batman vs ThA NoToRiOuS D
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No bitching


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-06-05 at 12:30 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

ThA NoToRiOuS D has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-05 12:01 PM.

Batman has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-05 12:01 PM.

yo i read some of ur battles and all your doin is throwin jabs
but tha punches im throwin hit harder than concrete slabs
you need to elevate mayne u aint nuthin yet
im a noob but up against u i feel like a vet
i figure that 6 linez is all it should take to bury you 6 feet deep
im too good to battle u in person so drop ur verse when u hear tha beep
yo i stopped for a minute and now im back and comin at u head on
im better than that bitch that calls him the brooklyn don

I Get them stacked, accept the fact
There is no way you could beat me....the skillz is what you lack
You see me, protect ya back

Nigga, you cant come near me
Im like fire, err' body fears me
im like ludacris...im coming for the numba 1 spot...ya hear me

Yo this is no joke...ma burner will leave you unwoke
Mad smoke in this hood....it'll make you choke

Where I'm from son, snitches like you be dialing 911
But those the one you find in the alley filled wit 9 dum-dums

nice verse...u got me...uppin for votez in this shit...fo real

yeah man uppin 4 dis bytch.........holla baq

Voted For: Batman

ThA NoToRiOuS D
I Get them stacked, accept the fact
There is no way you could beat me....the skillz is what you lack
You see me, protect ya back
^Whack, and played i used it in the 5th grade 0/10^
Nigga, you cant come near me
Im like fire, err' body fears me
im like ludacris...im coming for the numba 1 spot...ya hear me
^Nope, whack and played.......nothing but self glor. 0/10^
Yo this is no joke...ma burner will leave you unwoke
Mad smoke in this hood....it'll make you choke
^self glor...no punch 0/10^
Where I'm from son, snitches like you be dialing 911
But those the one you find in the alley filled wit 9 dum-dums
^umm best effort to through a punch 1/10^
OVERALL:ur verse was filled with whack multis, whack lines everything was self glor, u had no punches or personals thrown towards ur opponent.......

BatMan

yo i read some of ur battles and all your doin is throwin jabs
but tha punches im throwin hit harder than concrete slabs
^Self glor. But good reference and creativity 4/10^
you need to elevate mayne u aint nuthin yet
im a noob but up against u i feel like a vet
^decent punch, could be better but still a punch 5/10^
i figure that 6 linez is all it should take to bury you 6 feet deep
im too good to battle u in person so drop ur verse when u hear tha beep
^lol kinda funny made me laugh 6/10^
yo i stopped for a minute and now im back and comin at u head on
im better than that bitch that calls him the brooklyn don
^no worst line, not feelin taht 0/10^
OVERALL:ur verse was far better than ur opponent u had good punches, good referneces...overall just better than ur opponent

v/batman

rtf or this vote will be dq'd

*coughs* hater..........uppin

dis guy is forver on ma shyt.....alwaiis goin were im at seriously jump off ma shyt

:laugh2: shut the fuck up bitch i aint on ur shit no where.....dont be HATING on me cuz u a born herb that has whack ass verses :thefinger

hahahah nigga i cud go to like LL i see u dere ryt afta me i got 2 rapper vs rapper ur dere ni99a ur a herb ass ni99a....iigh u got more posts but das it man u cant get on ma level u fag staii on dis syte all daii u fukin loser 1

i could name 100 people that go to rapper vs. rapper is that a crime? or are u just wanting attention? nuff said

word yo dont be startin no beefs in this battle thread...y dont u two jus settle this dispute wit a battle...i'd luv to see that...but anyway thanx fo tha vote mayne......fo real

This was feedback posted for Batman
 

Yo, lol word yall battling eathother...damn i want in!!

yea man dis guys a herb he be startin mad shyt but ay!!! the next generation man battling each otha n shyt das wassup 1

no ones starting beef u herb.......and now ur votes are illegal in 2 ways.........1 d/r.....second.....crew votes.............fuckin newb

Voted For: Batman

i dont wanna explain this jus batman owned the fuck out of notorias elevate yo good battle

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yo who tha fuck u callin a herb?....who's votes is illegal?....and he voted on ma shit befo he was in tha next generation mayne...damn yo is u tryna start a beef wit me cuz it sounded like u was aimin that bullshit towardz me...and he aint no dickrider,i didnt know him until after he voted on my battlez...damn son u need to chilll...no hate tho cuz...u have every right to stand up fo yourself...holla at shya boy...wait hold the fuck up...u is tha one who had his votez disqualified?...damn son how could u do thiz to me?....i thought we was coo?...i was winnin fair and square then u had to beef wit him and take it out on me....damn son thatz cold...fuck thiz shit muhfucka im done bein nice cuz thatz bullshit...,maybe ill have my votez removed from tha battlez of yours i voted on and hey maybe while im at it ill sum others removed 2....i would but i aint as fuckin grimey as u is mayne....thatz fuckin low...i thought u was my boy all that talk bout us bein coo dont mean shit now muhfucka...holla at shya boy

This was feedback posted for Batman
 

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ayo da nigga a herb son The Next genration all daii man mystic chaos a hater he think he nice cuz he gettin his boys to vote 4 him......what a tru herb man.......1

getting my boys to vote for me? only boys i got are my crew, and madknight.....who has yet to vote for me.......so breath easy son.....making false statements.......and batman.....i didnt do shit to u......but ill be glad to settle the beef in another battle............ill battle both ya'll catz.....whack ass fuck

^^lmao off for u coppyin my sig.....now thats a true fuckin bitch.......and puttin ur crew next to fuckin pussy.....maken it look like u call ur crew a fuckin pussy.............gutta change that shit up...and come up wit ur own shit................battle me

ayo da nigga a herb son The Next genration all daii man mystic chaos a hater he think he nice cuz he gettin his boys to vote 4 him......what a tru herb man.......1

^ yo notorious we coo but me and mystic go back a wayz...mystic itz my bad dawg i thought u was callin me a herb...my bad,and was it u that had his votez for me dq'ed?...yo we still coo right?...but yea notorious no hate we still coo but chill wit bombin and beefin on mystic...u two should jus battle and wen itz done itz done...no more hatin or beefin...iight wut yall think?...set that shit up cuz i wanna see it...lol...holla at shya boy

Voted For: Batman

Batman-
I didn’t like it that much… It made sense though it had decent wordplay and punches they lines could have evened out more it would help a lot and look better too instead of all crooked and you did a decent job of opening the battle on going first.i liked you third and fourth line the best even though it was still basic but it was cool.

NoToRiOuS D-
I didn’t like yours at all , it was spaced out and didn’t make too much sense I don’t know if you are a kid or not or your maybe even older than me but it didn’t seem like to good of a verse didn’t like it at all. Not much wordplay and you tried to have to much of a flow , as in trying to hard, I think you could do a lot better

v/bat

Voted For: Batman

yo i read some of ur battles and all your doin is throwin jabs
but tha punches im throwin hit harder than concrete slabs
creative...iight opener

you need to elevate mayne u aint nuthin yet
im a noob but up against u i feel like a vet
nice little jab or punch w/e u wanna call it,liked it

i figure that 6 linez is all it should take to bury you 6 feet deep
im too good to battle u in person so drop ur verse when u hear tha beep
kinda made me laugh and it was pretty creative,good job

yo i stopped for a minute and now im back and comin at u head on
im better than that bitch that calls him the brooklyn don
didnt really git it,not such a good closer

elevate and keep at it batman



I Get them stacked, accept the fact
There is no way you could beat me....the skillz is what you lack
You see me, protect ya back
^pretty good opener but too basic,it was jus iight

Nigga, you cant come near me
Im like fire, err' body fears me
im like ludacris...im coming for the numba 1 spot...ya hear me
not good,i hated that you rymed me every time but it was good that u had some multies,still not good though

Yo this is no joke...ma burner will leave you unwoke
Mad smoke in this hood....it'll make you choke
pretty good,a little basic but nice

Where I'm from son, snitches like you be dialing 911
But those the one you find in the alley filled wit 9 dum-dums
nice multies and a pretty good closer but that dum dums thing was wack but a nice attempt

batman had the verse overall...it was hard becuz both of yall need to elevate and up ya vocab and structure and flow...but no hate to either of you,keep at it

v/batman

Voted For: Batman

Notorious- you had some decent lines, the opener seemed a little weak, you could have mad the punch hit harder, by saying something against your opponent with more details. The next bar, you did the same, like your trying to find a rhyme,but didnt exactly land a punch. i liked your second to last bar the best out of your verse, as the last bar:911 doesn't rhyme with 9 dum dums..try to use personals, i think this would benefit you.
Batman-
ok opener, decent punch there, the second bar was better,seemed to explain a little more about what you intend to prove. The last two bars were your best here, i feel you took a more creative approach with your verse, and used more detail so you get this vote. hit mine up both if you get the chance.link in siggy.1