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Daemon vs ILL-noise
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 09-04-05 at 06:14 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Daemon has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-05 06:15 PM.
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Quickie, bay-beh. :thumbup:
Ill-Noise says that he doesn't get Hammer time... but let's not forget... You say you don't understand, but that's not the only thing you don't get. * I'm not calling you stupid my friend, and I'm not trying to start some hate, but when you talked about your maturity on RV...I think he meant his age. ** Kid says he's ill-noise...so maybe he had a cold when he first grabbed a mic. He thinks he's a joker... when this fucking faggot went to therapy to see a psyche. Ill-noise good? Kid takes a nap...when he says that he'll finish the rest... Man, wash your fucking hair...it's so oilly, that bush'll go invade it next! * http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206485... He says he didn't get it. ** http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206479... He says his maturity is about 6 or 7. |
ILL-noise has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-05 06:35 PM.
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check!
yo this cat is 3-6 dam why you make me set it up..jsut retire* battling this Daemon when he knows im gonig to put out his fire* dam heavyweight champ but dam that shit is worthless** cause you were probally scared and ducked on purpose** how old r u?probally thirty chances of you getting laid,zero cuz you nerdy only time when you knock boots is when your fucking tim's are dirty your brave i give you propz but i win your still a fool beating me is like..putting a girl infront of clinton and him keeping his cool another win for ill a big L for you..case closed and murder was the anwser i had to cut your words short like Daemon was dying of lung cancer name is Daemon* Quote:
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o_O I made you set it up because I don't have battle creds...xD
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This was feedback posted for ILL-noise
checkin the pollz .
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Totodile! Destroy His Picachu With Your Flash Bag!
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Voted For: ILL-noise
this battle was almost a tie but daemon lost it with his whack personals, he tried 2 hard and forced them, dont force them next time and maybe you would win this vote goes to illnoise |
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This was feedback posted for ILL-noise
I looked at both verses for a good 15 minutes, tryna pick a winner, i couldn't... it's too close.. good luck to both. I'm feeling yo metas, ILL but I thought you coulda threw in some more personals or better set-ups for punches.. best outta yours was the "tim's are dirty line and your lung cancer line".. Daemon, I wasn't feelin the hammertime bar at all, you had a few personals.. the hair bar was funny.. eh, i been tryna decide forever, i give up.. it's a tie to me.. = (
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Voted For: ILL-noise
yo this cat is 3-6 dam why you make me set it up..jsut retire* battling this Daemon when he knows im gonig to put out his fire* 4...kinda weak... dam heavyweight champ but dam that shit is worthless** cause you were probally scared and ducked on purpose** 5...ok personal and all...wordin was messed a bit how old r u?probally thirty chances of you getting laid,zero cuz you nerdy only time when you knock boots is when your fucking tim's are dirty 7...kewl... your brave i give you propz but i win your still a fool beating me is like..putting a girl infront of clinton and him keeping his cool 4..clinton lines got played years ago another win for ill a big L for you..case closed and murder was the anwser i had to cut your words short like Daemon was dying of lung cancer 5...2nd line was all right...but set-up suked. Ill-Noise says that he doesn't get Hammer time... but let's not forget... You say you don't understand, but that's not the only thing you don't get. * 4..coulda made it hit harder I'm not calling you stupid my friend, and I'm not trying to start some hate, but when you talked about your maturity on RV...I think he meant his age. ** 3...his age??...c'mon Kid says he's ill-noise...so maybe he had a cold when he first grabbed a mic. He thinks he's a joker... when this fucking faggot went to therapy to see a psyche. 3...basic and weak... Ill-noise good? Kid takes a nap...when he says that he'll finish the rest... Man, wash your fucking hair...it's so oilly, that bush'll go invade it next! 6....good Well...decent battle.But I think ILL got it. Daemon..I thought you were too basic.HAd some attempts at personals..but..they were executed bad.Some more wordplay and shit would help.That line about maturity and age?C"mon.Saying someone is 6-7 yrs old doesn't hit hard as a punch. Vote-ILL Rtf below or this vote will be removed in 3 days :thumbup: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207213 |
This was feedback posted for Daemon
Daemon took this one
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Voted For: ILL-noise
Aii This is what I think Ill Your lines are more complex and a Little more original than Daemonz lines are ........Your punchez are on tact and your personals are on Q and True .........as far as your flow goes you need to work on yo structure but the flow was aii so that prolly why ya structure was fucked up bcuz yo flow was on most of the time they will not always meet hand and hand... I think that you deserve this win in this battle and I think that you should also try and mix you some multies in yo verses sometimes if you ask me .....but yeah you get my vote in this battle Daemon You had a aii verse but tne i think that you tried to hard to hit in spots that werent that important....but then you also had some nice personals but your wording kinda threw it off when you try to deep dive into the wordingz its like your forcing yourself and it threw your style off which threw your verse off and which contributed to you losing this battle. I dont think that you deserve this win So my vote goes to Ill-Noise Please RTF in the battle link in my sig in 48 hrs or this vote will get removed |
Voted For: ILL-noise
how old r u?probally thirty chances of you getting laid,zero cuz you nerdy only time when you knock boots is when your fucking tim's are dirty that was the only good line of the entire battle...little wordplay from each....non existant punches ....blah this battle sucked ass....but ill-noise had one good line therefore he gets this battle...daemon ya didnt throw any punches i like ya topicals but ya not that great at battlin adn ill noise up ya game v/ill-noise for a better verse |
Voted For: ILL-noise
ok...noise how old r u?probally thirty chances of you getting laid,zero cuz you nerdy wow. what a weak ass line. not really anything good to quote. very sub-average verse. be more creative. 1/10 ok Daemon... you were a heavyweight champ? LMAO. seriously? This was just a plain old pathetic display of text. no flow, no rhyme, and made no sense. .002/10 |
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