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Dickard. 09-25-05 07:46 PM

Mystic Chaos vs tha notorious d
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 tko

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-26-05 at 07:46 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.


Win by 3-0 KO

System 09-25-05 07:47 PM

ThA NoToRiOuS D has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-25-05 07:47 PM.

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-25-05 09:35 PM

ayo come on dawg the only reason you 5-1
cuz u make them niggas vote or they'll swallow your gun

my punchlines are more deadly than a shot from yo gun
evrytime i battle ya'll cats..i do it fo fun

guzzling emcees like a bottle of OE
the only thing u defending is your friendship "homie"

im most wanted like Tickle Me Elmo last Christmas day
today seems the perfect day to test my word play

like glass, i punch you in the face and your shit shatters
get four shots on ur back..and your whole shit splatters

u should know from now that i carry the tec
similar to bin laden because im a threat

iight bet ma bad i took long....ayo uppin 4 dis shyt

System 09-26-05 07:08 PM

Mystic Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-05 07:08 PM.

Dickard. 09-26-05 07:59 PM

HaHaHaHa

finally the time has come...for this bitch ass to learn his lesson

Dawg ya rhymes is lame...i expect that from you
punches neva hitten...2 ya wins are from dq's
geeky little nerd pussy sumthin ya ass dont get
Fucka Notorious d santana dip dip santanna set set*
ya ass try's to hard ta look like that dude nah mean?
choke hold ya ass pop a gat...spray you in ya splean
Skinny motha fuck'a i see how you tryin ta ride my dick
Ya rhyme like ya constipated nigga ya force ya shit
Quote:
Originally Posted by ThA NoToRiOuS D
mystic is gay...simple as that
but he be getting hit more than a baseball bat
mystic is a poser

Elevatin ya punches....but dissin me in the cypher
P/m sayin ya dont want beef...boy i aint gettin no nicer
Topical head at your service merkin a text head tonight
Punk ass getting hungry my shit is wut he attempts to bite

*Look at the link....nuff said bout the jeulz santanna line lol

HiPnoTiK 09-26-05 08:08 PM

This was feedback posted for Mystic Chaos
 
Pollz .................................................. .

.:Mike Check:. 09-26-05 08:14 PM

Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D

checkin pollzzz...................................

Removed

.:Mike Check:. 09-26-05 08:15 PM

shit!...change that..it was spose to be feedback..

Dickard. 09-26-05 08:21 PM

^yo man im uppin for fuckin votes no more pollz!!!!

and yes i will remove that vote........

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-26-05 08:23 PM

wtf i didnt post that dis guy is going crazy... anyways...

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-26-05 08:26 PM

lol i pm'ed him wanting no beef look at my member mugshot he dont want beef....dis guy is a loser anyways uppin...

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-26-05 08:26 PM

neva that^^^^ i nevr pm'ed him sayin that anyways u dont even make sense u just wanna rhyme anyways...

str8 up rap 09-26-05 09:57 PM

Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D

ayo come on dawg the only reason you 5-1
cuz u make them niggas vote or they'll swallow your gun

my punchlines are more deadly than a shot from yo gun
evrytime i battle ya'll cats..i do it fo fun

guzzling emcees like a bottle of OE
the only thing u defending is your friendship "homie"

im most wanted like Tickle Me Elmo last Christmas day
today seems the perfect day to test my word play

like glass, i punch you in the face and your shit shatters
get four shots on ur back..and your whole shit splatters

u should know from now that i carry the tec
similar to bin laden because im a threat

iight bet ma bad i took long....ayo uppin 4 dis shyt


i give him a 8.5/10 he had more punches n if he really did say them things show us a link of him......


Elevatin ya punches....but dissin me in the cypher
P/m sayin ya dont want beef...boy i aint gettin no nicer
Topical head at your service merkin a text head tonight
Punk ass getting hungry my shit is wut he attempts to bite
i give him an 8/10 he ahd ok punches but he didnt flow as much....

i give this vote to tha notorious d

NO HATE!!

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-26-05 10:06 PM

i think he did....show us the link but yea for the admins thats not the unexplained vote!!! look up^^^

uppin

Dickard. 09-27-05 06:47 AM

the hell u talkin, that vote is unexplained...alls he did was cnp.....no explanation

Dickard. 09-27-05 06:24 PM

uppin like shit man.....................................

Ysdat 09-27-05 06:28 PM

Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Dawg ya rhymes is lame...i expect that from you
punches neva hitten...2 ya wins are from dq's
geeky little nerd pussy sumthin ya ass dont get
Fucka Notorious d santana dip dip santanna set set*

vs

like glass, i punch you in the face and your shit shatters
get four shots on ur back..and your whole shit splatters

u should know from now that i carry the tec
similar to bin laden because im a threat


weak battle

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-27-05 08:34 PM

iight w.e fucking fag tryna take votes away..........anyways uppin.....

Dickard. 09-28-05 12:28 PM

^lmao @ you callin me a fag for taken votes away.....u just took votes away...loser
go get another d/r

uppin.................

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-28-05 05:32 PM

yea i jus did dat cuz he didnt explain shyt.......u dont want me 2 send ppl ur pms so stfu

Ryda 09-28-05 07:43 PM

This was feedback posted for Mystic Chaos
 
pollz.............................................

Dickard. 09-28-05 08:06 PM

uppin............................................. ...............

PreZidict 09-28-05 09:14 PM

Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Notorious D

ayo come on dawg the only reason you 5-1
cuz u make them niggas vote or they'll swallow your gun
^^ehhhhhh nah [3-10]
my punchlines are more deadly than a shot from yo gun
evrytime i battle ya'll cats..i do it fo fun
^^blah [1-10]
guzzling emcees like a bottle of OE
the only thing u defending is your friendship "homie"
^^aha u tried humor so u could get a point [1-10]
im most wanted like Tickle Me Elmo last Christmas day
today seems the perfect day to test my word play
^^blah [1-10]
like glass, i punch you in the face and your shit shatters
get four shots on ur back..and your whole shit splatters
^^......... [2-10]
u should know from now that i carry the tec
similar to bin laden because im a threat
^^best one u had lol [3-10]

ALTOGETHER = 11%


Mystic Chaos

Dawg ya rhymes is lame...i expect that from you
punches neva hitten...2 ya wins are from dq's
^^good lil personal [5-10]
geeky little nerd pussy sumthin ya ass dont get
Fucka Notorious d santana dip dip santanna set set*
^^good shit [7-10]
ya ass try's to hard ta look like that dude nah mean?
choke hold ya ass pop a gat...spray you in ya splean
^^nice usage of wordplay [6-10]
Skinny motha fuck'a i see how you tryin ta ride my dick
Ya rhyme like ya constipated nigga ya force ya shit
^^ahaha nice humor [7-10]
Elevatin ya punches....but dissin me in the cypher
P/m sayin ya dont want beef...boy i aint gettin no nicer
^^blah he weak dun matter [5-10]
Topical head at your service merkin a text head tonight
Punk ass getting hungry my shit is wut he attempts to bite
^^he should of lol [6-10]

ALTOGETHER = 36%


creativity: mystic chaos
wordplay: mystic chaos
punchlines: mystic chaos
personals: mystic chaos
humor: both
multiples: mystic chaos
flow: mystic chaos

easy win, one sided battle ELEVATE @ notorious

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-28-05 09:22 PM

uppin............................................. ........................

Dickard. 09-29-05 04:37 PM

uppin............................................. ................................

Dickard. 09-29-05 09:39 PM

upp upp.............................................up

Spektikul 09-29-05 11:10 PM

Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Notorious

ayo come on dawg the only reason you 5-1
cuz u make them niggas vote or they'll swallow your gun
Weak...
my punchlines are more deadly than a shot from yo gun
evrytime i battle ya'll cats..i do it fo fun
The fuck is that...
guzzling emcees like a bottle of OE
the only thing u defending is your friendship "homie"
Gaaaaaaaayyyyyyy...
im most wanted like Tickle Me Elmo last Christmas day
today seems the perfect day to test my word play
No punch again...
like glass, i punch you in the face and your shit shatters
get four shots on ur back..and your whole shit splatters
Dont pretend your gansta...
u should know from now that i carry the tec
similar to bin laden because im a threat
Omfg...

You failed to throw one punch or personal at your opponent. If I were to give a mark from 0-10 on your verse, it would be a -2 because you hit yourself a couple times through wackness. Elevation is essential for you to survive on Rv...

Mystic


Dawg ya rhymes is lame...i expect that from you
punches neva hitten...2 ya wins are from dq's
Ok, weak opener tho...
geeky little nerd pussy sumthin ya ass dont get
Fucka Notorious d santana dip dip santanna set set*
Meh...
ya ass try's to hard ta look like that dude nah mean?
choke hold ya ass pop a gat...spray you in ya splean
Not a great punch attempt...
Skinny motha fuck'a i see how you tryin ta ride my dick
Ya rhyme like ya constipated nigga ya force ya shit
Booooo...
Elevatin ya punches....but dissin me in the cypher
P/m sayin ya dont want beef...boy i aint gettin no nicer
Weak...
Topical head at your service merkin a text head tonight
Punk ass getting hungry my shit is wut he attempts to bite
Ok closer...

You verse wasnt far off from your opponents for wackness. You also need to do some elevating yo. But all in all you won so congrats...

V/Mystic.....................

ThA NoToRiOuS D 09-29-05 11:16 PM

ok this guy is happy cause he got 33 wins so yea uppin.....

Dickard. 09-30-05 06:09 PM

uppin............................................. ...........

Dickard. 10-01-05 12:01 AM

uppin............................................. ...

Untraceable 10-01-05 12:11 AM

Voted For: Mystic Chaos

aiight MC got this batle

Not-aiight but you lack in hard hitting punches.....you need to work on incuring multi's in your verse to help with flow.....also...add some personals that diss the person to make your verse more effective....and dont space out your lines....just you need to elevate and work on punches...

MC-aiight good flow....your punches were harder hitting.....you incorprated personals..you need to work on flow though....add some multi's.......also you need to up your vocab as well.....but you came harder and had more punches landed....

v/MC
:thumbup:

Conceptions 10-01-05 12:15 AM

Voted For: Mystic Chaos

This Is What I Think

Flow- Goes To Mystic His ryme Flow was Ten Times Better Put Together Than Notorious d and he worded His lines better

Punchez- Goes To Mystic also For Puttin a More Intellectuall Punch of Originality into his verse and comin out on top overall

Personalz- Goes to as we Know Mystic Bcuz really he supplied the only real personal in this battle that was worthe noticing

Multiez- This Category Stays empty Bcuz I Did Not See any Multies from either of you :( I Am So Disapointed

Vocab- Goes to TNd he did sort of use the high type of vocab his verse But not That much better than Mystic di so it was a close area

Originality- Goes to Mystic for being more of course original ....I tink that his concept is a whole lot better and more unseen that Ntd so Yea I Give that to him

Overall I Give this battle vote to Mystic for as you can see in my breakdown for having the better verse overall

Please RTF In mY battle link in my Sig in 48 Hrs or less

Daubs 10-01-05 06:42 AM

This was feedback posted for Mystic Chaos
 
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