wtf @ people
 

that like stupid punches...

How does it hurt your opponents feelings by using their name, song names, people theyve battled, user title, sig, etc etc in shit punches?

its so annoying. its not even wordplay, or nameplay or anything... and they almost always sound forced...

in fact ima go look in EFL right now on a few recent battles.. i bet theyll all have some kind of shit thing.. no offense to these people by the way


technical vs status
came to piss on you fools, I'm da best, wonder why u 'gassed', cuz u 'aint shit' (think)
yall life goals is aimless, while my STATUS is known to get my balls in holes like Naismith!..lol

^it would have been the same with something different there... having his name in it doesnt mean shit


King Solo vs Young Blaze
This bitch ain’t a young blaze, he lacks that fiery component
Cuz my rhymes ‘rain down on him’,
………………………………SHIT! Now I’ve got no opponent!!

^real forced. if he lacks the fiery component, why would it matter if he got rained on?


Daubs vs Kon.Tay.Juz
You wouldnt be Kon.Tay.Juz...if you were taken ill with chicken-pox..
And your punches are packed with pussy....like watchin a kitten box..

^why would he want to be contagious... how is that a punch? I get it with the being ill and all so its contagious yada yada, but thats mad played.


Basically those kinds of punches either dont make sense, suck, or are played... The reason im made this thread is to let you know.. because every battle I look in has some of these...

Thats nice.....

I cant determine tone on the internet man -_-

Yeah... Text cats suck major ass... What did you expect?

This is the shit I been saying for so long.... No offence to anyone in particular, but people that do text are literally no good..

It's ok man i'm in a sarcastic mood coz ima learner driver now :thumbup: but i agree with ya [/notbeingsarcasticnow]

Who the fuck cares.

I should hope no matter what the punch is, the person on the other end shouldnt get hurt. Even if you knew personal info, like kid wet his bed till he was 15, why would anyone get hurt over the net?

For sure man. Fuck trying to be mean to people. Its a revolution of rap.

Here, ill battle you in your style:

Your rhymes are ill, I want to give you a bundle of flowers
Then ill take you out to dinner, and after that we can hop in the shower

Yeah thats exactly what I meant but what I said.

An to think I figured you'd take it the wrong way an think I meant any punch that isnt about a persons sig, avatar, user title, song names, name or previous battle would be less affective in an ONLINE battle.

Whatever with your jibberish man...

You said no one should get hurt over the net... But its what we should strive to do, as rappers. Hurt our opponent emotionally.

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :laugh2:

dude.....its part of elevating, us keystylers are doing what we can to elevate, if a punch doesnt work and we get told how it went wrong, we learn off of it...if were hittin them about there sig,name,avatar its going to hurt there pride emotionally...over the net, if it was in the street, that would be totally different, then we could diss them over what there wearing,how they dress..but its net and we try to hit them with what we can, and learn from our mistakes!

werd..

Textees need to get real and write shit that isnt just gay little punchline jokes and esoterical personals that nobody gives a flying fuck about enough to decypher..

Textees are a joke.. But what really takes the cake is topicals..... Has anyone seen some of the dumbass shit kids call dope these days?
People say RB has talent right? Heres what one kid dropped in a title match in one of their leagues.. I had to laugh..

Muscles contort as the hunched figure twists in the face of design,
Overgrown, dirty finger nails reveal his unending artistic mind.
Modest shoes rely on the floor for support as his inhuman angle prevails,
Pale despite the dim halogen glow of his studio's electronic tale.
Dandruff cuts through the humid atmosphere taking orbit around his body,
Solemnly greeting shadow as they embrace the dark concrete's passivity.
A faint white line encircling his stature's fluid posture of pain,
A premonition of the approaching criminal examination's inane plane

That is no bullshit, unedited, first part of his verse... And whats even more hilarious.. People were complementing him on dropping a nice peice and this guy is sposed to be one of the doper heads apparently.. ROFL

I seriously cant stand the stupidity of these people..... It makes me sick...
That my friends is the reason I dont battle text anymore..

yea, in all honesty OMB is stupid for this.

online you are limited to what u can diss them with, and its evident that a couple of them lines u mis-understood, but nevermind

werd...anybody who has ever done a text battle is completly gay...

co-sign.........................

Buddy, let me be the first to talk some reality to you.

YOU WILL NOT ELEVATE FROM WRITING CRAPPY TEXT PUNCHLINES...
Half the time they have horrible flow, one syllable rhyme schemes, bad attempts at jokes or pathetic 'hard to decypher' concepts with bad wording.. How do you honestly think writing this is going to help you elevate in writing rap lyrics?

Pick up some beats and start writing multis and try your hardest to write stuff that is as good as what professional rappers write.. Listen to a lot of music and understand how they word their bars and set out their verses, then create a style that incorperates good wording, multi syllable rhyme schemes and lyrics that people would actually want to hear over beats...

If you put your mind to it, practice your ass off and remember to always quietly rap your stuff to beats to make sure they flow well... You will slowly build up a style and notice vast improvements in your writing. Unless ofcourse you dont have what it takes mentally to be a good lyricist which a lot of people dont... Even audio rappers, a lot of the time, just dont have the talent to become anything greater than hobby emcees.. But atleast if you drop your shitty text styles and go for a more well rounded actual rap style of writing lyrics, you will elevate to whatever point you are able to elevate to..

Writing text actually will only end up fucking your style around and a lot of textees who think they are lyrical gods seriously dont have as much going for them as they would like to think. Plus they usually have only one style of lyric writing... Not all... Just 99%..

Elevate properly dude... Broarden your perspective..
Text is only for people who rap as a hobby and enjoy the competition.. Dont lie to yourself.... Text battling does not elevate anyone in a good way.. Textees only elevate to being 'better textees'.. Not better rappers..

I ain't being funny Nos don't take this the wrong way but IMO you could say the same for topicals...purely coz a few topicals don't have the same type of flow as audio it has that 'text type' flow as well only difference really is that topical is subjected on something...actually text & topical are both about one thing...except topicals have more deep subjects in some cases...

(i know you ain't done a topical in ages so don't get offended by the comment)

Look at the previous post I made in this thread dude, the one on the first page.. But yeah..

While the post you quoted was mainly directed at diss battling in text, ofcourse it can be applied to topicals..

And I dont see why I would take offence..... I think topicals are just as gay as the next guy.. But I do them as song writing basically.. I write all my topicals to beats like I was writing tracks more or less......(only diff is my actual songs have way better topics) When I bag topicals, I mean people who do them usually have no idea how to write lyrics and this is shown by the pathetically stupid styles they write with (as seen in my previous post)..

I used to do topicals though because they gave me more freedom to write actual song lyrics instead of silly little generic text verses. That will help you elevate because that is real practice (like said in the post you quoted).

Get what I'm saying?

sounds lame, and the king solo one was forced too.

Solo has to force piss out his dick...

he must have a sore dick.

Wha?... he gets migranes?

Topicals wouldn't be that gay if people wouldn't put worthless imagary and vocab in it. I mean the shit gets annoying as shit. I always try to write an actuall song when I do topical battles. Not some "desperate thoughts of medicine like veiws wipe the metaphorical dirt of hiis facial structure" shit. And text battles wouldn't be gay if people wouldn't allow ppl to have streched flow. I don't give a fuck who you are. Nobody has a line this long..................

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and all filled with "quoted" wordplay. Write it so you can rap it too. And also when you do audio you gotta worry about delivery and emotion and finding a good beat. So its like text is elementary and audio is high school/college.

people try waaay too hard for creativity, cause you can't just straight up diss someone anymore, people see that as, boring, or non-effective......text has evolved in an anal retentive expression of hate towards someone you don't know....and its getting pretty boring because everyone thinks they are really good and know everything there is to know

meh, just do it for fun, its not getting you anywhere

blah blah, word.

Schema has done 37 text battles.

lol @ posting one of my keyed battle punches, mutha fuck...

but meh im turnin audio.

this thread is beyond gay.

I agree gay thread. I mean text battling is what it is. First off it's not audio, and like it or not punches that you would throw in audio battle people dont feel those in text. Yeah it is gay, but it's text battling, so people use wordlplay, sig, whatever they have because theyre not in a real battle standing in front of someone and able to use that to their advantage. Close this thread for GAYNESS.

This thread is about how gay text is dude... Difference is, audio lines sound good on audio... Where as half these text cats look stupid on text aswell... Thats a problem...

Therefore everyone should degrade text and turn people more audio and have text as just the secondry shit for little kids..............Hence this thread is good for creating properganda..

Left open...................

Most text is just ass here.

and don't take that as a d/r comment. just real talk.

It may sound wierd to you but not everyone is on this site to become a rapper... Or even to elevate... I know I aint ever gonna be a rapper so I just do this shit when I'm bored for fun.

I covered this in a previous post in this thread..

"Text is for people who just write as a hobby and shit"

I said something like that if you read my posts..

Okay so I agree text is gay especially if you ever graced a real mike. But just for arguments sake lets say your text battling, without using wordplay, sigs, past battles, history, what do you have left for punches?

disses...just random disses outta no where.And yes...there is a difference between a diss and punchline.Without wordplay or personals..then there is no punchline..so it's a diss.Hence...the reason using no wordplay or personals in text is lame n boring.

Before I start..lemme just say...I DO THINK AUDIO IS BETTER THAN TEXT.But i dissagree with some of your statements above.

1-Ur wrong about that part where you claim text doesn't help you elevate.Nowadays..when I read my verses on this site from when i first started..i cringe and say to myself.."wtf wuz I thinking?".And when you cringe at ur old work..then that is a sign of elevation.Also..Not to mention..it's expanded my vocab..and really helped my flow a lot.Cause when i first started..i used a basic rhyme scheme.Now..I use multis and shit a lot.And thx to text(mostly in cyphers where we key up shit tho)..I finnaly know how to freestyle in real life.Only part you were right about in that 1st paragraph..wuz the part where you said cats use basic rhyme schemes a lot.I agree with that 100%.But text does help you elevate.

NOW..I have a big problem with the rest of ur post.One question I have for you is..

Why are you trying to tell someone else how to run their shit?If that person wants to do text..then let em.And if you think text is gay and audio is cool..then go do your audio and be.Just don't critize someone else doing their own thing.U were bassically TELLING that person to drop the text and do this and that.Which is bassically telling that person to do wat u do cuz wat u are doing is right and the other guy is doing is wrong.When i don't think you should do that.Your no god at this rapping or nothing.

my point exactly random disses that aren't personal at all!

Oh... Ma bad...

AAAAAAAHAHAH. WTF is that shit? Good times...

In audio you use all of those aspects, but in a more personal way.

Textees do little joke bars which is cause they usually dont know their oponent very well, which is a big reason why text is so gay and wont help you elavate.. Cause when it comes time in every emcees career that they gotta diss dudes, if theyve elevated at dissing by text? HAHAHAHAHA @ how embarrasingly pathetic their diss is going to be nit-picking at small aspects and making silly little joke bars. Hence... Text is pointless to anyone who wants to actually rap..


I said that text will help you elevate to being A BETTER TEXTEE.. Not a better rapper.. You said yourself you mainly learnt from writing in cyphers most likly from writing with people who had good multis and gave you better ideas of how to set up bars or whatever..

Textees elevate in bad ways dude.. Its not untill they pick up a mic and start making songs that they realise where their going wrong and some still dont realise thinking their text is actually going to make for ill raps... Which is a complete joke, but it happens. That dude said he used text to elevate, yes I was telling him that if he is serious about rap, get the fuck away from text and do audios.. What was implied and what I think you might of missed, is that if text is just a hobby, then by all means, stay doing ya thing.. But dont take on the mindframe that its going to make you an ill lyric writer in rap terms..


I know right? I seriously dont know how these RB kids get ego's.. But the dude that wrote that is a well respected topical writer who was getting respect for his verse on that occaision IN THE FINAL MATCH OF A TOURNIE... Shit is a complete joke; RB needs some serious sense slapped into them..

Know what it is? They're amazed by the imagery of it. Not that it's even saying anything that means something, it just SOUNDS liek it is, and it paints these obscure pictures in your mind that seems liek they look good. All you gotta do is use a shitload of adjectives back to back. Like:

Vivid ripples of the miserable exist when I pinch a nipple-full.
Lyrically physically, liftin you as sadistic sorcerers sautee your spiritual.//

You gotta leave the flow fucked up so it really works better for you. It's not that tough. Any jackass can do this, lol. AAAHAHAHAH. Honestly, you could just open any website and just pick out random words, thne string em together and boom - topical chmap 4x running.

Welp, who am I to tell people what to like? But, guess that don't stop me from laughin at it. :shrug: