Lonely Remix (Ethan Hawk From Renegades)
 

Kind Of Tipsy When I Recorded But Yea Lyrics Are Nice

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^gotta wait 24 hours so s/c can vairify that ish...=1=

LMAO this the beat I gave you shit is hot yo this is a hit foe

listening.....

sample lol.......

the production and quality on this is horrible....up ya quality some.....

beat....ehh...its ok...nothin great....it really doesnt stand out to me...i think it needs more.....

you got a pretty dope voice....but you can up your delivery some...and itll really bring your voice out...itll come with time....

flow is ok...you could get a lil more complex with it.....but not bad....

overall this isnt a bad track...keep workin and you got some potential....

PLEASE return the favor n leave feed here.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=208403

Thats what I like bout Invektive he keeps it real and lets you know how it is he don't d/r like leady

tony, hop off my nuts kid, you bein a d/r tellin dude this is hot.

quality is fuckin ass.... ye ur voice is cool,your vocals are too low... you dont sound like ur riding the beat.... alot of your lines end too early, n sum lines end with u soundin un-comfortable... lyrics are basic... delivery sounds un-confident, u need more presence aswell.... im guessing your new to this??? keep at it, ull get there

^this is comin from one of tha best at d/r'in his friends....fuck outta here...

serious man.

first dude complains when people tell him his audios suck and WHY they suck and how to stop them from suckin... so thats jus sayin he wants everybody to ride him... then he tells all his peeps theyre shits dope even if it wack as hell.... for example this track.. no offence to dude who made it cos i got no beef with u n i dont kno u but the track sucked and tony tellin u its dope.... thats a dickrider.

and for the record im cool with several audio heads on here, and i allways tell them how they can improve they shit.... but jfive would slaughter your crew single handidly and u know it, just scared to admit it

ya lyrics was wayy too simple but at least you stood on topic this aint my typa jamz homie but it rode smooth but it sounded like the chorus was performed live and you recorded wit some simple equipment...it was mixed well but dont sound right when both thing sounds diff..it was a decent drop i'd give you a 6/10 iight 1ne..

Me G.Deuce,Young Montana,Kang Korrupt,Ethan Hawk,Blackmage will take down LL audio in a heart beat and your boii J-Five weak ass fuck he fake a biter its not him on those first couple tracks give it up leady you weak as fuck all yuo can do is talk :thumbup:

i find it funny how your the only one who says im weak, except for the few who ive sonned more than once in several posts..... and dude ive posted ur shit on several sites, and all everybody did was mock you to fuck, even the kids who hate me.

seriously son, your not nice, and i can guarantee LL audio would squash yall, hell i could squash ur audio myself.

u run a crew full of rejects not wanted by any other crew, go figure

LMAO...

If I was to play anyone of your songs or let anybody in Chicago hear your shit they would make fun of your ass ride the shit outta you tough guy wanna be you weak you suck I make music that can be heard around the worls you make music that can only be listened to in the UK in reality in real life I'm gonna and will make more money than you get a life you suck you have to post my shit on other sites just to try to make yourself feel better I'm working off of a Hewlett Packard that was purchased in 1997 your working off of what a XP and I'm still pushin hits I don't even have cool edit I had to download something just ot convert my files to MP3 and I'm still pushin out tracks its takes bout an hour to upload 1 song on soundclick on my comp and I'm still pushin out tracks and you say you'll own me and my clique nigga I got to much heart to let anybody own me and this aint text this audio this way diffrent this aint just tyoin in lyrics I'm coming real

G.Deuce is a RV vet you want own him trust me
Young Montana aka Blac-Out a known audio head
Kang Korrupt someone you should and wanna know you want own him
Me I'm new and I guarantee even with my bad quality you want own me
Blackmage that nigga at the top of his game so you fo sho aint bout to own him
Cincantus aka Ethan Hawk aka another RV audio head that was before your time you aint(meaning he been here since like early 2004) gonna own him who you LL got weak CarsonJet the first class biter JFive and LMAO...you your audio aint on shit

And for backup if we need it right hand audio member always holdin Trigga Town down Tha Q get real LL is full of peeps who know one knows example YOU

first of all kid, i have my audience in the UK, US, Canada, australia, and all over europe.... people feel my shit, and people find it easier to relate cos i dont just talk all that wanna be thug shit, i express shit that EVERYBODY can relate to.....

you want me to be real??? you telling me i suck means nothing, why?? because you are one of the wackest on the site, and you have proven you only ride certain people and hate on the rest.

wats g:deuce s/click???? tha q and me are cool, so i doubt he gonna get involved and i really doubt he gonna appreciate u dragging him into YOUR beef.

whats funny is... u claim your so dope.... yet u need people to back you up... and im willing to take u all on by myself... just prove this net thug tony green is really a pussy at heart

A net thug you got the untouchabel J-Five with you who own RV audio and aint nobody fuckin with him

I'm wack and again Black~Magik said I was good Intermental said I got a god givin flow Invektive who I've beefed with since my first day on RV even said I was nice just get a better mic Tha Q said I was nice G.Deuce said I was nice...

Stop hattin leady I'm not the lil text head who you can shove your audio at anymore you used to say well Tony do audio and then you can say youve done something well when you hear I'm not wack you get mad RV's #1 hatter is you

You sit up here post your bullshit ass feed back sayin on how well I'm leady a UK artist who performs everynight and one of the best so I'm gonna tell you how wack you are just make myself feel bad"

Haven't you heard positive feed helps improve peeps I don't say anybody shit wasn't good cause if you give positive feed that person improves I try to lift peeps spirits unlike you who has to put someone down in order to feel like a man I'm hot I'm good the only reason you can't tell is cause I got a bullshit comp and when I get my new comp in 2months you gone be like damn Tony Green is good Tony Green do got some shit and you gone feel dumb so just let it go leady and be quiet cause you make yourself look like a fool and your whole crew cause your remarks brings the fam down

the only time im negative is when the person is an arsehole, otherwise im polite with my feedback, yes ill tell them it sucks but ill explain why and how to improve

black magik is over-rated.. yea hes decent but far from dope... intermental still has ALOT to learn so i wouldnt take there crits on u too seriously.

kid i know what i do, and people can back it up.... you seriously do suck, im not saying that cos of this situation or cos of my view on u im saying that cos your music really does make me cringe. your flow is hella basic and quite often in-consistent... but ya know what... ima stop now and let my rhymes do the talking 2moro.... i got some spare time 2moro so watch yaself.... peace

Same here its Friday I'm free like a mafucker I'm shuttin all you vick ass niggaz down

LMAO i cant wait

why....dont....yall....just.....battle? lol...ill be happy to lay down an honest vote...even though me n tony aint really the best of net buddies lol....id vote for him if in my opinion he won....and id vote for leady if he won....so if yall battle...u have a completely honest voter here....id like to see it honestly lol...since yall beefin in here

your quality aint that good man, it sounds like you use your speakers, and i think your chair was sqeekin haha, mine does that a lot too. your lyrics and flow was real good, emotion wasn't to bad either if your quality was better you'd sound a lot better. you have a nice voice and you chose a good beat to do a remix too. why do you have to hate wit me man, i never said shit about you. anyway i'd say you doin good for elevation keep it up.

think you can rtf on my Quiet Storm free.

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You Guys Are Terrbile Feeders I Swear Lol No Hate To The One's The Left Good Feed The Rest Of You Suck Ass...And Drop An Audio Diss Cause I Don't Really Care Fams..HaHa..Anyway I'll RTF All Tonight!

its aight... you deff have to update dogg... keep doin ya thang

Good looking All!

whats your problem, i never do diss tracks, and never will i.

I'm Not Talking About You!

Lol at you usin the jodeci bit, quality is a lil iffy, vocals a lil low, lyrics are def good, likin the flow here,....lovin the fact you sped up the chorus works so well....i love that jodeci song....2nd verse...flow is better, i can hear you better, lyrics are koo, "crept the sofa" good line, "thats why I copped with youre sister" lol, gd ish....keep up......

Ey Good Looking Fams!

I know everyone says this but your quality isn't very good. It kinda makes me not want to listen to it. There are a lot of background noises I can hear. Just like Paranoid mentioned, is that your chair squeeking? You might want to try standing up when you record. It brings your voice out more and allows you to take deeper breaths. But that's only for if you were sitting while recording. Flow is on point most of the time. At times it seems that you don't end the bar at the right time. Overall this was an okay track. I would give it a 6 or 7.

Naw That's Not My Chair Lmao! That's How The Beat Was Yo..Word!

Are you serious? Strange beat. But you'll definitely get better with more practice.