Big_o vs HiPnoTiK
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 TKO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-24-05 at 03:52 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

HiPnoTiK has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-05 03:52 PM.

your rhymes suck man its a lil bit unfair to compare/
its like im dissing the air,aint no real opponent here/
howd you start battling im guessing 8mile fo sure/
change ur name to big zero cause ur record seems rupptured/
ive seen all your battles yo they a lil immature/
its over man, please come again..to the tko grand tour/

Big_O has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-05 06:00 PM.

HiPnoTiK all you ever talk about is droppin a quick key,
what was you a back up dancer for Run D.M.C?
You got shit on me you know who you battlin?
Your in a cage and im the one rattlin,
Your like the Berlin wall easy to fall
Lucky if you got any flow at all
You aint like the alcohol
More like a prank call
........... just a joke
But i gotta go the Big_O spoke!

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This was feedback posted for HiPnoTiK
 

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Voted For: HiPnoTiK

your rhymes suck man its a lil bit unfair to compare/
its like im dissing the air,aint no real opponent here/
4....basic,unoriginal...
howd you start battling im guessing 8mile fo sure/
change ur name to big zero cause ur record seems rupptured/
3...this whole 8 mile/coming here thing is played out.And that rupture part seemed to have come outta no where.
ive seen all your battles yo they a lil immature/
its over man, please come again..to the tko grand tour/
0....didn't diss at all,therefore it is not a punch.

HiPnoTiK all you ever talk about is droppin a quick key,
what was you a back up dancer for Run D.M.C?
1..there is nothing wrong with him wanting to drop quick keys.That's actually a compliment as it means he can freestyle 'n shit.And that back up dancer part seemed to come outta no where.
You got shit on me you know who you battlin?
Your in a cage and im the one rattlin,
0...didn't diss at all,therefore it is not a punch.
Your like the Berlin wall easy to fall
Lucky if you got any flow at all
3...if you actually worded this punch,then it may have been something.
You aint like the alcohol
More like a prank call
0....no...wtf is this???
........... just a joke
But i gotta go the Big_O spoke
0...not dissing at all,therefore it is not a punch.


OK..one sided battle.
Hipnotik..
My advice..don't put that line(/) at the end of your lines.And learn to word a punch.Like make the set-up connect and shit.Get some more creative concepts.That 8 mile shit is played out.And also make every bar diss the oppenent out.
Big_O
You really need work.I suggest reading the tutorials.Find out what a punch is.U even complimented the dude with the quick key line.And some lines were just flat out dumb.Like..why you say he;s a back up dancer outta no where?and why u call him a prank call?

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iight good feedback thankss...uppinn.................

come peeps lets get the votes going.....................

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yoo come on ill RTF............................ ..

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uppin wtf guys lets get some votes and end this ..

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uppin.................can we please get some votes ...

Voted For: HiPnoTiK

your rhymes suck man its a lil bit unfair to compare/
its like im dissing the air,aint no real opponent here/

vs

Your like the Berlin wall easy to fall
Lucky if you got any flow at all

This was feedback posted for Big_O
 

pollz..........................

Voted For: HiPnoTiK

pollzzzzzzzzz................just checkin ppl...

hey dq that last vote.....its feedback...that was a fuck up

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Voted For: HiPnoTiK

vote- hipnotik
overall better punches from u
big o's were sorta basic, and his structure wasnt consistent at all (except for the lines gettin consisitently smaller)
hipno had a good structured verse, and the punches were decent
some of the rhymes seem forsed tho, and some dont rhyme very well
and dont use white text its annoying :cussing:

rtf to one of the links in my sig :thumbup:

Voted For: HiPnoTiK

wow...hipnotik definately shook this cat...he had better punches,structure,flow, and some nice creativity...big_O...keep at it and elevate a hell of a lot more than you have but i can see a lil improvement...this vote is definately goin to hipnotik fo tha stuff i listed above...rtf and honestly vote on my battle against big O in 3 days or less or this vote will be disqualified