Shazz vs .:YouNg.MiC:.
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-09-05 at 10:46 PM

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Shazz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-05 10:46 PM.

.:YouNg.MiC:. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-05 10:04 PM.

Kid u Gon Get Ripped-appart, is it all Clear like Crystal-Right?//
Never mind Kid so Retarted He Couldn't Tell da Difference Between his Left-n-Right,
Yet still he Think he gon be da Winner on this//
Da winners name Starts with a Y an Ends with a C on this Spit,
Give it up kid an i Don't mean it in a Wrong Way so don't Get it Twisted like a Rain-Bow//
I Spit so Much in All Different Directions might as well Call him my "Stained-Hoe",
Let Go u Ain't gonna Win, Truly u Ain't number 1//
50 dat's your Number or Should i Say Number 101,
Still u can't see this kid a fake,Like a Golden Tooth in a Mouth Placed//
See as I Replace his Rhymes like Cavities waitin to be Filled-up With Feelings(Fillings)...Did i Hurt em Yet?

Damn took you so long... Ill spit first bitch
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Took you so long to reply to my thread like you were D/R
This is the internet ...can’t turn this into physically fighting
You don’t understand this to new to the game Young Mic
Im the ~G~ …you the kid wanting to suck some guys dick
"Ain't Need 2 Know Who I Am"(your sig) who is this T.I.
Who you think you are,im still sittin here waiting for a reply
And if I'm…….. holdin a weapon you better get off me slut
Because I'll smash yah mug…….. like breakin a coffee cup
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(typed in 4 min. or less)

up?...... damn mine came from the top of the brain...

Voted For: Shazz

Took you so long to reply to my thread like you were D/R
This is the internet ...can’t turn this into physically fighting
3...didn't rhyme and was kinda weak as a punch
You don’t understand this to new to the game Young Mic
Im the ~G~ …you the kid wanting to suck some guys dick
4....ok punch..but gay is played out now
"Ain't Need 2 Know Who I Am"(your sig) who is this T.I.
Who you think you are,im still sittin here waiting for a reply
5...good..liked the 1st line..
And if I'm…….. holdin a weapon you better get off me slut
Because I'll smash yah mug…….. like breakin a coffee cup
4...ok...

Kid u Gon Get Ripped-appart, is it all Clear like Crystal-Right?//
Never mind Kid so Retarted He Couldn't Tell da Difference Between his Left-n-Right,
2...elementary diss...i mean..couldn't tell differnce between left n right?..wtf?
Yet still he Think he gon be da Winner on this//
Da winners name Starts with a Y an Ends with a C on this Spit,
3...SG...not much of a punch
Give it up kid an i Don't mean it in a Wrong Way so don't Get it Twisted like a Rain-Bow//
I Spit so Much in All Different Directions might as well Call him my "Stained-Hoe",
3...Sg again...
Let Go u Ain't gonna Win, Truly u Ain't number 1//
50 dat's your Number or Should i Say Number 101,
3...rhymes 1 with 1 and weak punch
Still u can't see this kid a fake,Like a Golden Tooth in a Mouth Placed//
See as I Replace his Rhymes like Cavities waitin to be Filled-up With Feelings(Fillings)...Did i Hurt em Yet?
5...finnaly a decent bar

Ok..SHazz got this to me.
YM..first thing you gotta do is fix up your structure.Don't put this(//) at the end of ur shit.And get some better punches.I mean..couldn't tell differnce between left n right?WTF is that?I heard someone say that to someone else in elementary skool.And you wanna use it in a battle?Nah.Can't do that shit.Only decent bar was the last one.

Vote-Shazz

Mmmmm..... coo
uppin

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Voted For: Shazz

Shazz
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Took you so long to reply to my thread like you were D/R
This is the internet ...can’t turn this into physically fighting
You don’t understand this to new to the game Young Mic
Im the ~G~ …you the kid wanting to suck some guys dick
"Ain't Need 2 Know Who I Am"(your sig) who is this T.I.
Who you think you are,im still sittin here waiting for a reply
And if I'm…….. holdin a weapon you better get off me slut
Because I'll smash yah mug…….. like breakin a coffee cup
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.:YouNg.MiC:.
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Kid u Gon Get Ripped-appart, is it all Clear like Crystal-Right?//
Never mind Kid so Retarted He Couldn't Tell da Difference Between his Left-n-Right,
Yet still he Think he gon be da Winner on this//
Da winners name Starts with a Y an Ends with a C on this Spit,
Give it up kid an i Don't mean it in a Wrong Way so don't Get it Twisted like a Rain-Bow//
I Spit so Much in All Different Directions might as well Call him my "Stained-Hoe",
Let Go u Ain't gonna Win, Truly u Ain't number 1//
50 dat's your Number or Should i Say Number 101,
Still u can't see this kid a fake,Like a Golden Tooth in a Mouth Placed//
See as I Replace his Rhymes like Cavities waitin to be Filled-up With Feelings(Fillings)...Did i Hurt em Yet?
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Flow:shazz
Structure:shazz
Word Play:.:YouNg.MiC:.
Metaphors:shazz
Punches:shazz
Personals:.:YouNg.MiC:.
Creativity:.:YouNg.MiC:.
Enjoyment:shazz
Vote:shazz

Explanation:YouNg.MiCs lines were played as hell...and long as, shazz had decent punchlines and got my vote..
no haten but you both need to elevate....werd

can i get an RTF..they in my sig

aight coo ill rtf honestly
By tommorow the latest


uppin--------------------------------------------- only can do this once every 3 hourz damn.

Voted For: Shazz

meh at this battle but shazz did type in 4 min young mic im guessin this iz ya first battle cuz ya shit was wack as hell (no d/r) dont put slashes like that all the time thats very newbish you oonly had one good punch and that was the stained hoe line anyway your lines were way overstretched, and your structure was wayyyy offf join a crew and get into elevation shazz gets this vote

werd, yo im straight uppin on the RTF, and we uppin on votes with this battle.........................

uppin.--------------------------------------------

This was feedback posted for Shazz
 

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This was feedback posted for Shazz
 

This is such a whack battle. I'm too dissapointed to vote..

Specially .:YouNg.MiC:.

If you guys want help, just ask..

Soul Rebel You will not be dissapointed to vote again sorry for your time.
Uppin

Voted For: Shazz

Shazz-some decent lines.Got a lil basic at times tho.At the end tho..you ended up using a lot of threats.Threats is good for like set-ups n filler..but as a punch itself..it's blah.But overall..good.

Young MIc-WTF!?!??that shit was horrible.Just by lookin at it..i saw u was a newb.That structure suked.No one puts those lines at the end of they shit,NO ONE.Forced ass multis too.Horrible.

Vote-Shazz

k coo. ...................................uuppin..

Voted For: Shazz

overall i'd have too say shazz got this one...he cam harder with the punches and his structure was good.....this was a good battle and i enjoyed both dropps....Young Mic work on your structure a bit and you'll be better alright peace fam

v/Shazz