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Ryda vs Tha 1 An Onlii B
Battle Rules:
6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 4-0 Tko Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-22-05 at 08:54 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Ryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-05 08:55 PM.
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hey Tha 1 An Onlii B
u kno wat i see a person tryin to spit like me ill set my anger free on thee hope u kno i spit hot fire i inspire newbs like u u now who u messin wit afta this battle ull need a medical kit ur heart will be broken my raps are the finest afta this battle ull be callin me highness ill drop u like a bomb fast and quick cause my flow is just that sick so u can just suck my dick ill drop ya like scarface dropped cops if u beat me ill give ya props |
Tha 1 An Onlii B has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-05 09:03 PM.
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yo how could you possibly win when we start colliding
your name jus proves that your tha master of dick riding* your absurd thinkin you can beat tha 1 an onlii so im jus gonna prove to everyone that your a phony you make me laugh wen thinkin your tha best of all-time wen you git on tha mic u should be arrested for a crime my vocab is high and thats why your so amiss** dont worry i wouldnt expect you to comprehend my diss *itz jus a little bit of nameplay **amiss means confused(im workin on my vocab) |
uppin fo votez on this homiez.....................
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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B
opener pretty good personal love to see them your structure much improved flow better than ive seen from you vocab was good too all around pretty good verse yo how could you possibly win when we start colliding your name jus proves that your tha master of dick riding* this line was better than alll of his put otgether ryda ur flow was good and thats it your structure wow work on that i dditn feel anythign in ur verse really no punches work on everything if you want help pm me and i will help you |
Voted For: Ryda
The only reason im voting for rider is a better flow ryda 6/10 The one and Onlii 5/10 closee battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo thatz tha wackest vote i ever seen in ma life...yea he had an iight flow but i had everything else...ur vote makez no fuckin sense...maybe ur a dickrider but idk..im not too worried about it...no hate...hit me bak
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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B
there is some elevation needed on both sides............. but i'm gonna start ont he good points first........... Tha 1 An Onlii B had a pretty good flow......... better punchlines...........however many lines where played i was feeling the structure and i thought it lack creativity......... i see alot of potential but right now your lines are pretty basic try to incorporate more wordplay...............ryda i like the structure your flow ws better... however no punchlines........... you just kept talking about how great u are this is a battle concentrate on insulting ur oppenet.......... ur verse also lack substance add some wordplay metaphors puns.... whatever it takes ........ like i said i thought this battle was basic Tha 1 An Onlii B gets my vote base on harder hitting punchlines.... no hate just constructive critism take if you like...........PEACE 1 |
thanx fo tha vote mayne...uppin again...hit me bak
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btw please drop an honest vote on flow verse v. Define trying to finish this battle been up for a while thanks
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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B
both weren't all that good........ but that's why you're not elite yet....... not all of onlii's were punches, but ryda's punches were so weak, i'd give it to onlii |
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onlii: better flow, but flow still wasn't perfect..... okay punches, but a little self-glorification mixed in Ryda:bad flow, but not too much worse than onlii's........... okay punches but not as nice as onlii's overall: both need elevation........ this battle was like who made the least mistake's instead of who was the better MC.......... try to join an elevation crew..... |
thanx fo tha vote and feedback homie...appreciate it...uppin again
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This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
pollz............................................. ........
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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B
yo how could you possibly win when we start colliding your name jus proves that your tha master of dick riding* your absurd thinkin you can beat tha 1 an onlii so im jus gonna prove to everyone that your a phony you make me laugh wen thinkin your tha best of all-time wen you git on tha mic u should be arrested for a crime my vocab is high and thats why your so amiss** dont worry i wouldnt expect you to comprehend my diss dis guy has better wordplay and punches..........his structure was way better n way smoother........he flowed.... hey Tha 1 An Onlii B u kno wat i see a person tryin to spit like me ill set my anger free on thee hope u kno i spit hot fire i inspire newbs like u u now who u messin wit afta this battle ull need a medical kit ur heart will be broken my raps are the finest afta this battle ull be callin me highness ill drop u like a bomb fast and quick cause my flow is just that sick so u can just suck my dick ill drop ya like scarface dropped cops if u beat me ill give ya props horrible wordplay.......i give hime a 3/10 NO hate u gotta elevate dawg......u had bad multi's... i give this 2 tha 1 an onlii b |
Rtf...........da Battle Is In Ma Sig 1
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Voted For: Ryda
No hate but both yall needa elevate....try usen punches,personals and multis....im wack but i do know what is needed to elevate |
That was meant for feedback^^ NOT A VOTE
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This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
checking pollz..............
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lol^^^u voted 4 him.....that sucks...............
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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B
Ryda ------ hey Tha 1 An Onlii B u kno wat i see a person tryin to spit like me (0/10 weak as..) ill set my anger free on thee hope u kno i spit hot fire i inspire newbs like u u now who u messin wit afta this battle ull need a medical kit ur heart will be broken my raps are the finest afta this battle ull be callin me highness ill drop u like a bomb fast and quick cause my flow is just that sick so u can just suck my dick ill drop ya like scarface dropped cops if u beat me ill give ya props ---------- hold on hold on...i can't get ahold of your flow at all dude..you need to elevate more then enough b4 you battle again...no hate but it needs to be done ---------- tha 1 an onlii b ---------- yo how could you possibly win when we start colliding your name jus proves that your tha master of dick riding* (it's an ok line.. ) your absurd thinkin you can beat tha 1 an onlii so im jus gonna prove to everyone that your a phony (another good 1..) you make me laugh wen thinkin your tha best of all-time wen you git on tha mic u should be arrested for a crime (um..ok.."when you get on the mic you should be arrested for a crime"...really is like props to him..so nothing good in this 1.) my vocab is high and thats why your so amiss** dont worry i wouldnt expect you to comprehend my diss (this line tightened it up..nice work.) you straight done the other cat, but he was low on the keystyle anyway..nice work and no hate to "ryda" elevate son. v/Tha 1 An Onlii B return the favour pplz honest though...they are in my signature.. werd |
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