CarsonJet vs Natural killa
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r
No HATE

"Natural killa cannot get DQ'd for having more than 5 battles open"

3-0 KO :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 09-26-05 at 09:10 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

Win by forfeit

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-05 06:37 PM.

CarsonJet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-05 07:04 PM.

Now let me start this piece, with a sigh of relief.....yes
I must confess, For a sec...I thought I called out a real vet
Instead I caught this,"a killa of text", thrown outta context
Boy, you couldn't spit tight' if you were dressed in spandex
So let's Digress, to the reason that your wins are joke
Your lines wouldn't be dope if you wrote em wit coke
Yes I know...you get vote's, But Killa take note....
Your broke...There's no one here left to go an Deep Throat

Your done, Your finished, Your in my cross-hair's...
You couldn't step up to this verse if I made you these stairs
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ok....let's get some votes :)

This was feedback posted for CarsonJet
 

lol nice verse man........pollz FAM..............................

Voted For: CarsonJet

haha k

natural- your rhyme shceme is wierd.....im not feeling it..but punches didn't hit ahrd you had like 2

carson- punches were good nothing real special but they were iight...better rhyme shceme than nk...so im gonna give it to you...better punches and it flowed better than nk.'s...

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Voted For: CarsonJet

Your lines wouldn't be dope if you wrote em wit coke
Yes I know...you get vote's, But Killa take note....
Your broke...There's no one here left to go an Deep Throat

Your done, Your finished, Your in my cross-hair's...
You couldn't step up to this verse if I made you these stairs
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|___________>you.

vs

'n reason for no award isn't cuz 'a herbs...reason for no award..
.................is cuz YOU SUCK!!.......
all 'em threads,PM's,& IM's..wow..ur either obsessed or gay for that tattle 'n spin
cos shit...I think this cat's fallen in love...this is MORE than a battle to him -_-
rattle ur shins 'n hookin ya flight..u shook in this fight..u prolly gonna bite some shit
and u ain't got no errands to run..u just checkin in late just to pre-write ur shit

close battle

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unexplained votes....wtf..........................

OK. close this battle. Im just gonna keep gettin votes an keep gettin them takin away.
waistin my time with one whome can't take a loss.
no wonder your 21-4....I can imagine u do this shit all the time.

Im gettin strobe to close it.

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Voted For: CarsonJet

Good job real nice i liked your flow better and better punches

CarsonJet edged it

This was feedback posted for CarsonJet
 

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Voted For: Natural killa

CarsonJet
Now let me start this piece, with a sigh of relief.....yes
I must confess, For a sec...I thought I called out a real vet
^^nothin too hard, no real personal [5-10]
Instead I caught this,"a killa of text", thrown outta context
Boy, you couldn't spit tight' if you were dressed in spandex
^^spandex bar? old as fuck [1-10]
So let's Digress, to the reason that your wins are joke
Your lines wouldn't be dope if you wrote em wit coke
^^that was aight but u tend to use played concepts [5-10]
Yes I know...you get vote's, But Killa take note....
Your broke...There's no one here left to go an Deep Throat
^^that was aight not that hot though [4-10]
Your done, Your finished, Your in my cross-hair's...
You couldn't step up to this verse if I made you these stairs
^^i think that was ya best line [7-10]

ALTOGETHER = 22%

Natural Killa
splittin ya gaurd..i'm spittin so hard..ur soul's quezy..it's a giddy flight
can't say I got no life,mister
.......ur 21 years old on this damn kiddy site....
^^ehh that was a straight line set-up was okay [6-10]
ya shit hits me light..claim ur on a roll?..well ur bout to fall back on those wheels
ur an audio head battlin me..but it don't matter..ur whack on both feilds
^^so so [5-10]
cracking ur sheilds...if u ever won anything..guess wat?..it was all luck
'n reason for no award isn't cuz 'a herbs...reason for no award..
.................is cuz YOU SUCK!!.......
^^ehh kinda good but kinda bad [4-10]
all 'em threads,PM's,& IM's..wow..ur either obsessed or gay for that tattle 'n spin
cos shit...I think this cat's fallen in love...this is MORE than a battle to him -_-
^^ahahaha good humor to liven up ya verse [7-10]
rattle ur shins 'n hookin ya flight..u shook in this fight..u prolly gonna bite some shit
and u ain't got no errands to run..u just checkin in late just to pre-write ur shit
^^prewrite <--frequently used but nice tho [6-10]

ALTOGETHER = 28%



wordplay--> natural killa
punchlines--> natural killa
personals--> neither
multiples--> neither
creativity--> both
structure--> carsonjet
humor--> natural killa
flow--> both

overall: Natural Killa

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i dunno why ur gettin people to vote.....
it's gettin closed.

get em to vote for u on ur other battles.

This was feedback posted for CarsonJet
 

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