Natural killa vs Daubs
 

Battle Rules:

30-40 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r
NO HATE


3-0 KO

FINAL BATTLE

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-27-05 at 05:26 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Closed - Expired / old battle win


Reopened for 21 more days on 10/15

Im checkin in now man,

make sure you check in soon...

ima drop by tonight, you do the same?

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-05 12:02 PM.

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-05 12:45 PM.

i'll try and drop tonight as well.

I ain't making any promices though.

my verse done posted.....so you can post yours anytime :)

good shit....hopefully voting ain't gonna take that long.

dope battle.......................................

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

pollz, good battle both came strong...............

Voted For: Daubs

good battle both y'all....


DAUBS......free-range structure same as me, i hate forced structure's now :thumbup: ure flow was tight consistently, i think there was only one bar near the start that was a little choppy. u had some nice punches, a lot of original concepts in there and a couple of bars that OMFG!! they made me crack up like a fuckin madman. that one about the sewers was dope as hell. the creativity was dope as shown in the originality, although some played concepts were in there, and a couple of bars seemed a little basic to me, overall ure wordplay was dope, u used it well and mixed it up in ure punches and personals to make an affective verse, OVERALL: 8/10


NK........probably one of the best verses i've seen you put out, but thats down to the length mostly, longer verses kick ass. u had the free-range structure going on to and ure flow was consistently dope, not a single spot that went off in my opinion. ure wordplay was real good, you used it for some good punches and personals. creativity was cool in places, but the main thing that let you down is you had far too many played concepts, i think there was shit about biting style, dickriding, forcing shit, lines about fuckin his girl, sickness lines and some more. daubs had some to, but you had far too many, you did put some nice twists on a couple of them but still they were played. OVERALL: 6.5/10


V/ - DAUBS

.....purely because he had a more consistently harder hitting and original, creative verse, he had some played concepts, but NK had a lot more and his punches lacked in comedy and power when compared with daubs.

no hate :thumbup:

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

checkin polls...............daymn this ish is long mayn

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

Daubs fucking owned him.......

^shoulda voted.....................................uppin for these guys

you come into EVERY one of my battles...saying the same shit.

Is that all's you do?


and mystic.....we don't need help uppin,thank you.

Kindly,fuk off.

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Voted For: Daubs

Damn long verses but they were both worth reading..so yeah here's what i think....

Daubs...opner wasnt as good as NK's but u still get this vote for a gd verse....wordplays were there and to my opinion they were very decent...metas were cool too and quite different from the usuals..vocab was ok not as loaded as i xpected but it was iight too...the verse kept on flowing and yeah that added a plus....and to conclude u had harder punches which keps on hitting and hitting....u had a cool verse and cudnt see anything wrong till the end part where some lines didnt rhyme like 'club with rhythm' but it was just 1 line so its understandable..



NK : yep u had a cool verse too...humour was there,opner was tight...i liked it...your verse kept on flowing and yeah structure was cool...vocab wasnt as loaded as i xpected but it was iight too..meta were there but not as different as daubs'....wordplays were there and they were quite decent...the reason y daubs gets my vot is cos ur verse was filled with personals and his was filled with punches....yeah u had punches too but they were quite less in number compared to ur opponent and they werent so so hard hitting like those of daubs...but like his verse urs was worth reading tho..


Both of u got skills and i think y'all showed it on here once again...this was a nice battle anyways...keep it up :thumbup:


ps : Daubs i xplained my vote better than u did on mine but what happened yesterday cant be repeated today so its iight...though i'ld just tell u that..lol

Thank you, and i appreciate you not hate voting in return.

Respect.

yeah and thanx for the hinted advice


...word up

AAH...behind the polls.. :mad:

ooh..well...it ain't over yet....

uppin.

Voted For: Natural killa

What.. the.. fuck..

Why the fuck are you guys going so many lines?

Jesus.

Daubs

Now you swear you gonna win this,it takes more to phase Daubs
But i am connecting with nature...like trees with chain-saws
3.. Decent concept.. simple wordplay..
Maybe I have one weak bar a verse, but this time my luck aint shut
But Natural Killa.....Shite...I already gone and fucked it up
4.. I used a punch pretty close to this a while ago..
Natural kills-A...so "lphabet" is now missing its pressence
And your words flow well.......when your spittin on letters
1.. Nah..
4,000 posts in a month, aint it time somebody found the outdoors
And my talent is a great find...but RV still hasn't found yours
6.. Pretty good..
Gonna kill us all, your killing yaself, RV is your fuckin life
& ya verse could emigrate to india...and still struggle findin spice
2.. Nope..
Second place is where u be-heading...so take off the neck shield
And im eatin nat up...like porn shows featuring mrs beddingfield
2.. Porn star punches are played..
NK thought literacy lessons included pickin up rubbish with glasses (litter i see)
But he's quick to take "it"..........like he was rushing mathmatics
3.. Didn't connect..
Talkin about school classes, why, this bitch was never clever to begin
I mean the only thing trini can count.........is on me takin the win
5.. Decent enough..
I aint talkin about chocolate when i say NK's bars are fillers
And a-lik on the mirror...is the only time trinis ever a killa
2.. You forced it too much..
Fuck, how is this the "final battle" when trini never even won one
And i know this wack cat aint NYC (nice) so erase where you come from
4.. Could have been worded better..
Grab and squeeze ya throat il take away your breathing fool
& its not unbelievable but, ive seen eggs that get less beat than you
1.. Not a chance..
Im leaving NK green and envious, like bread thats stale
And am not tossin coins when i say trini gives head 2 tails
1.. What the shit..
Hes dull to look at, like he were visiably impaired
& most of RV dont get your shit...the others just dont care
3.. I saw this done pretty close to this..
He looks like, smells of and acts like shit...but we already knew this
Because NK don't live by the sword......he just lives by the sewers
7.. Haha.. could have been worded better.. I still thought it was good..
Killa aint got dope concepts,but the lad he steels em from does
And he could be a surgeon with his heart in hand...and still feel no love
1.. Nope..
Its generic to say NK gets less claps than wack empty shows do
But i cant get too personal....cos none of RV even knows you
4.. Could have been worded better..
He's dumb so i told him to fuck learnin,he tried to hit books
Again im takin Trini out easily...like a hoe in a strip club
0.. No.. this sucked..
when we said natural was killin the flow, we meant a dead rhythm
I offered peace of mind,but trini had different ideas of head giving
2.. Not feeling..
You rappin text, and i aint talkin websites when i say i gotta soundclique
id search his house, and even if his fam were women...id still find dicks
0.. No fucking way..
Look, this never has been hasnt been here long, n he'salready past it
& girls hate on trini...cos posting on RV is the only time hes active
1.. Not good..

Overall - 52

Natural Killa

ur a bitch...no lie....so only if I could..i'd strike ur balls 'n tease
cuz daubs,i raped a girl last night,and it wuz all forced...
.........just like your multis
3.. You could have set this up way better.. decent concept though..
the polls are tied wit u 'n teph,but ur sig says something different instead
like desperate salesman,daubs,you always tryna put falseness into our head
2.. Nope..
better off,u dead...cos they all rootin for me..yet u the one pullin stems
cuz while trini lines are played....ur gonna make 40 lines full of them
1.. Considering they werent all about Trini.. nah..
ur brain thicker than wool 'n flem..ur crew got us all barking 'n strife
cos a member of LL's in the pen
......so no wonder everyone's started to type
8.. Lmao.. I thought this was good..
this shit's hardly even a fight...like ur mom's ass,i'm just left untouched
& ur passin to beg...cos whackness 'an egg..'n u got the nest in thrust
2.. Nah..
dressed in dust...ur rhymes are old news..'n yet u'd pay to hug that 'n kiss it
and i ain't talkin bout african surveys...when i say u love the blacklisting
4.. Could have been worded better..
u bite styles 'n dickride vets..but i'll still leave ya jaw fructured at the end of this
cos really... I ain't trying to play doctor...but ur structure's like a mimesis
5.. Haha.. this battle he didn't stay with my style, but I saw the battle where it was..
don't try to make any lines on pre-writing..YOU made a bitch move,stallin bouts
cos take a look at bitch slapped...it took you 5 days to accept my call-out
3.. Not so much..
i'm winnin wit small doubt cuz ur rhymes affectin none,it don't hurt
and you claim to bring sickness to rap....but infectin no one but the herbs
2.. Played..
die from the gun unheard..you UK pussies,you all stay mellow with the beef
dickridin the vets so much....shit....it's almost as yellow as ya'll teeth
1.. Nope..
say hello to defeat...fuckin pussy....better get ready to go through heat
must have missed a loop with the stitches..the way ur flow "SEW" weak
4.. Ehh.. decent..
cappin this song..u rappin so long and u ain't groom anything that'd blow
ur forkin ur lame raps to everyone...but you still ain't spoon any of the hoes
2.. Decent enough..
there's no room for ur shows...ur a waste...but u lying on the laps too soon
pokin this girl..cuz ur a joke to the whole world...but you still won't rap with toon
1.. No way..
capped 'n strewn...u got no balls...a woman'd have to push-ya to measure
fire comes to u 'n u try to squash beef faster than butchers under pressure
2.. Pretty played..
all comes as pleasure...shock u up..have u hawking up some tazers
but u blow RAYS with ur verses
..........and I'm not talking about lasers
3.. Could have been worded way better..
I'ma stalk this hater 'n bruise hiz letters cos i seen newbs spit better 'n demure
and he's been here as long as some 'a the vets...but still considered an amatuer
5.. I used a line like this in my last battle..

Overall - 48

However, Daubs went 40 lines and Natural Killa went 32.. So I'll switch it over to averages.

Daubs average line = 3.846, Natural Killa average line = 6.667

Honestly, I thought Daubs was going to take this.. and after I read his verse I didn't think Natural Killa was going to be able to top it.. but I have to vote for Natural Killa. Decent enough battle.. too many lines, though.

Vote - Natural Killa

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

wow at

Im leaving NK green and envious, like bread thats stale
And am not tossin coins when i say trini gives head 2 tails
1.. What the shit..

If you dont understand something, just pm me...
...and it aint my fault he didnt go as many lines.

Anyway, safe.

uuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

shiit lol dope battle... daubs you took this ez.. good battle both natureal you gonna suffer another loss when i drop my verse later.

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

^Just like your wordplays -_-

word^........................
up.................

when wuz the last time you saw me use wordplay?

anyways,

uppin.

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uppin.............................................

Sadly I don't have enough posts to vote, but here's nothing I've noticed.

Maybe I have one weak bar a verse, but this time my luck aint shut
But Natural Killa.....Shite...I already gone and fucked it up

Was incredibly similar, maybe even bitten from this Fracture punch against Espionage on Urbanprowlers.

I say one wack thing a verse, and already my lucks struck
...ESPIONAGE...... Gawd damnit I already fucked up

The was the way I saw it

ur brain thicker than wool 'n flem..ur crew got us all barking 'n strife
cos a member of LL's in the pen
......so no wonder everyone's started to type...
cappin this song..u rappin so long and u ain't groom anything that'd blow
ur forkin ur lame raps to everyone...but you still ain't spoon any of the hoes
capped 'n strewn...u got no balls...a woman'd have to push-ya to measure
fire comes to u 'n u try to squash beef faster than butchers under pressure

vs

Now you swear you gonna win this,it takes more to phase Daubs
But i am connecting with nature...like trees with chain-saws
Natural kills-A...so "lphabet" is now missing its pressence
And your words flow well.......when your spittin on letters
Second place is where u be-heading...so take off the neck shield
And im eatin nat up...like porn shows featuring mrs beddingfield
Im leaving NK green and envious, like bread thats stale
And am not tossin coins when i say trini gives head 2 tails
He looks like, smells of and acts like shit...but we already knew this
Because NK don't live by the sword......he just lives by the sewers
Look, this never has been hasnt been here long, n he'salready past it
& girls hate on trini...cos posting on RV is the only time hes active

Daubs came suprisingly nice actually, he had a very good amount of quotables and even his none quotables were pretty solid. Natural Killa came good too, just not really that quotable. Good battle actually, probably the best battle I've read on this site in recent times.

V/ Daubs

Voted For: Natural killa

Dis Was Kinda A One Side Battle...I Seriously Didn't See Any Real Punches Coming From Daubs....Dere Was Mad Personals And Punches From Killa I Like His Flow And His Structure....
Favorite Line=capped 'n strewn...u got no balls...a woman'd have to push-ya to measure
fire comes to u 'n u try to squash beef faster than butchers under pressure


so my vote goes to killa.......no hate....~1~

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

well....thx for the leaving feed/vote.....

uppin.

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

Polls.......................

uppin.............................................

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This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 

checkin the polllssss...

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uppin this shit I guess...........................

This was feedback posted for Daubs
 

good drop........im sure you got this man.........

uppin this shit...................................