Our Sins
 

this were ya drop ya verse...so BC could find them easier

heres mine:

I was born to a Life of Crime,Speakin through my ryhmes
Dad gone at the wrong time,So I settled for nicks N dimes
Moms cared but wasnt around,My life like a lost and found
Crazy as it sound,My whole life was mainly shifting down
At school causin problems,Made my moms life a living hell
Cant seem to solve them,Rap was onlything keepin me from jail
Denial it seemed I act,I have love for my fam and that was fact
Seemed like I kept leaving the station but forgetting my tracks
I swear if I could take everything back,This wouldnt be me
Wish my Sins would get lost in its tracks,So my mom could see....

Word... thankz for making the forum.. ima key mine later on tonight

I'll key in tommorow afternoon...BC's requests sucked my creative juices lol

lol^ sorry .. but yeah ill do mine tomorrow

Living a life of sin, not because of my action but metaphorically,
Simply tryna be me but riduculed by unwritten rules given to me,
Pondering why it is that I can't puff and pass when it's my turn,
Laundering? No I'm just tryna walk out my crib and be able to return,
Simple times don't come to easy so I take nothing for granted,
Proud to be me cuz my outlook on life just happens to be slanted,
Living the life of the middle class when clearly that ain't the case,
Speaking to me ain't like Tyrone, known only to be black in the face,
The witest black guy you know, Oreo seems to be my denomination,
Is it my fault that I say Fuck the NBA, it's the X-Games I'm chasin,
Sorry though cuz busting gats, and chillin n the corner, it's my passion,
Easily I'd rather meet my soulmate instead of out constantly smashin,
Watchin my back for temptation, stumbling around for escape from my hell,
Taking the hard road cuz the easy answer is giving in and re-combining with cells,
I guess you could say that my sin to the world is not fittin the description,
Breaking outta the system, hoping to prove that stereotypes on me are fiction...


I just keyed this...tell me what to fix lol

dont fix anythin...leave it like dat..keyed this in 10 minutes....

As I remember what I saw when I was sitting in those steps
I recaptured the visions in my mind as I shivered on that death
Didn’t kno what to do bloody tears came down my cheeks as his
Did too........... didn’t have a clue but I wish I knew who did this
So I shivered there….clueless on what to do in my rocking chair
Cant sleep, or dream the nightmares take over me like an exorcist scare
The sleepless nights kills me inside it just keeps going on and on and builds
So scared on what to say or what I should do, scratches on my neck like gills
And the fact just attacked me in my face and hands that I killed my brother
In revenge that I killed myself when he also just did the same to my mother

This should be OM of September. Til I drop my next OM lol.

werd....

fucka 15characters

what yall writin for?

a collab...called our sins....

anymore room for meh?

^Yeah... ima key mine soon

k well what do i do 10 lines?

yea or w/e amount you wanna do

i'll do like 12 or somin...

Livin with stressin, a blessin to be honored by fate
At least I had chances, frustrated when I’d try hate
Proceedin with caution, protected my feedin passion
My sentence left empty, petrified by bleedin fashion
Donated with intoxicated organs of human particles
Pronounced a problem, profound from news articles
Give me just one moment, or seconds to taste a flavor
Predictin shame, & conflictin fame, too waste a favor
My sins captured, dissolved by all the abusive people
And I’m defined wrong, so I’m known horribly lethal
Tragically thrown, magically blown over the facts
So they understand my sin, and complete my tasks

let me in on this :)

^drop your 10 fool

you guys should come up with a different topic cs jsut did a 7 person collab on sins
do you have to be in the crew to get on this :)

^i would perfer being in the crew.. but if you want drop 10

I tried to stop, but i couldnt....I always did wrong
I would ride with my people & be out all night long
Walkin with a limp my gun in my pants,riding deep
Having enemy's left and right,gettin hard to sleep
Have one eye open at all time,..just to feel aware
Have Fun making your enemy's fear..& walk on air
Smoking Blunts..and Selling Tree's,...Its what i do
Having Shells stick to people heads like crazy glue
Making People swim with the fishes,Cus of a color
People falling,& watch there life span grow smaller
I cant change what ive done,Its my sins,...my life
Cus only time,ill settle down,is when i have my wife

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...110#post2428110

^there it is

and ysdat when you give me your verse ill edit it in

we have a dope collabo yo...:D

Thanks to your truly

*pops head*

Im wack :(

^at life too right?

:)

^Hah..

*Owned*

like a used car lot ay:)

*cough* your crew d/rs each other to try show unity whenreally you know my verse is more solid than any of your crews *cough*

But I still :love: yall

*doesnt commit*

you love everyone you lil queer:thumbup:

lol at ysdat sure :p

^your more playful then sex toys:)

^Word

well thats why girls like me and not you :)

^blah they just think your small wiener is cute

but honestly they like my big wiener:)

LOL...!

Thats why my girls always come back for more:)

and yours just leave dis-satisfied

I'll settle this. I pwn both your you with my dual penis action.

*takes penis out cuz all I see out of yall is vaginas*

*then realizes...oops its just Para,BC and LFS*

wow what a sausage fest.....

Daddy would you like some sausage? Daddy would you like some sausage? lol