Daubs vs Hotshh!
 

Battle Rules:

Livin Legendz VS The Establishment

2 day check, 2 day drop, not checking in results in a loss.

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No E-Style Votes (due to possible merge.)
No DR, just vote honestly.

600 posts to vote, Good Luck

Minimum posts to vote: 600

Check in by: 09-12-05 at 04:10 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

hotshh! has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-05 08:20 AM.

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-05 10:39 AM.

Look kid
I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat
Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets
22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot
U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets
LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out
Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts
"Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage
But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page
Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake
So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake
Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay
But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"?
(uk fucker)(avy WAS bush)

Fuck DR, not your fault like but make sure you people vote HONESTLY..

Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner..
And its true you cause RV PanIc...
..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!!
Switching it up...
Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout..
And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!!
Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity..
And he's is intouch with his inner child..
..when he snatches kids from the city!!
Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining..
And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!!
hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal..
Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!!
I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore..
Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof..
..even when hes sat on the floor!!

If needed:
PanIc > Pan Ice
hit the roof is an expression for angry, and the rest is simple wordplay.

Vote honestly, will RTF

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 

Both my homies. But one is crew... So go hotty go!

Hahaha, good battle you two. TE fo life.. :shoot:

safe man, no beef anyway whatever happens.

*Points magnum in SR's face*

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

pollz. fam..............................................

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 

checking this out....................................

Voted For: hotshh!

Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner..
And its true you cause RV PanIc...
..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!!
5.....decent....didn't like 1st line though and how is panic=pan-ice?..
Switching it up...
Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout..
And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!!
6...good
Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity..
And he's is intouch with his inner child..
..when he snatches kids from the city!!
3...this was weak..becuz..I mean..inner child?wtf?
Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining..
And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!!
3...no...c'mon...esspecially that 1st line..and stop with the explamation points...
hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal..
Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!!
5...decent..nothing spectacular..but decent
I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore..
Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof..
..even when hes sat on the floor!!
4...good concept with the whole hit the roof..but....sat on floor?

I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat
Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets
6...good
22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot
U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets
6...good...but would have hit harder if it wasn't for the set-up..if he got a good rec..don't mention it
LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out
Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts
3..played..i've heard this before
"Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage
But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page
5...good
Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake
So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake
6..hmm..good..but leaf lines are gettin played now...
Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay
But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"?
8...best bar in this battle..multis were nice too..

Ok..hotshh! got this.
Daubs..I thought you had some decent concepts,but ur wording was bad and so were ur set-ups.Such as the hit the roof line and the but of pistol.But then again..some lines were just based off bad concepts.Like..how is panic>pan-ice?Just like that..an E comes out of the word?And then...that snatchin kids line..now..ur concept was..touchin inner child?NO.A couple of multis in ur verse was abit forced too.

Vote-Hotshh!
Hit my battle up with 9th degree
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208431


Vote removed... Alias on Daub's blacklist

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 

Lol, Daubs has Mimesis' structure style. :O

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 

This battle was fucking garbage.

:wtf:

I'm really hoping you guys didn't try..

Yep.. I am just a stud.

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 

close battle, hotshh! edged it in my opinion.........LMAO @ that closer....:D :shoot:

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

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Hmmm.....

Well i tried a new structure cause my old one wouldnt have a chance, and deranged,
Pan IC < wordplay, IC = ice.


Oh well.

Uppping for you two. Get some votes in on this ish.

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This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

checking polls.......................................

Voted For: hotshh!

Daubs:

Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner..
And its true you cause RV PanIc...
..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!!
decent opener

Switching it up...
Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout..
And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!!
seen this concept before..

Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity..
And he's is intouch with his inner child..
..when he snatches kids from the city!!
cool

Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining..
And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!!
nice

hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal..
Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!!
alright

I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore..
Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof..
..even when hes sat on the floor!!
decent closer

Hotshh:

Look kid
I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat
Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets
decent opener

22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot
U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets
dope punch..

LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out
Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts
cool punch..

"Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage
But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page
decent

Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake
So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake
nice

Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay
But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"?
(uk fucker)(avy WAS bush)
alright closer

Overall Vote: hotshh, he came harder with the punchlines..pretty close and good battle..

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Voted For: hotshh!

Hotshh! verse

Look kid
I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat
Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets
^ hmm opener aight punch coulda been better though IMO

22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot
U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets
^ it's 23-3 lol...punch aight a lil self-g though (seems like the new thing)

LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out
Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts
^ good bar

"Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage
But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page
^ 1st line meh 2nd line aight

Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake
So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake
^ rhyme basic...punch aight though

Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay
But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"?
^ Please UK shit played out and i ain't jus saying that personal there though

(uk fucker)(avy WAS bush)

Daubs Verse

Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner..
And its true you cause RV PanIc...
..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!!
^ opener a bit meh not liking the structure

Switching it up...
Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout..
And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!!
^ punch aight the puss/blister things kinda on popped spots = played concept

Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity..
And he's is intouch with his inner child..
..when he snatches kids from the city!!
^ good bar not feelin the struc but punch itself was aight

Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining..
And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!!
^ don't get the 2nd line much to be honest wasn't feelin this much

hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal..
Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!!
^ aight bar rhyme was aight

I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore..
Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof..
..even when hes sat on the floor!!
^ lol good closer rhyme was coo name play and punch was aight best bar

Overall
Overall the main thing is consistancy...Daubs as much as you my mate and all...Hotshh got this...some bars you dropped weren't as good as Hotshh like the talkin vowels?...Hotshh had some alright bars no-1 had anything that jumped out to me IMO but i know you both are capible of droppin nice text on your good days...

V/Hotshh!

Fair enough, Talkin vowels, I > eye, I for the women, not eyes, meaning hes gay.
basic really.

This was feedback posted for hotshh!
 

hmm, hotshh had better punches to me....daubs was too giddy and gay....

word

Fuck you soul.

I know everyone mutha fuck.
.
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Voted For: hotshh!

Daubs

Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner..
And its true you cause RV PanIc...
..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!!
HaHa liked this rite here gud opener

Switching it up...
Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout..
And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!!
Okay nothing special but hit pretty gud, liked again

Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity..
And he's is intouch with his inner child..
..when he snatches kids from the city!!
HaHa liked this again…funny punch and gud wordplay

Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining..
And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!!
Not feeling this one

hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal..
Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!!
Okay not a great punch but it was creative and gud wordplay

I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore..
Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof..
..even when hes sat on the floor!!
Ha okay nice way to shut up shop…..good verse overall


Hotshh

I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat
Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets
nice opener gud wordplay and nice punch

22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot
U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets
hahahaha loved this this hit nice man, funny, creative…dope

LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out
Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts
O.k not great but o.k, clever but didn’t hit great to me

"Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage
But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page
HA again nice

Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake
So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake
Nah not feeling this one

Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay
But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"?
Gotta say very nice closer


Verdict =
really close battle both of y’all did ya thing no doubt and came with impressed, funny, creative verses, both had dope flow and wordplay, however I’ve gotta give this one to hotshh just slightly more consistent and his best punches hit harder on this occasion! Dope battle though….stay up!


Vote = Hotshh!

Not me my friend. My alias is F.oo not Shade of Eden. I don't know if they want me to say who they are. But why would I call my homie Daubs gay. Come on now man. I love you. :love:

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Its you or drakel anyway, i read it in a thread in TE.

Good Battle Daubs..........................................

Voted For: hotshh!

hotshh!:
I'll Bitchslap ya medley...cuz Daubs a rapping Deadbeat
Its no wonder Rv sleeps on your ass like Satin Bedsheets
Decent opener, the setup was actually better than the punch IMO, the whole "slept on" conept, although a tad played, could've been worded better.
22-4 Now you wanna wrestle me? ......Scrawny Faggot
U'll get "Clothelined" faster than Poor woman with Laundry Baskets
Aight punch here, was feeling this somewhat.
LL aint putting in work...them scared kids aint Thugged Out
Te'll leave ya whole "CampFire'd" ....like Careless Cub Scouts
Lol good shit, haven't seen this concept before.
"Hell hath no fury like a female scorned", I feel dis Whores Rage
But watch as Daubs touchdown without reading the Sports Page
Decent, not the best follow-up to your previous bar.
Now you Surfing in a Lake, I'll put a hurting on this Fake
So stay away from 'Loose Leaf' like you allergic to a Rake
Decent punch here, wordplay was meh.
Daub-ya bushy like ya avy Pussy, Sucks cause you Gay
But ass backwards like ya title kid " Fuck-a You, Kay"?
Personal was lacking here.

Not the best I've seen from hot, actually not really comparable to the good shit I've seen him drop.

Daubs:
Canoue not be a pussy? Doubt it, rowings utterly the meaner..
And its true you cause RV PanIc...
..like throwing cutelry in a freezer!!
Was feeling the setup, but the punch was subpar. It could've been worded better and been dope.
Switching it up...
Il make you squeal and serve you deaf,so hot whispers a shout..
And hotshh! rolls with puss....like throwin popped blisters about!!
Aight personal here
Bitch is a chick? yep,he hatches punches of a wicked simplicity..
And he's is intouch with his inner child..
..when he snatches kids from the city!!
Lol was feeling this.
Hes a pussy, watched a chick flick and he cried from the beggining..
And hot is only talkin vowels when says his eyes are for the women!!
Decent, I liked the concept but felt the whole bar just could've been formed better.
hotshh! is a Gangsta man, only rocks gold &'s fucked from the crystal..
Which also explains, the only arse he holds..is the butt of a pistol!!
Blah
I said this guys hot..RV said shh! try not to inflate his ego anymore..
Or his head may mistakedly hit the roof..
..even when hes sat on the floor!!
[b]Weak closer, not as good as it could've been.

Daubs, your verse had potential, but the wording on your concepts wasn't the greatest. That was your downfall here.

Both didn't drop too great IMO, so this battle was close...the unenjoyable type of close. However, hotshh! dropped just somewhat of a better verse.

V//hotssh!, and RTF @ the link in my sig or I'll eat your siblings.

never a KO.

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Obviously it's Drakel then.

Don't ever call me a hater..:(

I wont, i :love: you souly :cool:.................

Voted For: hotshh!

Good Battle

Hotshh! - your verse had really good wordplay. good punches throughout. i liked the campfire line the best. your opener was kinda played though. your closer was basic but still good. that loose leaf line was lame. i woulda liked to see some more personals in this verse but it was still solid. 8/10


Daubs - I was disappointed by your verse. I have seen you come with better verses. Your opener wasnt very good at all. it actually kinda sucked for an opener. the blister line was pretty funny though. you had few decent to good punches. the arse line also made me laugh. but the wordplay in some of them was real basic. overall i would give your verse a 7