Get It On Straight Remix
 

reopened dooms had no right closing this its called freedom of speech so heres the link

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=463090

that is some funny ass shit man... the concept is retarted, but very funny... the quality, well isnt the greatest... sounds like 3 year olds rappin... HAHA... keep it up tho man... lyriks are there, but the flow isnt... haha... good shit

Thanks... that's the whole basis... White Rap at it's finest, OFFBEAT AS FUCK! lol

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Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok im leaving feed
intro is cool sets u up for whats about to come lol
hook most creative shit ive heard love the randomness one of the tightest hooks ive heard lol 9.5/10 on the hook
stevie b lol flow is waht it is lol not really on but its not that bad lyrics funny lol
hook omg i love it
vp lol u tried the hardest it sounds liek lol u were way too serious lol oh well pretty cool flow could be improved and breath control but i f ur drunk thats pretty cool lmao
duli my fav gay rapper tha q who???? lol funniest verse i think liked the other ppl talking

lMAO AT DULI ON THE OUTRO
overall track obviously the flow and lyrics were jacked but the hook i loved it lol
8/10

That was actually cupcake on the outro lmao!

woah this sucks......

It's supposed to suck... lmao...

Uppinnnnnnnnnn.

You sound like napolean Dynamites brother lmao! you have no passion to delivery hot at all. your flow is mad off and it's not compatible with the beat one bit. the beat was hot but really you sound a bit contipated and like you have no confidence to do a hot track. your emotion is def your problem, your lyrics might be a bit funny. I don't think I'll ever listen to another one of your songs again man.

no offense but that just turned me off.

Numb nuts... YOU ARE A FUCKING IDIOT... LEARN TO FUCKING READ HOMO FAG.

read? don't you mean hear?

why you gettin mad, I was honest how you were with half the shit you say to me, dick.

Read on the fucking site, where it clearly states, that the song is for comedical purposes, So, don't be a fucking retard.

I don't care, it still blowed dick. Wasn't funny because you don't have the delivery to make it sound funny.

I know... I'm not funny... STFU. The other people are funny, listen to them, and listen to them multiple times, for all the people that don't listen to you (pretty much everyone).

the beat is fucking dope, haha at the intro, damn at the emotion, theres no emotion!!!! lol, flow is eee haha, lolbut meh i know you just playing around, haha at the hook? anyway peace dope track weeerd,
RTF on my beat:
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...918#post2639918

this shit is tupid as hell lol.......

it was kinda funny though kid

w00t... I got feed!!!!

Good shit... I'll rtf

lol......intro was pretty funny.

Wow......this is pretty bad.....and not bad meaning good. You have no presence at all man. Act like you actually believe what you are saying so we will. The whole phone shit wasn't really working cause they were pretty off beat. I guess it's kinda funny, but it might not be funny in the way you want it to be funny. The second verse was a little better than the first. Actually, a lot better. It had flow and the presence was better. Still not dope, but better.....lol. Same with the third verse (as the second)

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281

L.v. you are cool..now i am off the dick so yeah some people took that way too serious..that song would be nothing with out blake's drunk @$$..gotta love it

^oh My God He's Alive!

Q thanks for the shout this sounds very good ... aight ...nice flows... very... any way ...this is for the other link ... peace


http://www.soundclick.com/qakaprox