Deranged vs 9th Degree
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-13-05 at 02:48 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.


Win by forfeit

9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-05 02:00 PM.

Deranged has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-05 02:10 PM.

8-0 after a month and you're pitiful still
8 lines shows De's Range is as minimal as his skill
So you're crazy, eh? Must be, thinkin' you blew through vets
I'm flippin' this bird, right out the fuckin' Cuckoo's nest
Dude's to stressed, but come against me keyin' too hype
I'll break an 'rm, and I'm not shutting down your previous site
Reading it right? You probably do have a loose screw, hater
So take this personal, 'cuz no one answers yours in newspapers

Understand everything in both verses or don't vote. G'luck D. :thumbup:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186217




ur verses are trash so put it in ya purses n gas for tryna pile-it to demise
& u complainin about the newb land..when ur the pilot to their flights?^^
ur just the clueless one here who's grippin for the better guess
n u dig-gree-east(dig-grease)so it's no wonder you slippin to wateva's left
all done bucked n ur album suks n stoning'z wat'd it take us to cop-it
& I read ur verses to the kor-an(koran) realized it won't make you a profit/prophet
Blokka,Blokka?..u whack..n yet you'd still race round just to get n tell
& the K's in ur user title'd make all-call-eyes(alkali) to this cuz u just met-a-L

READ HERE
3rd bar-his sig is people gettin stoned to death.And the koran states that criminals should be stoned to death...if you don't know what the koran is..don't vote

4th bar-his user title says Blokka,Blokka..with the extra K.And "K" in the periodic table is alkali...which is a metal.

Understand the rest too or don't vote :thumbup:

word....good battle dawg....i'm out...got to go n sleep..

1.

Word, this one should be close. Let's get some voting started, kids.

uppin.............................................

This was feedback posted for Deranged
 

checkin pollz, dont feel like voten cuz it was pretty even match...............................

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

Lmao.

Deranged still be on that gay tip.

Dude is garbage.

uh-uh.

hurry up n set our battle up.

Yeah, I will soon.

You better go research my posts in LL for the past 4 or so months while you wait.. or otherwise you will have nothing to talk about.

I already got my verse from when i posted last time.... in my head...or at least the concepts..so i ain't got to search for nothing :thumbup:

uppin once more before i go to bed

So you have my quotes memorized?

That's kind of sad.

Voted For: Deranged

oh shit yo that vese was hella dope, lol

your first line was kinda wack but other than that first bar you did real good.....second bar was kinda forcd with the words but still good shit, i kinda liked the bar alil and i under stood what your where trying to do...3rd bar was pretty well thought out but kinda a lil too complex i didnt understand it until i the explanation and it was pretty decent...4rth bar was hella dope i like the way you used the kk to metal and meatal was spelt like he just met a L...dope shit.........

9th your verse really lagged bro...i think i got to start stepping my game up a lil bit..deranged is making me look bad...
9th your RM line was dope but everythign else was garbage....

good shit de.

I didn't know incredibly forced wordplay, horribly worded punches, and "met-a-l" lines were still considered dope. Or maybe Status is just a dumbshit. Oh well, uppin'.

^ Lmao.

Status voted against me in my battle with Deranged too.

But, of course, K Trini had me DQed, but Status be all up on Trini's jock and shit.

mimesis....shut ur mouth n go set-up the battle up already.

uppin.

This was feedback posted for Deranged
 

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This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

Checking polls.

*watches my wordplay go above 9th degree's head*

Ok..

So u trying to say..that punches..that are flat out weak and played..are considered dope?Look at ur fuckin verse.You had a minimum/d's-range line..which has been used to death...n not just in battles..BUT IN THE CYPHER!!kids are able to freestyle the punches that ur able to make in an hour's time?U had a cukoo's nest line with a forced rhyme..and not to mention..the punch itself was fukin weak.An RM line that self glorified.And y is rippin on my previous site a worthy diss?And then..ur last bar...the only attempt of word play in ur verse.And it was basic.I remember memisis tellin me in our battle that one sllyable wordplay was played..yet u go n do it..and everyone's on ur jock sayin ur shit's dope.And go read that met-a-l line again.It's based of ur user title wit all the K's n shit.Alkali/all-call-eyes..metal/met-a-l.Is that so fuckin hard for you dumbass?And Not to mention u only had 2 personals....one played n the other SG.i had personals in every bar...personal wordplay.U had one line with wordplay..and it was general dissing with the newpaper shit.Whackness at it's finest.

And then u complaining on status's vote?...STFU.

^^ur so called..."dope" wordplay :rolleyes:



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^^all of these came from the CYPHER.where people FREESTYLE.U had a hour or so to make sumtin..but u make a d's-range line which is played to death..and u complain about someone tellin their honest opinion?STFU.

Now...will you proceed to shut ur mouth?Or must I keep owning the fuck outta u with facts?

I did set it up.

You better start making another alias or something.

why ?

Me - 8-0 after a month and you're pitiful still
8 lines shows De's Range is as minimal as his skill
You're attacking me for using a played concept?
You - Blokka,Blokka?..u whack..n yet you'd still race round just to get n tell
& the K's in ur user title'd make all-call-eyes(alkali) to this cuz u just met-a-L
And by the way, having to explain your punches doesn't meant they're complex. This was just evidence as to how desperate you were to find a closer.

Me - So you're crazy, eh? Must be, thinkin' you blew through vets
I'm flippin' this bird, right out the fuckin' Cuckoo's nest
And how is this forced wordplay? Forced wordplay looks something like this...
You - ur just the clueless one here who's grippin for the better guess
n u dig-gree-east(dig-grease)so it's no wonder you slippin to wateva's left

Me - Dude's to stressed, but come against me keyin' too hype
I'll break an 'rm, and I'm not shutting down your previous site
Lol @ 'self-glory'. That's just incorrect there.

Me - Reading it right? You probably do have a loose screw, hater
So take this personal, 'cuz no one answers yours in newspapers
Basic wordplay, eh?
You - all done bucked n ur album suks n stoning'z wat'd it take us to cop-it
& I read ur verses to the kor-an(koran) realized it won't make you a profit/prophet
Yeah, so you actually had a decent concept, I'll giv you that. But it was worded horribly.

You - ur verses are trash so put it in ya purses n gas for tryna pile-it to demise
& u complainin about the newb land..when ur the pilot to their flights?^^
I won't even comment on this one.

Just to let you know..land<--think about that word.Pilots,Air,etc.
dig-grease-->slippery...east--->left..see the connections?
Just incase you don't understand it...which i don't think u do.
And explaining shit doesn't make it desperate..it's just something you make for the voters.Cuz there will always be some people who WILL BE slow.That's just something you make to insure that d/r's don't use that "i don't understand" shit in they votes.And as for the rest..it's just ur personal opinion..which is surely biased.

Voted For: 9th Degree

8-0 after a month and you're pitiful still
8 lines shows De's Range is as minimal as his skill
6...decent personal, cud be worded a lot better but still funny in its basic element.
So you're crazy, eh? Must be, thinkin' you blew through vets
I'm flippin' this bird, right out the fuckin' Cuckoo's nest
6...LoL, first line was meh, but the second line made me laugh.
Dude's to stressed, but come against me keyin' too hype
I'll break an 'rm, and I'm not shutting down your previous site
7...dope, decent personal punch and a basic bit of wordplay for the personal.
Reading it right? You probably do have a loose screw, hater
So take this personal, 'cuz no one answers yours in newspapers
5...meh, i used the same concept against L.I. so it isn't as original.

OVERALL: 24/40


ur verses are trash so put it in ya purses n gas for tryna pile-it to demise
& u complainin about the newb land..when ur the pilot to their flights?^^
5...meh, ok punch with the wordplay, but not really a decent personal like you attempted it to be.
ur just the clueless one here who's grippin for the better guess
n u dig-gree-east(dig-grease)so it's no wonder you slippin to wateva's left
5...again, the wordplay was cool, but the punch lacked a lot in real affect.
all done bucked n ur album suks n stoning'z wat'd it take us to cop-it
& I read ur verses to the kor-an(koran) realized it won't make you a profit/prophet
6...better punch although the concept itself has been used and the wordplay wasn't all that special.
Blokka,Blokka?..u whack..n yet you'd still race round just to get n tell
& the K's in ur user title'd make all-call-eyes(alkali) to this cuz u just met-a-L
6...meh, concept not 100% original but still a decent punch.

OVERALL: 22/40


closer battle than i wud've imagined, 9th you didn't really come as good as you can. you had a consistent verse but nuthin really had anything special like you usually have. deranged u had some played concepts, some ok wordplya but i think that ure focus on the wordplay took away any real power in ure punches.

V/ - 9th Degree

9th you better RTF this time or i will revoke ure gangsta card :cool: werd (*Links are in my siggy*)

Upping

upp...............................................

uppin.............................................

This was feedback posted for Deranged
 

checkin tha pollllzzzzz............ keep at it homiez

Blah @ being slept on. No wonder I don't battle much outside leagues and tourneys anymore.

Oh yeah, uppin'.

uppin this fuckin shit!!!!!!!!!

fuck..............................................

This was feedback posted for Deranged
 

Checking polls....................................

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

Checking this out....................................

Voted For: 9th Degree

Deranged
ur verses are trash so put it in ya purses n gas for tryna pile-it to demise
& u complainin about the newb land..when ur the pilot to their flights?^^
Weak..
ur just the clueless one here who's grippin for the better guess
n u dig-gree-east(dig-grease)so it's no wonder you slippin to wateva's left
Nope...
all done bucked n ur album suks n stoning'z wat'd it take us to cop-it
& I read ur verses to the kor-an(koran) realized it won't make you a profit/prophet
Easy wordplay..
Blokka,Blokka?..u whack..n yet you'd still race round just to get n tell
& the K's in ur user title'd make all-call-eyes(alkali) to this cuz u just met-a-L
Played concept..

9th Degree
8-0 after a month and you're pitiful still
8 lines shows De's Range is as minimal as his skill
Word..
So you're crazy, eh? Must be, thinkin' you blew through vets
I'm flippin' this bird, right out the fuckin' Cuckoo's nest
Not bad..
Dude's to stressed, but come against me keyin' too hype
I'll break an 'rm, and I'm not shutting down your previous site
Dope wordplay..
Reading it right? You probably do have a loose screw, hater
So take this personal, 'cuz no one answers yours in newspapers
Not to shabby..

9th Degree came way harder than Deranged in this battle. For that he is granted my vote.

Vote: 9th Degree

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This was feedback posted for Deranged
 

forcedness again............................ checkin polls

lmao @ SR's vote tho...............................