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Stanza vs Natural killa
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6 -8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No d/r NO HATE 3-0 KO 4-1 KO Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-23-05 at 06:32 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-20-05 06:57 PM.
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respected by none..why you even bother to stay?,ur rep spells whack
cuz you became mod of a league..'n then everybody wanted K.L.L. back..* u better off sellin crack..rap won't work for you...a loser feelin pain cos every verse u drop...it sucks...your puttin "hoover" in their shame.. own leader of ya clique..ditched..simply because he got raided 'n dissed 'n how's ya crew sposed to be dope..when to the site..they don't exist..? u ain't winnin this..there's a party for vets..'n u the 1st chipped up 'n reared cus only "TRIGGA's" ya'll ever fire are the ones that are clipped on ya hair 1st Bar http://community.rapverse.com/showt...nza#post2434396 Don't understand the punches and personals...don't vote. |
Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-20-05 09:08 PM.
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Yo Check My Perfect Picture Like Some purchased liquor im the perfect figure Your Spitting worthless scriptures so wack, you dont deserve this mixture But Ill Merk You Voilently and Watch You Die Silently As Yo Pride I Jack So Lets Back Track.....I Already Back Smacked This Asscrack Last Bat But He Back For Some More Of That Splat That Made His Lines Abstract So He Drops His Wack Scriptz as The Blacktip On His Last Rib In His Back He Says He's A Killa But We Can Spot The Realla In The Thrilla Manilla Even If You Was a Piss Cup At The Doctors The Voterz Still Wouldnt Fill Ya -Finished- |
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ooh...and nice way to load a verse up with filler :thumbup:
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I Dont Really USe alot of personals I Jus Try To Depend on Punchez and Multie's
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well...next time...try ACTUALLY USING multis then. :thumbup:
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Voted For: Natural killa
Stanza - You had good flow good wordplay and all punches were ok but some of your shit just did not make sense like.? Your last line for istence...Are you just worried about his voted or something? I didn't really get your shit like basic shit Don't know if its just me but you did Ok Overall Natural killa- I like your Multies and flow plus wordplay all did very good , i understood it all, this was a hard battle to get it but i think you because more personals and shit that made sense to me, And your last line didn't make sense to me either Mmm...Maybe its just me ... Oh well you get my vote. |
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can you fools hurry up and get this shit closed???
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Voted For: Stanza
Stanza i vote stanza becuz of the better punches and personals nat killa. i dont think u played off ur set ups to well, i feel ur punches were meh basic nothing special....stanza i feel was better with it overall.And had better strucutre and vocab....... rtf stanza...... |
^^WOW.........anyways... uppin.
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Voted For: Stanza
stanza-- structure was nice...rhyme scheme was real nice i liked the verse had punches but didint hit that ahrd...but decent verse.. nk-k had sum punches structure wasn't bad....but you had a okay verse but it was just plain no really ahrd hitting punches..so i think stanza won...b/c he had more rhyme scheme and a more creative/orginal verse |
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Hipnotik I would RTF but Im not gonna go and look for your battle
Your gonna hvae to drop a link anyways uppin |
Voted For: Stanza
iight nice battle here...both had decent structure anf verses kept on flowing...but i think stanza gets this cos he had harder punches....wordplay was tight and he had somemulties stuffed in there which gave him a plus on this one...metas were very much nice too...in short he just had complex lines which hit quite harder than NK's... NK u had some tight shit too...verse was cool as well but your punches didnt seem to be hurtin more than stanza's...yeah u had personals but u didnt manipulate them well enuff tobeat his verse...and then he had u on multiz.... nice battle tho...gd looking:thumbup: |
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Voted For: Natural killa
this battle was ok there were decent punches and personals but NK gets this because he actually made the effort to come with personals n shit like the line bout stanza's crew not existing and line about your leader in the 3rd bar.structure was decent and i was feeling his flow.... i'll admit i expected stanza to win this but it's like he underestimated NK or some shit...punches were weak and the only thing he really had over NK was his vocab and that was only average. i felt there were some repetitive elements in stanza's wording, with words like back and wack.... but anyway thats my vote...... |
Voted For: Natural killa
ayo tite verse man im giving it to natural coz his verse was tighter overall. no need for a break down man. thx for da vote on our battle this site lacks voters majorly |
Aii Man Ill Let votes slide But That Last Vote is Def a One Line Vote
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Yeap In my White Tee
Hataz Wanna Dike ..............me lol |
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