Natural killa vs One Man Band
 

Battle Rules:

12-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r
No HATE

This a multi battle...so vote based on multis only.Not on punches or w/e.

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-26-05 at 06:28 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Win by forfeit

One Man Band has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-05 06:31 PM.

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-23-05 06:36 PM.

battling you is empty, like playin with text be
the pain is intense see.. my brain is entrenched deep,
into thoughts of makin moves to get the fuck outta this life
the sounds that I write got emotion blurrin my sight
all this anger n' pain got me hurtin the mic
i ain't gonna let 'em fall til all a my dreams is true
put the kid over some hot beats n' poof...
you got magical music that'll heat the booth
the flow is evidence, the rhyme schemes is proof
the content is ill, the talk is real... competition I kill
watch ya spot, i'm in a position to fill any position or skill
so called sick emcees got nothin on my medicinal flows
throwin up fingers n' bows.. god bless the mic n' tickle ya nose
Leavin this kid rocked, when I take advantage of rules
its a multi battle, punches dont have to be attackin at you
I could just talk like a babblin fool, in one line ill have as much yappin as you would normally have in a few, and practically use as much of this battle threads room as I want, slappin a broom, magical tomb, laughing at shrooms, immaculate dude, passin the duece, blah blah faggot thats blue, cracking a shoe into a pile of traffic and goo until a bitch with a towel rack attached to her boobs passes and screws a million zoos, koo koo kachu.

^line 16 was actually one line, im just real noob so its a little bit stretched.

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lmao... not a single vote -_- .

Voted For: Natural killa

Pretty good battle....

battling you is empty, like playin with text be
the pain is intense see.. my brain is entrenched deep,
8/10 - solid opener
into thoughts of makin moves to get the fuck outta this life
the sounds that I write got emotion blurrin my sight
6/10 - very lacking in sense making. The sounds that i write got emotion blurrin my sight? Doesn't have a connection between your music and how it got your emotion blurring your sight
all this anger n' pain got me hurtin the mic
i ain't gonna let 'em fall til all a my dreams is true
put the kid over some hot beats n' poof...
you got magical music that'll heat the booth
8/10 good line, like the connection between magic and the usage of "heat"
the flow is evidence, the rhyme schemes is proof
the content is ill, the talk is real... competition I kill
watch ya spot, i'm in a position to fill any position or skill
7/10 - a lot of self glorification....but would have been better if you fix the second line
so called sick emcees got nothin on my medicinal flows
throwin up fingers n' bows.. god bless the mic n' tickle ya nose
7/10 - another average bar. The first line was real simple. I kinda expected you to say medicine when you spoke of sick mcs
Leavin this kid rocked, when I take advantage of rules
its a multi battle, punches dont have to be attackin at you
7/10 - average bar again. Seems that you tried to sneak a punch in, lol

I could just talk like a babblin fool, in one line ill have as much yappin as you would normally have in a few, and practically use as much of this battle threads room as I want, slappin a broom, magical tomb, laughing at shrooms, immaculate dude, passin the duece, blah blah faggot thats blue, cracking a shoe into a pile of traffic and goo until a bitch with a towel rack attached to her boobs passes and screws a million zoos, koo koo kachu.
Ending - 7/10 - Seems that you were trying to find more words to rhyme than concentrating on using metas to get your point across

murdering with keystyles 'n freestyles..while never unheard,the cypher tactic
like infants chewin on candy,poison concealed..so obsured 'n hyper active
9/10 - Very good multi use.........Great opener
cant's say u got riders 'n lactic...cuz u get no milking from prostitudes
just erections,no bust..and direction of dust's where u tilting 'n lost-in-flutes
8/10 - nothing I can really say wrong about this....
a pussy standing still with the Boston roots...only retreating from beef
can't call this a battle unless reffering to when he's beating his meat
7/10 - Umm.....punches maybe....lol. decent line.
kick him 'n sink in his front teeth...& make 'em swallow their plaque
ur turn,u behind shook...i'll burn ya rhyme book..ur raps hollow 'n whack
7/10 - Average line. You started off great, but i dont like the ending. Should have connected more to "burning" then whack, feel me..
all's you do is follow the pack....shit...a kissin ass 'n dickridin galore
beatin urself 'n seekin some help cuz ur moms up in a cast,a bitch hidin in court
7/10 - Personal......another average line. First line wasnt effective.
fighting's the thought...but ur pissing ur pants from the nightmare
lunchin in the can and u never punching a man..cuz tampons might tear
8/10 - Good connection to the previous line. Good Multi...
can's run from here...the love taps considered ur great manuever
grab hold of ya breast 'n demote-it..cuz i'm homophobic so i'd never hate to bruise-ya
& to win?nobody'd choose-ya....for real...ur shit's cold 'n hated,a ban-for-sure
they all came to bet but u staying so wet..ur just an overrated amatuer
6/10 - First bar was your worst out of the rest.

Total
OMB - 50
NK - 54

I vote NK, good battle guys. OMB, needed more connection and more usage of metas. NK, your problem is the total opposite. It seemed that you had more punches than metas, but was able to rebound by using them in the punches.

wow, i'm surprised that i'm the first to vote............

hmm I cant be bothered going through that vote and pointing out everything bad about it...

But it looks like you forgot to abide by natural killa's rules in your vote.

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This was feedback posted for One Man Band
 

looks pretty close,

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Voted For: One Man Band

damn, this battle is one-sided to me....

NK - ure shit was weak to begin with, you only had a few multi's going on and shit. in my opinion you tried to incorporate a lot of big complex vocabs along with some attempted mutli's to try and make your verse seem good. but the fact is it started real weak, you picked it up to the end with some nice multies, shit was flowin well and you had the big vocabs to so props for that, its just i think that the last few bars were the only decent portion of ure verse. 5/10

OMB - a dope verse, the rhyming was pretty much basic shit but thats cool cuz we focusin on the multies. ure shit was consistently dope with multies all the way through making your verse flow perfectly. i read through the whole thing without pause which was cool, cuz with NK's i had to stop a couple of times cuz the rhymin wasnt that good. that childish shit you did at the end actually had me laughin, i thought it was cool and amusing, aint nuthin stretched either cuz of the multies so overall a nice verse. 7/10

V/ - One Man Band

This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 

i want to battle the winner of this in multies..........havent done this since the multi league existed............

even battle i dont wanna half ass vote so GL

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Voted For: Natural killa

well this is a multi battle, so im not going to vote on punches....or personals..or vocab..or structure...or creativeness...or concepts blah blah blah

overall fo real man you had the better thought out meaningfull multis...odd way to batttle but interesting to read
v/natural killa

rtf within 48 hours or say bye bye to this vote :thumbup:

yo NK, if I lose this we'll have a rematch :slick:

if u lose this face me......................and NK too

This was feedback posted for One Man Band
 

werd @ OMB not giving one ounce of effort and care in this battle.

Last bar owns.

No doubt.......................................... :shoot:

to both you and hotshh! :thumbup:

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Voted For: One Man Band

i have to go with OMB here....his multies were clean, unforced, well sequenced....enjoyable.....dont know why NK still using hypens to separate your multies in a multi battle....:sigh:

word, v/OMB

^^why the fuck does hypens matter?......and I only did it in 3 bars.....

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