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Status 09-11-05 11:26 PM

Technical vs Status
 
Battle Rules:
10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

this is gonna b a self glorifacation battle

if you dont know what this is then decline


Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 09-14-05 at 11:26 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed.. did not drop 10 lines

System 09-12-05 05:00 PM

Technical has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-05 05:00 PM.

Technical 09-12-05 05:09 PM

Technical's the greatest one out, carry the heat, but I dont 'pack irons'
I smack liars, one 'punch' from Tech'll have u rockin eye patches like pirates..
I'm 2 smooth, I been came up in dis thang dude, ahead of my prime 2 soon..
came to piss on you fools, I'm da best, wonder why u 'gassed', cuz u 'aint shit' (think)
yall life goals is aimless, while my STATUS is known to get my balls in holes like Naismith!..lol
got nothing to praise with?..yall niggas is 'spares' well I 'jacked' it..fuck a jacket........
I get real Technical with this rap shit..yall niggas still studyin poets like me n Hamlet!..smh
yall niggas never smarked the matches..while I sparked n matched it..I'm da best from Bed-Stuy
spit at ur crew n watch ur friends fry, I spit wif spice, yall niggas gotta add salt to ur shit like french fries..lol

...shit i aint even know it was 15 minutes afta checkin..lol..8 minute keystyle..
hit me up for a rematch yo..any type..cuz this wasnt really though out..lol

Status 09-12-05 05:09 PM

yo be............im gonnna check in later on tonight...........

Technical 09-12-05 05:11 PM

thats cool, I didnt even know u only had 15 mins to write..so i wrote that in the last 3 minutes B..I want a rematch whether I win or lose..cuz this wasnt weel thought it..i aint see the topic till late eitha..lol

Status 09-12-05 05:34 PM

aight but yo im doing home work right now thats why i said i will check in later on tonight alright.............

Technical 09-12-05 06:31 PM

yea aite,,thats cool fam..I might go outside anyway..so post up when ya can

System 09-13-05 02:41 AM

Status has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-05 02:41 AM.

Status 09-13-05 02:42 AM

technikal, man your garbage kid, already admitted to me he probably lost so i didnt try that hard....lol ownage

Im so bright` that’s why I stay on top like ice your in cup
You really think your phat` watch how I literally lighten` you up
Technically this battle is useless like wearing sunglasses at night
Cuz You couldn’t see me Cumming if you turned on a black light
You better act` rite, and play your part in this scene-stupid
Couldn’t get rich or die trying like the game and g unit*
I’m doper than a snoop dogg piss test, go ahead and try me
After this battle I have you under ground like the Chinese
This is straight freestyle kid so don’t ask me if I can-bust
Watch your head and shoulders; I come off the top like dandruff

*that bar is about the 50 cent movie coming out, because technical has THE GAME all over sig and shit





This is a self glorification battle remember that

Deranged 09-13-05 06:38 PM

Voted For: Status

Im so bright` that’s why I stay on top like ice your in cup
You really think your phat` watch how I literally lighten` you up
6...liked the 1st line more
Technically this battle is useless like wearing sunglasses at night
Cuz You couldn’t see me Cumming if you turned on a black light
4...umm...decent..1st line seemed like a diss?
You better act` rite, and play your part in this scene-stupid
Couldn’t get rich or die trying like the game and g unit*
2...nah..ain't like it...n again..1st line seemed to diss
I’m doper than a snoop dogg piss test, go ahead and try me
After this battle I have you under ground like the Chinese
7...good
This is straight freestyle kid so don’t ask me if I can-bust
Watch your head and shoulders; I come off the top like dandruff
5...good concept..but u already used a top line already with the ice one

Technical's the greatest one out, carry the heat, but I dont 'pack irons'
I smack liars, one 'punch' from Tech'll have u rockin eye patches like pirates..
6....good
I'm 2 smooth, I been came up in dis thang dude, ahead of my prime 2 soon..
came to piss on you fools, I'm da best, wonder why u 'gassed', cuz u 'aint shit' (think)
4..wordplay was dope wit the gass/shit one..but that's a diss..
yall life goals is aimless, while my STATUS is known to get my balls in holes like Naismith!..lol
got nothing to praise with?..yall niggas is 'spares' well I 'jacked' it..fuck a jacket........
3...meh..it's ite...
I get real Technical with this rap shit..yall niggas still studyin poets like me n Hamlet!..smh
yall niggas never smarked the matches..while I sparked n matched it..I'm da best from Bed-Stuy
4..poor rhymin..seemed to diss a bit too
spit at ur crew n watch ur friends fry, I spit wif spice, yall niggas gotta add salt to ur shit like french fries
4..dissin a bit again..but ite

Well...this was so-so for a self glorifing battle.
But i think I have to go with Status.
Technical had some ite lines..like the pirate/eye patch one.But the thing is..he had more lines that seemed to diss as opposed to self glorify.Like the gassed/ain't shit one..that was nice wordplay..but it's a diss.And that hamlet line...french fries..smarked matches...n a few more in there..they were dissin.Status had a line that seemed to diss..but he self glorified more/

So my vote goes to status..
Vote-Status
Rtf in sig...........

Status 09-13-05 09:21 PM

yo im doing home work right now but i will rtf the faovr later on tonight

word is bond

Technical 09-13-05 09:34 PM

yea so, it's still a BATTLE..whether it's a self gloryfying BATTLE or wateva...still a BATTLE...

Status 09-13-05 09:39 PM

NO no
thats why i told you if you dont know what a slef glorifing battle is then dont accept

sorry bro..........but yo i can get you a rmatch but im doing homework ....if i dont pass then i dont graduate..ya feel

Status 09-14-05 11:35 PM

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King Solo 09-18-05 12:16 AM

Voted For: Status

i don't really like these battles cuz self-glorifying is wack....

but check it,

TECHNICAL - you really didnt do anything creative at all, the opening bar was merely average because the concepts used to big yourself up were played. then you had that one off line that didnt seem to fit anywhere with a bar. ure wordplay was aight in places, u had a couple of multies going on, more so at the end but overall the verse was too basic and lacked any kind of creativity, best bar was probably the hamlet one and that was still weak. OVERALL - 4/10


STATUS - nice verse, not as good as i wud've expected but you didnt try i can see. the opening bar was prolly the weakest, played concepts and it just seemed corny and childish. i liked the 'cumming' line with the black light, even though it may seem homo it was still amusing. u had a bit of aight wordplay, lacked some of ure real creativeness, and the closer though, that was funny, the concept has been used a few times but you made it funny still. OVERALL - 6/10


V/ - STATUS

plz rtf on one of my battles, links are in my siggy. :thumbup:

Status 09-19-05 02:56 AM

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Status 09-19-05 05:49 PM

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Status 09-20-05 03:40 AM

yo if this dont get closed real soon im just gonna wint he faster way


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