Sin`cere vs chip
 

Battle Rules:

Optional Topics
20-40 lines
3 day Check & Drop
3-0 KO
4-1 kO


6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

:love: Good Luck. :love:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-25-05 at 07:08 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Closed - Expired battle win

unofficial check-in......... thinkin up a topic........ i'll post my piece tomorrow........

whats the topic...or is jus 2 diff. topics for both competitors....????

well as u kno tha topic is

love

checkin and then i will....aight....

chip has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-05 12:44 AM.

Sin`cere has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-24-05 12:45 AM.

This Thing Like Love
what u do to me, the way your being caresses my soul,
apart of me, two halves of the same whole object,
i tried to be objective goin into this,
checked all of your references,
your old man wasn't enough to fullfil your needs,
if love iz a test, u gon get a A-paper and i promise to never cheat,ever,
love ain't a word i use often, so u know i'm legit,
your hair beautiful, your eyes beautiful,
your soul iz pure, my gifts are perfect, bcuz you're worth it,
you so fine i'm glad you're mine,
but would never treat u like property,
for u i'll do anything, i'll be more than i was,
and i'll change what i will be, i see the future,
and in the end i want it to be,
just exactly how i have forseen,
u with me in this extordinary thing that can't be captured by the words in a verse,
that has no structure or flow other than it's own,
it's more than that word, cuz i love u more than that,
grace is amazing, me and u are the perfect balance,
cuz i'm me and you're full of talent,
girl i love u and i'll put down myself to prove it,
if need be, fuck this battle, i'll lose it or forfit,
what ever u see fit, cuz we much more than that he say,she say,
much more than anything mortal, we can never be stopped,
we're make music, u R&B i'm Hip-Hop,
i can tell u an angel, how could u get with me,
u came down and blessed my life with u,
i thank the Lord for raining this perpetual blessing from above,
and for this thing we have, this thing like love.

Voted For: Sin`cere

you got this,emotion is solid. structure helped flow, use of vocab really made your peice shine above you oponent's.

both dropped some what weak but meh,good battle

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Voted For: Sin`cere

v/sin'cere

sin'cere-your verse was pretty dope man, short but sweet...you had good flow...good structure...i feel your vocab was hott and intact...your topic was hard to keep track of...didnt really know what u were trying to do...but i feel you kept emotion tight..and everything in control. overall 8/10

chip-Your verse was hard to follow, first off ur verse was poorly structured...couldnt flow well at all..ur vocab wasnt much special but nothing to knock you on...i dont knwo if this was poetry or wut..but u had god emotion...and iight imagery..but nothing special.......u need to elevate a bit...but overall 6/10

v/sin'cere
rtf on one of my battles in 48 hours or this vote WILL be disqualified

srry for the poor structure.......... i actually did that on purpose.......... it was supposed to be like how when a man iz so deeply in love he can't think str8...........

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checkin polls and uppin' for my boy chip..........

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haaa..... it was poetry....... i assumed we weren't gonna have a battle about love........ oh well, uppin for more votes...........

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Voted For: Sin`cere

Chip ~ Your verse was alright the emoitions was deep
but about from that I didnt feel u brought much to this
battle. Everything else was simply alright !! no hate !!

Sin ~ Come sic in this battle,.. Flow well dope the first
two bars smashed it... Vocab was ill, emotions well nice
I liked the morals of the verse.

Easy win for sin !!

Stay up both

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^not really sure i'm feelin that explanation...... plz don't judge my piece by the rhyme scheme, bcuz i wasn't even trying to rhyme, i just did at times out of habit...... this flows more like a spoken word....... bcuz that's basically what it iz..... uppin for more votes, but i ask all voters from now on NOT TO VOTE UNLESS U GET WHAT I WAS TRYING TO DO with my piece....... if i lose a battle, i want it to be a good loss..... not a oh, his verse was hot and yours was not....... just explain to me how u would've changed it...... uppin 4 more votes.....