sabotage vs Status
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Ummm...That's It.

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 09-03-05 at 05:57 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Status has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-05 05:52 AM.

sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-05 05:56 AM.

Yo yo

You’re getting sabotaged by viruses on your way to internet fame
Cuz you couldn’t elevate in these streets if you where David blane
The way you only do text its like you don’t have an esophagus
Or maybe in audio your existence isn’t wanted like foster kids
Don’t mean to self glorify but get the message, im dope
Can kill you with out touching you like second hand smoke



aight short but sweet..if you dont understand a line then PLEASE dont vote....

This kids rhymes smell like the bathroom..Makes me shout in horror
Like toilets used by Fat Bastard his Status is Out Of Order*
You from Sacramento? Ha! I'll let it dawn on you, see
Cause you might be a Lil Scrappy but you still Not A King**
You're equivalent to your sports team..No I'm not a hater
Cause The Kings would never be able to beat me..Even if I Peja(paid ya)***


*play off his name
**Lil Scrappy sings "Im A King"..and sacramento kings
***Peja is on the Kings
blah. a quick key.

Wow what a coincidence. We matched each others verse for lines. Nice closer man. Now for votes.

aight you did personals and i didnt bcuase i wasnt tryna do research.....becuase im busy with homework..

uppin for some votes yo..................................

Voted For: sabotage

You’re getting sabotaged by viruses on your way to internet fame
Cuz you couldn’t elevate in these streets if you where David blane
6...decent...
The way you only do text its like you don’t have an esophagus
Or maybe in audio your existence isn’t wanted like foster kids
4...played concept with not wanted/foster kids
Don’t mean to self glorify but get the message, im dope
Can kill you with out touching you like second hand smoke
5....ok....more like a threat tho...but still a decent punch

This kids rhymes smell like the bathroom..Makes me shout in horror
Like toilets used by Fat Bastard his Status is Out Of Order*
6...ain't feelin the fat bastard part....but a good play on name still
You from Sacramento? Ha! I'll let it dawn on you, see
Cause you might be a Lil Scrappy but you still Not A King**
4....didn't rhyme and weak punch
You're equivalent to your sports team..No I'm not a hater
Cause The Kings would never be able to beat me..Even if I Peja(paid ya)***
6......good

ok...i thought sab. got this.Really close battle though.I thought staus lack of personals hurt him a lot.Also had a not wanted/foster kids line...which is played.That last bar with the 2nd hand smoke was decent and all..but it was more of a threat than punch.It should have been used as a set-up or sumtin.

So my HONEST vote goes to sab. for personals and harder punches.

Vote-Sabotage

Yay! lets get some more votes on this.............

Yay! lets get some more votes on this.............

upppin for votes............................................

Voted For: Status

Implicit's Break Down........http://img1.imagetitan.com/img1/1/6/images962.jpg


This kids rhymes smell like the bathroom..Makes me shout in horror
Like toilets used by Fat Bastard his Status is Out Of Order*
Okay opener...coo..punch is aiight,Not really effective...4/10

You from Sacramento? Ha! I'll let it dawn on you, see
Cause you might be a Lil Scrappy but you still Not A King**
Didnt rhyme at all,an tha punch is coo..if it rhymed!3/10

You're equivalent to your sports team..No I'm not a hater
Cause The Kings would never be able to beat me..Even if I Peja(paid ya)***
Nice personal on his state!....Good structure!...7/10

overall 5/10..average,but still coo..

couldve worked on tha wordplay a lil more tho'

Status breakdown....http://img1.imagetitan.com/img1/1/6/jooo.jpg

You’re getting sabotaged by viruses on your way to internet fame
Cuz you couldn’t elevate in these streets if you where David blane
This is an aiight punch,sorta played tho'..but nice word play...5/10

The way you only do text its like you don’t have an esophagus
Or maybe in audio your existence isn’t wanted like foster kids
Hah!..A lil personal,I like this one cuz tha flow of words an structure wasnt hard ta read it out,but still coo..6/10

Don’t mean to self glorify but get the message, im dope
Can kill you with out touching you like second hand smoke
You said it self glory...but still tha punch is good....7/10

overall....6/10 juss a smidget over average...

my vote goes ta STATUS
cuz Implicit wouldve had it if it wasnt for that line that didnt rhyme...Sorry!

WeLL Kids tha show is over.....http://img1.imagetitan.com/img1/1/6/cas15yw2.jpg

^You suck anyway. Uppin for more votes on this battle.

I suck?


Hey...Lets battle then an see whats up!

Voted For: Status

Status

You’re getting sabotaged by viruses on your way to internet fame
Cuz you couldn’t elevate in these streets if you where David blane(NICE OPENER)
The way you only do text its like you don’t have an esophagus
Or maybe in audio your existence isn’t wanted like foster kids(DAMN NICE ONE)
Don’t mean to self glorify but get the message, im dope
Can kill you with out touching you like second hand smoke
(IIGHT CLOSURE)

Status- u had sum hard punches n ur shit flowed nicely. U cudda done betta on da closure but da was da only flaw in ya verse. Nice use of personals n punches da hit hard.
8.5/10


Implicit

This kids rhymes smell like the bathroom..Makes me shout in horror
Like toilets used by Fat Bastard his Status is Out Of Order*
(1st line wuz wack but i wuz feelin da 2nd line)
You from Sacramento? Ha! I'll let it dawn on you, see
Cause you might be a Lil Scrappy but you still Not A King**
(ummmmmmm no)
You're equivalent to your sports team..No I'm not a hater
Cause The Kings would never be able to beat me..Even if I Peja(paid ya)***
(meh closure)

Implicit-u came out weak here. Sum of da punches u threw cudda been betta if u used ya wordplay betta. I wuz feelin sum of ur lines but it didnt really look like u tried dat hard in dis battle. Ur structure wuz str8 but u jus need ta work on throwin sum harder punches n personals dat really hit n u b iight. Not a bad verse but u cudda done betta
6/10

v/Status for comin harder w/ betta punches n personals

Voted For: Status

Status..
You’re getting sabotaged by viruses on your way to internet fame
Cuz you couldn’t elevate in these streets if you where David blane
Word...6
The way you only do text its like you don’t have an esophagus
Or maybe in audio your existence isn’t wanted like foster kids
Meh...5
Don’t mean to self glorify but get the message, im dope
Can kill you with out touching you like second hand smoke
Nah...4

Overall: 15/30


Implicit..
This kids rhymes smell like the bathroom..Makes me shout in horror
Like toilets used by Fat Bastard his Status is Out Of Order*
Eh...5
You from Sacramento? Ha! I'll let it dawn on you, see
Cause you might be a Lil Scrappy but you still Not A King**
Meh...5
You're equivalent to your sports team..No I'm not a hater
Cause The Kings would never be able to beat me..Even if I Peja(paid ya)***
2 King lines...nah..4

Overall: 14/30

Vote: Status

uppin this .................................................. ...........

This was feedback posted for Status
 

cant rtf on this, he in my crew...................

Voted For: Status

Implicit
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This kids rhymes smell like the bathroom..Makes me shout in horror
Like toilets used by Fat Bastard his Status is Out Of Order*
You from Sacramento? Ha! I'll let it dawn on you, see
Cause you might be a Lil Scrappy but you still Not A King**
You're equivalent to your sports team..No I'm not a hater
Cause The Kings would never be able to beat me..Even if I Peja(paid ya)***
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yo...your substance in this verse......wasnt hittin status hard at all....try to use more harder shyt to use in ur punchlines..
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Status
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You’re getting sabotaged by viruses on your way to internet fame
Cuz you couldn’t elevate in these streets if you where David blane
The way you only do text its like you don’t have an esophagus
Or maybe in audio your existence isn’t wanted like foster kids
Don’t mean to self glorify but get the message, im dope
Can kill you with out touching you like second hand smoke
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werd bro, ur punchlines was rough...you got my vote on this from the punchlines and that nice audio line...

pCe

aight yo upping this for one more vote hopefully............

Voted For: Status

status gets this because implicit played his whole verse on "king"or "kings"try to "broaden your horizons"anyway good battle but v/status