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Black Arts vs Shazz
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6 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-28-05 at 09:52 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Black Arts has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-05 06:53 PM.
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I'm here to break your flow, i'm coming ready or not like fugees
Like the rapist on the wing this nigga only fucks with newbies* Foo please couldn't be wanker if your flow rubbed in your man's hand I'm making tits like you hit floor like Pamela doing a handstand I saw your battles, shawn, soft like titty porn so stop please Even bored yourself halfway through your name and caught Zz** *all the people shazz has battled have been new to rv **real name's shawn |
Shazz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-05 07:58 PM.
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______________ Your not even on my level for me to battling black arts He talkin to me on aim…. like he new to this rap game If this was audio….ya would mumble like Mike Jones Like you right now you in strees… just a bunch of moans Get a permit sayin you know what a battle is, seriously Fuck im curious that why you reapting continuously ______________ (blah...Typed in 6 min or less) |
Your not even on my level for me to battling black arts
He talkin to me on aim…. like he new to this rap game ^^i never spoke to you on aim If this was audio….ya would mumble like Mike Jones Like you right now you in strees… just a bunch of moans Get a permit sayin you know what a battle is, seriously Fuck im curious that why you reapting continuously ^^^i aint repeat jack you dumb prick |
Voted For: Shazz
pollz............................................. ............... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Shut the fuck up dude? You lookin over all my battles and stalking me? Knowning my name? Bitch.... |
This was feedback posted for Black Arts
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at least my personals are real and fyi "shut the fuck up dude" is a statement and not a question stay in school |
^YOU STFU
seriously drop it damn... Fuckin cussing over nothing... You have to start shit after i drop?ok? Uppin. |
Voted For: Black Arts
weak battle, but your play on his name won it for you. This battle is even the entire way thru, but black arts closure won it for him Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Shazz
checkin the fuckin polls.
I mite vote as NK later today.. |
sure uppi n
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Black...I know you have d/r's rofl................
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Voted For: Shazz
idk about this one but, i liked this, but both verses were good, lets see.. flow was ight, could have been better, vocab was straight, personals umm.. were there.. :/ multi's..were isght.. V/Shazz |
Voted For: Black Arts
I saw your battles, shawn, soft like titty porn so stop please Even bored yourself halfway through your name and caught Zz** vs. Get a permit sayin you know what a battle is, seriously Fuck im curious that why you reapting continuously black arts defiantely got this 1 for he had mor punches and i actually k.o knew what he was saying...NO HATE u gotta elevate man.......both of ya'll do....NO HATE... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
sure uppi n
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Voted For: Black Arts
black arts has this one by far...better punches, real personal shit, better flowz and overall better verse...a piece if advise for shazz...if tht was all in 6 mins, i suggest u spend a bit more time on ur rapz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Um .
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Voted For: Black Arts
some good punches by BA, witty if not hard-hitting rofl at u callin him a tit shazz's first bar dont rhyme, n the rest of the punches arent witty OR hard-hittin, so ba's better there nothin else really stood out, so BA wins vote- Black Arts RTF to the link in my sig :thumbup: |
Voted For: Shazz
Get a permit sayin you know what a battle is, seriously Fuck im curious that why you reapting continuously VS I saw your battles, shawn, soft like titty porn so stop please Even bored yourself halfway through your name and caught Zz I liked shazz's verse better it had better flow, and i liked the punches Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Black Arts
Your not even on my level for me to battling black arts He talkin to me on aim…. like he new to this rap game 3....didn't rhyme...and how is talking to you on AIM making him "new" to the rap game? If this was audio….ya would mumble like Mike Jones Like you right now you in strees… just a bunch of moans 3....weak..... Get a permit sayin you know what a battle is, seriously Fuck im curious that why you reapting continuously 2....what are talking about him repeating for? I'm here to break your flow, i'm coming ready or not like fugees Like the rapist on the wing this nigga only fucks with newbies* 4...ok...at least it's an attempt of a personal Foo please couldn't be wanker if your flow rubbed in your man's hand I'm making tits like you hit floor like Pamela doing a handstand 4....kinda played... I saw your battles, shawn, soft like titty porn so stop please Even bored yourself halfway through your name and caught Zz** 5...in the 1st line..the "shawn" part came outta no where....but the punch was nice, Ok...One-sided I am being brutaly honest here,Shazz. ur verse was horrible.ANd I don't care about that 6 mins. excuse.U had mad time to make ur verse...so why would you spend just 6 minutes on it?Don't make excuses son. As for ur punches....weak.That 1st bar...why is talking to someone on AIM mean they "new" to the rap game?I don't see any reason it would mean that.And that last bar...why would u say he repeats?Cos if he spits 2 bars that are different from each other..then you automatically look stupid as he didn't repeat himself.And that's borderline fake personal.Think ya bars through and make sure they make sence next time. Vote-Black Arts Drop a vote in the link below.......... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210265 |
Voted For: Shazz
shazz came stronger in this battle and with more punches . he had a good structure and he was personal vt/shazz |
you cannot seriously believe that lame ass vote aint gettin removed
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i think this was a weak battle . or maybe the people on rapbattles.com are better but thats not the point , in this battle neither opponent came with a flo or somethin unique and the amount of lines left no space for creativity.
Shazz- I like your verse not bad....But you were alot better back then when you were on RB this kinda sucks compared to others, You have lost your touch...Your wordplay was alright.....Flow was good, black arts- weak u didnt sho me anything personal and u didnt sho any emotion or solid punches . i hope this was a weak battle for u. |
sorry i posted more shit after i voted , i know that it was bad feed the first time
dont hate cuz u had one vote against u this is supposed to help u elevate not work on anger management |
Voted For: Shazz
Shazz- Verse was ok, The wordplay was ok the flow was pretty good. Its like you just spit from the top of your head but it guess thats ok. Ive seen you do alot better this was kinda weak. Your first 2 lines were pretty played out, Your ended ok though, The mike jones one i got it was alright. but it was enough to win it. Black Arts- Your verse was alot different then his, Your flow was basic and that one pamela handstand shit wasen't getting that really at all....did you do research on him? shawn? that came out of no where....Didn't make sense to me either its like you know his name but what could you do with it?... Didn't get your verse too much. And The ZZ is played v/shazz |
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nah im cool now that i saw some decent feed peace |
Mmmmmm...I want this closed without all these gay DQ's...
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Voted For: Shazz
im givin this to shazz cuz he had some nice ass vocab and beautiful flow and structure...nice punches to go along wit it...line that won it was... Get a permit sayin you know what a battle is, seriously Fuck im curious that why you reapting continuously ^^^that 1...some might not agree wit my vote but i think it was a lot better...nice job both and no hate at al to either |
^^^so the punch you believe won it was the only punch in the battle that made no sense :huh:
fuckin herb |
Voted For: Black Arts
I think black arts took this one, i feel that black arts came harder Punches - Black Arts Metaphors - BA Flow - BA Humor - BA Overall - BA |
Yo DQ my vote , i haven't voted text in a long time......................
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Voted For: Shazz
v/ shazz no offense, but pretty weak battle.. 6 lines i expect to see some hard punches all the way through... barely saw any shazz had much better flow, everyone of BA's lines were stretched.. punchlines ya'll were about even (i hate when people have to explain their punches though) shazz had a nice lil ender as well v/ shazz, his verse was all around better.. |
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