and good structure...nice job i was feeling yuor verse payne- ight had cuople punches but ididnt hit hard,...structure was ight mainly sick beta you with harder punches... so v/sick http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=204972 ^^^hit up |
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i wonder y PAYN neva ups this fuckin battle....lmao....vote up nigras
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jesus fuckin christ........not even one more gotdamn vote?!!!!!
UPPIN FOR "VOTES"!!!!! |
Voted For: Payn
IP: Payn Ain Worth Disses, Since He Bitches...So Much I Mistook Him 4 Misses Upset Cuz Everyone Dismiss His, "SLAVE TRACS" Like Their SUBMISSIVE! Decent opener, conjured up a punch here w/ wordplay.7/10 Like a Fiend Dis Crack Twitches, Ya Washed Up Raps Should B On Dishes Father Used Ta Fuck Him "UPON A STAR"...So "PAYN" Was His "WISHES"! (omg think) This was better then the first bar, stronger punch,liked the worplay in this multi.9/10 Killin §eed Ya Cant Do, Who Amped U?? Wears Spongebob On His Ankles Mama Used Ta Spank U, For Not Standin Up For Yaself Like.....Fat Crews!! hmm,ok punch, felt it didnt connect well, with what you were trying to say..5/10 Merked Wit No Thank You's, Ur Gay In Your Heart You Really Want Dudes But You Proved, Ta Da Whole Site U Got Fucked...Whut Laxatives U Use!? (lmaooo) lol,this was funny to me, nice connected punch here, and the worplay was good in this bar,stronger.9/10 If You In Payn Its Cause §eed Stole Your Reign, Now You Have No Name Unless You Borrow An "ATHLETES INJURY"...& Call Yaself "PRO-PAYN"! Your best bar of the battle,nice closer,connected the punch, it worked.9/10 overall nice verse [I][CENTER][COLOR=Purple]havin sex w/ out protection, is tha only time ur considered a Sicc~Seed cuz ya rhymes r like Infectionz, eva time u spit ya passin out STDS hmm, decent punch, have heard this before so seemed generic, could have come harder for an opener.5/10 i silence kids like duct tape and violence shit..i'll Wrap~A~Watch~Round~My~Fist then punch ya eye lids just ta Show~U~What~Time~It~Is strong punch, didnt like how you strucutred it,was longer then it needed to be,but decent.8/10 This guy's bitch..it take time ta trip i'll tie is kicks togther..and watch him fall, as I~Walk~All~Ova~Daub~Lotz.. like i can't find my whip decent, but not strong, it didnt connect, some bars seem stretched.7/10 what kind a shit is this, a laugh is all i'll give his ass..and maybe a punch i ain't say'n wut up when i Extend~My~Fist~Ta~DaP forget the raps, there's no alum-in-um.. and they foil still You just make Ah-Sea look back like Trash and Oil spills(Aussie)your bars a maaad stretched which messes with ya structure, like the wordplay in this one,but still needs to be written better.8/10 boi you'll feel sick alot but not cause ya tinka drops after deaths occur is the only time people Digg'n in ya Flower Box ok closer, but could have worded it better, and made it more hard hitting..6/10..overall need structure help Sic-40 payn-34...str8 battle both,rtf in the siggy. pc |
oh shit, my vote was supposed to be for seed. Byt the numbers. i'll have strobe switch it.
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ight whateva but uppin diz bitch since i'm not winnin diz thang cuz i came weak but hey fucc it u win sum & lose sum it'z jus tha net
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Voted For: §ick§eed
damn this shit was close this is the badest battle i've seen in a while..you both ripped it..damn....this was close but i'd have too say Sick Seed got it overall......he just nailed it by a inch....man you both had some sick vocab and personals but i felt that sick seeds were a little more original soo i have ta vote for him... good battle vote/sick |
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This was feedback posted for §ick§eed
DAMN! That shit was ill...Got awsome punches....remind me of myself and shit lol
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This was feedback posted for Payn
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Voted For: §ick§eed
Payn Ain Worth Disses, Since He Bitches...So Much I Mistook Him 4 Misses Upset Cuz Everyone Dismiss His, "SLAVE TRACS" Like Their SUBMISSIVE! 5....wuzn't feelin this much..esspeccially the 1st line. Like a Fiend Dis Crack Twitches, Ya Washed Up Raps Should B On Dishes Father Used Ta Fuck Him "UPON A STAR"...So "PAYN" Was His "WISHES"! (omg think) 6...nice....liked the 1st line more tho..'n it should have been worded better Killin §eed Ya Cant Do, Who Amped U?? Wears Spongebob On His Ankles Mama Used Ta Spank U, For Not Standin Up For Yaself Like.....Fat Crews!! 3...these lines are played Merked Wit No Thank You's, Ur Gay In Your Heart You Really Want Dudes But You Proved, Ta Da Whole Site U Got Fucked...Whut Laxatives U Use!? 3..gay line?c'mon man...be more orginal If You In Payn Its Cause §eed Stole Your Reign, Now You Have No Name Unless You Borrow An "ATHLETES INJURY"...& Call Yaself "PRO-PAYN"! 7....ite...but try to make wordplay match on both sides next time. havin sex w/ out protection, is tha only time ur considered a Sicc~Seed cuz ya rhymes r like Infectionz, eva time u spit ya passin out STDS 3...weak...disease shit(unless used creatively)..are a no. i silence kids like duct tape and violence shit..i'll Wrap~A~Watch~Round~My~Fist then punch ya eye lids just ta Show~U~What~Time~It~Is 3...no punch..and don't do that swiggly shit This guy's bitch..it take time ta trip i'll tie is kicks togther..and watch him fall, as I~Walk~All~Ova~Daub~Lotz.. like i can't find my whip 5...ite what kind a shit is this, a laugh is all i'll give his ass..and maybe a punch i ain't say'n wut up when i Extend~My~Fist~Ta~DaP 3...didn't rhyme..no punch forget the raps, there's no alum-in-um.. and they foil still You just make Ah-Sea look back like Trash and Oil spills(Aussie) 3....really forced wordplay. boi you'll feel sick alot but not cause ya tinka drops after deaths occur is the only time people Digg'n in ya Flower Box 3...weak Ok..SickSeed got this. Payn...next time..in battles..don't use that swiggly shit(~).Looks newbish.And learn to make every bar a punchline.U had too many shit that didn't diss.And you also forced wordplay..like that ah-see/aussie one.Learn to overcome forced wordplay Vote-SickSeed |
ooh...and sickseed.... you really daubs?
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nah i aint daubs, i'm from New York City aint daubs from UK?? and how could i be daubs when we rhyme different from eachotha and he in charge of Livin Legends?
i'm in The Legacy, i dunno where he got da "daubs" shit from but nah i ain him |
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ayo can someone please close this shit for me? damn
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gotdamn CLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSE THIISSSSSSSSS
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Voted For: §ick§eed
Payn Ain Worth Disses, Since He Bitches...So Much I Mistook Him 4 Misses Upset Cuz Everyone Dismiss His, "SLAVE TRACS" Like Their SUBMISSIVE! Like a Fiend Dis Crack Twitches, Ya Washed Up Raps Should B On Dishes Father Used Ta Fuck Him "UPON A STAR"...So "PAYN" Was His "WISHES"! (omg think) Killin §eed Ya Cant Do, Who Amped U?? Wears Spongebob On His Ankles Mama Used Ta Spank U, For Not Standin Up For Yaself Like.....Fat Crews!! Merked Wit No Thank You's, Ur Gay In Your Heart You Really Want Dudes But You Proved, Ta Da Whole Site U Got Fucked...Whut Laxatives U Use!? (lmaooo) If You In Payn Its Cause §eed Stole Your Reign, Now You Have No Name Unless You Borrow An "ATHLETES INJURY"...& Call Yaself "PRO-PAYN"! (propane) thats a whole 48/50 |
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