steal THA SHOW FREESTYLE PEEP! DROP LINKS!!!
 

replied to 20 grand n vendettas tracks, plus tha new senser joint...

aight well i got into freestyle mode yesterday wen i was chillin w/ my boys n i realized i havent recorded a free in a loooonnnng time... so i figured i would do sumn up real quick today... i mixed it a lil off beat i think n then didnt save tha session.. but yea. tell me what u think of my free abilities.. i threw in a quick hook to end it off on.. so thats the only writen part.. tell me whats good

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k this no fuckin joke....u and me - collab - my mixtape :cussing: .. u will gimme a 16 or sumin or ima assinate ur ass motherfucker!!! POW


PS - nice free...1/2 recycles but i do that when freeing...nice

lol, nah i think i spotted like 4 or 5 bars where ive said smn similar on, like the comb/casket and the nemesis benjamins lines.. but yea man sum days wen i free ill say tha same lines like 34324 times on accident. i hate it.. but yea thats y u keep writin n if u need a 16 let me know whats good

listening:
beat: i love it
Lyrics: yeah pretty good
Flow: pretty dope
Voice: your voice is always the same, try to change your voice a lil bit

overall good track
return the favor on : Mind Of A Psycho

never... lol.. thats my voice. i dunno how to change it. :)

Fuck you and your dope ass freestyling abilities :(

can i hear adlibs??? echoe is still too much, this is ok but what i do need to say is LMFAO @ this so called freestyle being better than any of writtens i can tell its not a freestyle, you punched-in thats how i can tell, and i can hear ad-libs... nice try, written or freestyled its still only average

^if i wanted a simians oppinion i would go to tha zoo... well i figured i would get at least 1 person who would say this.. so lemme dumb myself down to ur level n adress it now... 1st... there is no "adlibs" in fact i was gonna go thru n do adlibs but then i figured i would hear this.. i did put in sum effects such as reverb, will sumtimes make it sound more layered or full.. but i assure u.. no adlibs.. ;) 2nd.. where in tha fuck did i punch in. if u listen to parts where even i do switch up real quick, u can clearly hear a deep breath being taken.. also... i really dont give a fuck about a "leadys" oppinion.. ur a hater. look above mufucka, i get plenty of love w/o having to adress ur ballsackonthachin wearin ass... but for fun i figured i would shyt on ur "theory" of this not bein off tha domeness.. also if this is "average" u must be soooooo below tha line ur buried in china......










BITCH!!! lol.. *brushes off nutsack for leady to come back n dirty them up again* matter fact... stay outta all my threads u mr. bean lookin homothug..

rofl @ you, your truely pathetic my man.... and you punched in cos one point i heard you saying a word and before the word was properly finished your next line had started, maybe thats down the amount of reverb you used??? i dont know but it sounded like a fucked up punch-in to me, and theres quite alot of times it sounds like you have ad-libs and a couple times sounds like ad-libs are off/out of time.

if your going to blame your editing then that goes to prove you noticed yourself what im talking about and just takes away from your attempt to deminish what i said.... wether its pre-written or freestyled, still dont change the fact i can freestyle better, and freestyle for ten times longer

lol...

w/e.. if this is a freestyle.. its dope as hell.. even if its a written.. its still dope lol... more dope than what most kids write.. ahhh shyt i gotta start writting like this agen lol.. but freal if this is a freestyle.. keep writting.. cuz than u'll ge more dope :thumbup: but leady.. im still cooler than you! :) muhahahaha

hmmm. what part, ive just listened to it like 3 times n cant find anywhere that ur talkin about... so i cant really tell u why.. maybe cuz it duznt exist... n i did cut up sum parts to put it on beat a lil better, nothin major, but still no punch ins...


i never blamed my editing skills for anything... i said taht sumtimes a lil splash of reverb will make it seem fuller, seeing as reverb is a type of warmer/echo, mayb u hear a slight echo of words causing retarded ppl like u to assume that its an overdub... i dont care about how well u free, how long u free. how much ur on ur own cockpeice.. i never sat here n challenged ne one to a freestyle battle.. i posted up a quick free, i coulda done longer.. but i thought fuck, just showcase sum free cuz ppl always b askin if i can freestyle... you are not of any benefit to me.. maybe u think that ull get noticed if u argue w/ me.. but im done. play ur kiddy shyt elsewhere. i've proven ur assumptions wrong. no more talking is necessary on my part.. pz

ahhh stop with the beef.. live in PEACE!! woo hoo.. im listening to that song called the new tomorrow.. pretty cool

first of all, i know what reverb is and you use way too much of it, your vocals sound un-natural.. secondly im not about to listen to suttin agen just to point out where it sounded like u punched in, but if need be ill do it later when im back from my show... and honestly it didnt sound like reverb made it sound ad-libbed.... cos it sounded in a different tone of voice to the main vocal... but ill listen again later and break it down better just for you

pleez... dont bother.. go do ur "show" aka standing at the middle skool w/ a trenchcoat on "show"ing all the small children what u have underneat it..... hmmmm uh oh..l;ol

thats funny concidering i left school over 4 years ago, kids finished school for the weekend over an hour ago aswell and the fact the school is in-accesible anytime after 6pm and my set starts at 11:30pm

nice try though

Hey i rapped for my skewl rally woo hoo.. was hella tite lol.. 1000 students!! lol.. and about half of em gave me props wooo hooo.. but yeah leady just stop beefing ahh... its the net..u dont have to prove ne points..

i wasnt talkin about rapping at a skool lol... im talkin about those sicko's who expose themselfs to kids...lol

oh........... hahah my bad :( im jst filipino lol

yall sleepy or sumn???

lol wow you've improved nice drop omen but yeah ya voice needa switch up a bit for certain tracks you cant always sound monotone feel me...and another thin try not soundin like your readin some times cuz mannn ya bars are good but you write'em wayyy too long cut down on syllables be and yo flow along wit your bars would be a real good mix na'mean...and as for this leady cat son i engineer tracks and acapellas for a livin basically and there was no punch in i peeped it twice to see if there was any fact to what you were sayin and there isnt...and thats beside the fact...lets say you peeped any of my songs and i so happened to punch in it really dont mean shit...cuz i can spit the whole song to you chorus and all without soundin like i ran outta breath so be Ez junior 1ne..

good lookin sense

damn this is hottness for a freestyle man, i still can't really do this shit, startin to get beta but no way i cud go that long and still keep it dope, nice piece

lyrics are gud, not great but its a freestyle so they good, flow is fire on point from beginning to end and presense is good also...

this was a nice piece rite here

keep droppin

pz

word good looks. btw, the producer of this beat ended up peepin me lace it, n wants to get on a more serious tip. so expect another banger sooon. cuz his beats are flame. perpetualproductions, look em up on sc...

i heard u punch in....... not a very believable freestyle....... i heard that comb and casked thing on soc..... ok freestyle considerin u recycled and punch in..... if u take that out tho, it was pretty dope

damn i gotta give u props for this...if it was a free...shit was dope...u said u mixed off beat a lil...so i wont talk about flow....some of the lines were pretty dope....the multies stood out the most to me...good shit....

bah. im not gonna adress tha punch in issues again... instead of sayin "you punched in" tell me where u hear this "punch in" and i can tell u exactly y ur retarded... lol... but yea thanks alot for peepin... o n that soc line, i already said above that it was recycled... freestyles are notorious for reusing lines.. sorry thats how tha game go... but ppl really needa read the above posts b4 repeatin themselfs... appreaciate it greatly tho

Sound like dude from dilated ppl...wit a mix of Chino XL..a lil off beat tho'


good shit..for a free...7.5/10