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Magic5 09-25-05 09:31 PM

Mister Elegiac vs. Mystic Chaos
 
2 Lines
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Elegiac 09-25-05 09:55 PM

Word, check and stuff.

Dickard. 09-26-05 04:18 PM

alright, checkin in....g'luck mate

Dickard. 09-27-05 07:38 PM

I know ya type, n i aint even see you spit..
Ya rap like ya constipated...ya force ya shit

^lol come on..you know u laughed...i sure as hell did.........:laugh:

Elegiac 09-27-05 08:05 PM

Lemme put this 'animal to rest,' he's wack so whatcha expect?
Because I'll be 'stuffing you, deer(dear)' like a 'taxidermy project!'

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G'luck. I'll edit this post with links when there is 2 more to vote on.

UderFrykte 09-27-05 08:33 PM

...I'd give this to Mister Elegiac but I'm in the Council. Or do crew votes don't matter? But really...constipation jokes, when they aren't original...nah.

Elegiac 09-27-05 08:34 PM

Dude you can't vote anyway lol you're not in the punch league..

Drop Dead 09-28-05 03:56 AM

Mystic Chaos

I know ya type, n i aint even see you spit..
Ya rap like ya constipated...ya force ya shit
Eh... It's Ok. Not Really Very Original Or Creative. Makes Sense, But Has That Played Factor. Overall, It's An Average Line And Bar.

Mister Elegiac

Lemme put this 'animal to rest,' he's wack so whatcha expect?
Because I'll be 'stuffing you, deer(dear)' like a 'taxidermy project!'
lol... Cool Wordplay. Seen The Dear/Deer Wordplay Be Used Some And Heard It Was Played, But It's A Good Flip. Good Wording And Concept. Overall, Good Bar.

Vote - Mister Elegiac - This Was A Pretty One Sided Match. ME Came With A Much More Original Flip Than MC. More And Better Wordplay As Well As A Better Concept. Cool Battle, But Mister Elegiac Takes This.

King Solo 09-28-05 05:18 AM

pretty average bar from elegiac, and a real weak bar from mystic

the whole forcin ya shit concept is played, and the whole using constipated as wordplay for forcing shit is played........so two times the playedness in ure bar.
elegiac, not the most original bar, the concept was flipped but it was still kinda played but it was a lot better than mystic's bar.

V/ - Mister Elegiac

E.C 09-28-05 07:36 AM

dam mystic.. you let us down lol.. it was funny in it's own way but make the conceot better n shit word them better aswell

mister elegiac... pretty decent bar good job.

v/ mister elegiac

Texxus 09-28-05 08:23 AM

v/Mister Elegiac...

TonyTone 09-28-05 10:15 AM

you both sucked

vote-elegiac for not coming completely played....a constipated punchline, come on now

N.Tavarez 09-28-05 10:59 AM

V/ Mister

Shit Lines Are Unacceptable

Spektikul 09-29-05 10:28 PM

Boooo Chaos, that concepts been used so much.

V/Misterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...

Adam 09-29-05 11:08 PM

Lmao @ the huge explanation by Drop Dead.

Vote: Mister Elegiac™

Sean Gunner 09-30-05 04:34 PM

v- Mr. Elegiac

MC: No originality at all, though it does apply to his verse, still a very weak punch. Think of wittier material.

ME: Your stuff does seem a little forced in there, but not that bad. Wordplay is aight, punch was ok too. Keep it up.

Daubs 09-30-05 06:08 PM

Mystic acame to played here,

V./ Elgaic.

Magic5 10-03-05 03:06 PM

Mister Elegiac wins by KO.
Mystic Chaos loses.

Magic5 10-03-05 03:06 PM

This thread is now closed.

Magic5 10-03-05 03:07 PM

Moved to Closed Battles.


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