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GrEeN PaRtY! vs AITZ
Battle Rules:
6 bars/ 12 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting punchline it up.. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-07-05 at 12:21 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. Expired battle win - close |
GrEeN PaRtY! has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-05 11:56 PM.
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AITZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-05 12:01 AM.
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green party doesnt no what its like to get crafty
i punch sharply to leave this cat apart-badly you could never devour this, with your cowardness nothing but full powers that are rich, watch me merk this bitch hurtness is throwin through this keystyle attack formin purpleness around his eyes like a punch from the school bratz got the crowd sayin "i felt this" when my flow makes there eyes become open because ur response is like "whats wrong kid" he will never get a promotion fuck a sucker punch ill fly straight at you while ur watching then take ur bitch to lunch because u never touched her heart with choking... |
Suckin kangaroo sacs "down under" that name?
So ashamed, that ya got sick from it mayne.. Cum guzzlin "outback" dude w/ an attitude.. This homos wearin panties in shop, fondlin cattle tools. Hoin' through battles fingerin his anus... knowin who this baby rattles w/ is too big for the game. Cus, i been ready for this thrillin win.. While you bask-in dick grippin w/ ya double chin. Son, lookin ten in ya pic, fingers as long as stilts.. No true hustler rocks hot pink wallpaper in his sigs bitch.... |
Straight verse man, hopefully peeps will vote......
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straight back at ya......vote up ppl....................
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Voted For: AITZ
yo you where kinda soft hitting again but you won aight you need to really elevate and get better becuase your tiered rymes aint gonna work agian....and battle beter people becuase all the guys you battle suck...but yeah once again your verse flowed alot better so thats why you win green:you need to get better at personals and prewrite your verses a few days in advance becuase all of your bars where wack, sorry for telling the truth but just elevate... vote=A PLEASE RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207228 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: GrEeN PaRtY!
GreenParty Suckin kangaroo sacs "down under" that name? So ashamed, that ya got sick from it mayne.. 8/10-Came out with a nice personal in ya opener Cum guzzlin "outback" dude w/ an attitude.. This homos wearin panties in shop, fondlin cattle tools. 6/10-Kinda weak...didnt come hard enough man Hoin' through battles fingerin his anus... knowin who this baby rattles w/ is too big for the game. 5/10-Didn't really make sense to me Cus, i been ready for this thrillin win.. While you bask-in dick grippin w/ ya double chin. 7/10-Alright personal Son, lookin ten in ya pic, fingers as long as stilts.. No true hustler rocks hot pink wallpaper in his sigs bitch.... 8/10-Nice personal in ya closer too Green-No real punches in ya battle, was mostly personals....structure was alright, but could use improvement Overall-34/50 AITZ green party doesnt no what its like to get crafty i punch sharply to leave this cat apart-badly 6/10-weak opener, rhymed seemed forced you could never devour this, with your cowardness nothing but full powers that are rich, watch me merk this bitch 8/10-A pretty good line nice punch n multi hurtness is throwin through this keystyle attack formin purpleness around his eyes like a punch from the school bratz 6/10-Weak got the crowd sayin "i felt this" when my flow makes there eyes become open because ur response is like "whats wrong kid" he will never get a promotion 7/10-2nd line was alright, 1st was weak though fuck a sucker punch ill fly straight at you while ur watching then take ur bitch to lunch because u never touched her heart with choking... 5/10-Last bar made no sense to me at all AITZ-Work on punches n personals in ya battle...structure was off too, need to elevate some Overall-32/50 Vote-Green Green took this one by a hair....a pretty weak overall battle...neither came with any decent punches....Green took it because he at least had some personals in his drop. You both need to try and elevate and get some better vocab |
uppin this ......................................!
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Voted For: AITZ
holla at ya boi when you done wit dis...you got my vote. nice punches and multis...up ya flow tho. 100 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for GrEeN PaRtY!
good battle to both im just leavign feed because it was close but green i liked the fact that you had some personals but the lines that werent personals i felt were lacking
other guy your verse was good but you lacked in personals but most of your punches hit harder |however i think green would have gotten my vote for having personals thanks for leaving feed on the cs 7 deadly sins collab |
aiight..........werd up ill holla at you...lol weeeeeeeeeerrrrdddddddddd uppin 4 votes..............
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2 DQ'd votes....thats fuckt up.....yo we uppin 4 votes yall
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Voted For: AITZ
this battle......eh this battle was aight, both came aight with personals and punches but aitz structure was better, so overall aitz gets this win v/aitz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for GrEeN PaRtY!
polllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz................... .....
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uppin.........werd................................ .....
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werd......................3 DQ'd votes.............thats fuckt up...o well yall need to explain ya shyt more...pCe.............uppin
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Voted For: AITZ
Flow: Aitz Structure: Aitz Word Play: Green Party! Punches: Aitz Personals: Aitz Creativity: Green Party! Enjoyment: Both Vote: Aitz Explanation: Green Party if u look closely... his sig pic color its red. not pink... But overall Aitz came harder on this one. |
werd...good explaination bro, thats how i do it sometimes...
uppin 4 votes on this, lets get it closed |
This was feedback posted for GrEeN PaRtY!
alright both verses were weak ass hell.. i mean ur vocab was aiight but both of ur structures we way off and both of ur punches werent hittin hard at all.. just elevate on ur verses.. thats all. u know... so i say its a TIE!!!!!!
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a TIE???, dude, you gotta be jokin. i had 3 DQ'd votes...
im uppin on votes..and i will RTF! |
Voted For: AITZ
Green Party- You had ok punches and bad personals…. I didn’t really get a lot of it, The structure was a lot better this is was really close battle in my opinion- I had to re read this… If you would have stretched it out a little more you would have got my vote AITZ- You had ok punches and ok personals, and the flow was pretty good I liked it, structure was coo too could have been better but who cares. Overall good punches and I liked your verse better This is no D/R I don’t even know you V/Aitz |
aiight, cheers on the vote......hell i don't know you either..but chyeah nice lookin out
we uppin.. |
I got your votes DQ'd because they weren't explained...and neither was Kriz's vote,seems fishy to me...uppin this ya'll.
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This was feedback posted for AITZ
u lose cuz ur shit is whack...............HATE FEEDBACK
TRY EXPLAINING UR VOTES WITH GOOD REASONS!!!!!! n MAYBE U GET UM BACK |
Voted For: AITZ
This battle was pretty much one sided, GreenParty!-Ur verse was not quite appealing.You had very poor structurre that made the flow unbearable.Ur punches were poor and weak hitting, And had some forced rhymes in there....Ur personals were forced and not hard hitting......you have a lot of room for elevation. Aitz-Ur verse was not that enjoyable either, It was poorly structuredWhich didnt really effect it, due to the mediocore punches that landed softly....due to ur good wordplay and such.Ur personals were also up there wit ur punches...although nothing special.I felt some of ur lines was stretched but still had a better verse. V/AITZ please rtf in my sig links, since i kindly voted on urs...be sure to leave honest explained vote.....unless u want this vote to be dq'd :thumbup: |
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dude, your fuckin trippin??....ok ok ok i understand the unexplained votes.. but see the rapchat site in my sig...click on it n check out how we do our voting...same way that kriz cat does it, he just probally from another site like me... werd |
This was feedback posted for GrEeN PaRtY!
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uppin......................werd.
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Voted For: GrEeN PaRtY!
AITZ: Hardly any punches. In text, you need to use wordplay, metaphors, disses etc, against your opponent. Your verse flowed well, but lacked hard hits. Green Party: A lot better. You attempted wordplay, personals, and other witty shit. Flow was good too. You won this because you came at your opponent harder. |
ok..im feeling that, uppin on votes.
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Voted For: AITZ
Hey AITZis the battle u told me to vote for you on in AIM ? if not my bad dawg.. but AITZ took this hands down his punches were betta, Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
have i got you on aim?....that vote looks like a rickridin vote "is this the battle you told me to vote on in aim" get the fuck outta here!
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This was feedback posted for GrEeN PaRtY!
checkin pollz.zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.............
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uppin for the rest of these damn votes ppl!.............
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Voted For: AITZ
green party doesnt no what its like to get crafty i punch sharply to leave this cat apart-badly cool you could never devour this, with your cowardness nothing but full powers that are rich, watch me merk this bitch thats ok hurtness is throwin through this keystyle attack formin purpleness around his eyes like a punch from the school bratz could of been better got the crowd sayin "i felt this" when my flow makes there eyes become open because ur response is like "whats wrong kid" he will never get a promotion ok fuck a sucker punch ill fly straight at you while ur watching then take ur bitch to lunch because u never touched her heart with choking... could of been better not bad couple of good hits in there not bad Suckin kangaroo sacs "down under" that name? So ashamed, that ya got sick from it mayne.. i wasnt likeing this Cum guzzlin "outback" dude w/ an attitude.. This homos wearin panties in shop, fondlin cattle tools. ok Hoin' through battles fingerin his anus... knowin who this baby rattles w/ is too big for the game. could of been better Cus, i been ready for this thrillin win.. While you bask-in dick grippin w/ ya double chin. ha that was funny Son, lookin ten in ya pic, fingers as long as stilts.. No true hustler rocks hot pink wallpaper in his sigs bitch.... i didnt like the ending sorry there was a hit or 2 in there and there was more weak hits a few that reallt wasnt good at all but a good battle can you please RTF |
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