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ehh fine, dooms, I had links yo, but I took it down, but I gtg to school in like 5 mins, so I can't get links in time. But I left feed on Q's 2 in one special shit, and is be like you or some track he did with black or ecko.
www.soundclick.com/moneyaintshitmas there.....ehh |
damn, i wanted to hear this shit....
what happened SpuL? |
nvm, i just found in on y'alls SClick
shit is pretty dope man, i dunno why u took it off :huh: |
as your e-style leader, I demand you to put it back up, this instant
so i can hear it... |
aiight I put it back...... lol
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SPuL, u know u got pro quality right ?
ur mic/setup = the shit |
nice..............nice flow nice lyrics.......i dunno wot to say lol its nice
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decree pretty good verse
tizzy reminds em of fab on this lol spul u shined the most on this lyrics and flow wise but props to all of you |
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lol thanks, man... but yea, shit is worth $350 total.... but it's Triple's mixin' really that helps a lot too. so props to him too. Cuz if I knew how to work my pre-amp shit would be 10 times better. But I suck @ that :( lol so don't be expecting my quality to be better, be real staticy :( lol but thanks to all for feed :) |
weerd yo
hit up that feed :cool: |
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yeah nice idea on this track...i liked the beat...cool...and y'all flowed pretty preety well...i like the rhymes too...nothing bd on it.and verse 1 was wow...tight!!
wun holla at mine too..:thumbup: |
^thanx yo
would be coo if some other people left some feedback......=/ |
^word it would be..... ~_~
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good all around
but very formulaic somethin u'd hear on the radio, but I'd turn the station 1 |
^aiight thanks yo.. pppp
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Know what's gay?
Sampling vocals or verses or whatever from real artists. |
^word thanks for listenin' yo.
and to answer your question, you are gay.. upp.......... |
all tizz really need is a lil feedd......
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upppppppppp..........
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first verse, vocals sound very bare, flow sounds rushed at times.. delivery is ok... lyrics are meh to simple... second verse, vocals again dnt sound right with the beat, maybe cud use sum more reverb... flow is abit choppy n hesitant at times... delivery ok, lyrics are average again.... 3rd, finally a good flow... delivery lacks presence though, but flow is good... lyrics are better..... ye track is ok hated the original, hate this beat, jagged edge dnt really interest me either n yall only did a decent job on ur verses
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Upp................
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weerd, jus a lil bit of uppin...
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lol...spul at his looping again.....ah'ight son......ok decree opening....ok son honestly I feel u either didn't use ya right for this beat or this beat jus aint for you....but u lacked the smoothness I think should have in ya delivery over this beat...aside from that....flow was koo...basic but koo...lyrically good....tizzle......ok u alil smoother on this...the flow is a bit choppy....quality is below par...however ya improvement is evident....ok spul...yea feeling the delivery u used big time....good shit the flow is simple but effective...liking how you draggin on ya words.......ya getting nice wit this style son...keep it up........1
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^aiight thanks man..... whenever you can record, shit'll be good. lol gotta holla @ sens too tho.. but word, thanks for feed. upp
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checkin it, nice remix, at da hook i was like dam then i reliazed it was jagged edge haha
and i thouhgt you sounded with fab so its a good song fa sho, some decent lyrics good concepts, more of a girl song tho holla back tho |
^holla!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aiight, thanks yo....... rise......... |
weerd i do sound like fab :cool:
lmao |
listening through some better than average speakers.
I HATE remixes to mainstream tracks that liek this. The first verse sounds a little flat as far as the dliv goes. The emotion is liek a full mood more mellow than the tope of the song and the vocalist sounded nasal with mild sound quality. The verse's lyrics were consistant with the hook and so on, but the deliv didn't math the meotion of the song. The second verse has worse sound quality than the first. It sounds like a kareoke machine in a shower and I can hear mad static til I hear em lean in and shut the mic down. Lyrics were solid and the ender was real nice. just needed a smack more emotion IMO. Third verse, has the most emotion so far, tho I didn't liek the emphasis on the rhymescheme. Sounds like "bligh bleh bleh bligh" and I personally can't stand that. The sound quality in it is muffled, just loud. Sounds like a sock over a mic. Lyrics were good, but this and the other three verses could have used some soft adlibs to make the verses pop because they're all relatively the same. From a marketing perspective, you guys made a mistake in all sounding liek the same artist with differnet voices. All the lyrics sounded the same and the message was the same on all three verses which would have been good, except that it lacked variety or other imagery and/or subject matter in the same overall message which made them seem "identical" instead of "similar". If one person took credit for all three verses it wouldn't surprise me personally - and that's how close they sound. Um..think that's about it. 1 Sounds liek someoen put osme reverb on the instrumental because it's got a whole lotta reverb on the vocals that I don't remember hearing in the past, but it's not a big deal. |
^^thanx for the feed dooms
my quality do sound bad, for some reason its been getting better and better each track though, so weerd.. and we'll take that similar sounding thing into consideration. |
yea props for feed dooms... uppp
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put that shit up for d/l !!!!!!!
just sickness... |
iite listeningg.......one of my favourite tracks...decree dawg quality not great, turn down the vocals slightly, lyrics pretty nice, flow edgye, choppy and no emotion, but keep at it, likin the M A S in the back around, the 2nd guy tizzle, came in good, quality ok, vocal volume fine, lyrics basic, flow fell off at one point a lil but came back up, iite waitin for Spul, aint talked to you for time huh, aiite peepin, likin the watchu want huh lol, come in pretty good, reminscent of a triple N flow, but emotional gotta be better, flow was great didnt fall off, my brown friend holdin it down!!!!..lol plz rtf to this:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210349 |
^lol haha word.... thanks to both of y'all... and int I got you dawg, jus gotta wait till I get on my computer. on my moms right now. but thanjks. upp
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IIte kl dawg...thanks...you shud put ure tracks up for download im lovin the tell me and the anthem
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not bad this was mixed real well...Decree and spul stood on beat best..tizzle yo verse seemed alil too simple but still none the less this is a decent track mixin made it sounds better then what it was good job on that imma give you a 8/10 iight holla 1ne...
P.s. im postin up some fire in a bit so make sure to peep that Ez 1ne... |
^Fa shos........=1=....
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weeeeeeeerd, thanx for feed :shoot:
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