Da Tru Cashmoney vs Ryda
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

4-0 TKO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-25-05 at 05:03 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Ryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-05 05:11 PM.

Da Tru Cashmoney has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-22-05 05:19 PM.

Da Tru Cashmoney
u think u can beat me thats too funny
your a disgrace
to the human race
i'll drop you slow
like your flow
wow ur battlen i though you would be a no show
ur a fool
i'll leave ya in ur own blood pool
this is the majority rule
u cant win
ur gunna lose again
afta this battle you'll be in injury
ur vocabulary
is horrible
ur structure is unexceptable
ur just awful
all around
u cant go round for round
with me
im from the inner city
i show no pity
ill drop u like charges on OJ
it's ur turn to lose today
ur flow is shity
i'll chop u up like fillet
u'll be the prey
afta this battle you'll start to decay
this battle geos down my way
man ur the worst in the usa
u probley think ur a rap hero
with tupac as ur avatar afta this battle u'll be in absolute zero


absolute zero=the lowest temperature theoretically attainable
fillet=a longitudinal slice or boned side of a fish

For god damn sake you gettin stomped and raped
I know you fake so you gettin popped like grapes
after this youre in a bag wit a zipper
just for me yea gurl turns into a stripper
I already won this ya done fucked ya ass up for fun
Please dont fuck wit me son cuz this wuz like shootin a gun Game Over!

Voted For: Ryda

I voted for Ryda because he had more punches and attemted at a couple personals Da Tru Cashmoney had a great flow but no punches all self glory and Ryda also had alot of self glory but he had mre punches

Vote --- RYDA

This was feedback posted for Ryda
 

weak as fuck...im not gon vote...jus checkin tha polllzzzzzz...yo cashmoney,u wanna battle me?...1 day to check and 1 day to drop..hit me bak

Voted For: Da Tru Cashmoney

v/da tru cash money better structure and punches

ill battle both ya'll

both of who?...me and cash money?...i dont battle nobody unless they drop me a quick 6 linez so i can git a idea of how good they are...hit me bak

^go to my thread in bitchslapped..................

Voted For: Ryda

ok, ur verse was bad...im not hating just stating a fact

for you to elevate you need to learn how to structurize
honestly look at your opponent structurize like that .....it will be more easy to flow with and rhyme with....over all u had simple plain little punches that overall amounted more than ur opponent so due to line ammount ill vote you...but up on those things

and cash money..u needa come harder make ur punches presentable

and if u have anyproblems...ill battle u both in text

and im a topical head

This was feedback posted for Ryda
 

just to let yall kno...ryda ur structure was the one thats off man...but it was ok ur vocab is still a lil off but just work at it

and c-money..the punches were ok...

all in all....its hard to decide

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This was feedback posted for Da Tru Cashmoney
 

LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

You both suck

uppin..................... we need votes to close this battle and declare a winner

that fuckin bull shit Ryda we goin agian now wut i know wut the fuck 6 Unlimted lines means besides wut wuz that if this wuz actually vocals u would be off beat after the second line

^but guess what, its not vocals...or audio for that matter...its text...so dont hate......on him........u dont know wut u talkin bout........anyways im really just uppin my post lol

Voted For: Ryda

I say both of you need to read other battles and get a better idea how to write text battles.


you both dropped completley wack, so im'a vote ryda for acctually having some what of a punch on his verse.

oj line,weak but won it or you.

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Voted For: Da Tru Cashmoney

vote you for actually throwing an actual verse.

Ryda..no offence..I know u new to the site 'n all...but make ur lines longer and use punchlines 'n shit.

Keep working,

Vote-Cash

Voted For: Da Tru Cashmoney

well a newby battle but blah this was a wack battle, Datrucashmoney gets this becuase of his better structure, even if its bad, better punchs...if i can say that and better imagination...but seriously you two better elevate

Ryda: you better work on your structure and flow, that was some short ass lines you had tere so i dunno, put two lines in one atleas...mmm i see that your in the next generation, i the one who created the crew and left:D lol anyway

vote: Da Tru Cashmoney

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Voted For: Da Tru Cashmoney

lol, way too much from ryda
almost decent at the beginning but really fell off at the end
cliche, but try to focus on qualitynot quantity
cashmoney's wasnt that great either, but it was hella better than a bunch of three-word lines that rhyme
lol at these lines:
"ur vocabulary
is horrible
ur structure is unexceptable"
thats exactly wut every1s gonna be sayin in there votes AGAINST u lol

vote- da tru cahmoney

rtf to at least 1 of the links in the sig :thumbup:

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