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fraud vs GKillaz05
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10-16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Good Luck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-29-05 at 12:47 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-05 12:20 PM.
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fraud has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-05 12:41 PM.
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Your lyric's are 'bad bitch'... you will never find a dime...
Couldnt flow a decent line even if Mike Jones wrote ya rhyme... Should be a crime to pick up a pen, puttin' ya text to rest... Your raps are fake, the only cheese you'll make is processed... Smashin' fraud like glass... my lyrical test you cant pass... Fraud your like a student skippin'a period you got no class... Fraud's raps are ass like cheeks... time to smash this geek... Kid wears high heals when he raps to be at his highest peak... Slash this hoe, your rap flows are like a hose with a leak... Aint runnin' smoothly, time to end this wannabe with a kink... Shut him off like a sink wash all of his shit down the drain... Every line you write blows, like Fraud was blowin' cocaine... Writing phoney shit... just quit it... man your a disgrace... Threw a fan in his speaker just so he could have a fan base... Your losin' this race, your lines are awed cuz there flawed... Mods say your spits are fraud, because your really a broad... |
you want a battle you know how the story-go's
you'll get beat N put in a black N white suit like oero Damn, First it was a amateur,……Now you’re just as ‘Weak Too’ RV must think your a hand job, the way the want me to ‘beat you In dungeons I keep you, Ya wack raps I quickly damage with these spits I just wanna know how did you ‘Get Retarded’ b4 Canibus released it?? The verse of stealth,the purpose felt, gkillah dont hurt ya self "never ill" cuz your as bout as "sick" as people with perfect health 500 degree's bars makin you melt, this aint a spiritual bout Couldnt even win in "structure" if you had an even syllable count Like "hail" I drop hard, win with a "smile" cuz im a "southstar" gkillah you couldn't "spit hot" if "lava" was a type of "mouthwash" Your pathetic, I flow genetic, Gkillah it's "BOLD to see "drunkies"wouldnt like ya"bars"even if you gave away for free I refuse to staul, your loosing all, Gkillah hot? he's confussing yall Cuz I flow like "fire extinghishers" how easily I "cool him off" 15 min, good luck fam 1st bar: Http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201011 |
nice verse,
i can admitt i think you came harder then I so good battle, if i lose its cool nice spit-box-'in with ya upp'in for votes |
Voted For: GKillaz05
iight yo... GK gets this cos his verse was just dope....he had a nice structure and his whole verse just had a tight flow...punches hit hard and metaz were decent...vocabs werent loaded but at least his own was better and talking about the wordplay they were quite interessting and good...fraud dont space ur bars it makes the structure and flow wack...no offence dude but u not to this guys knee...Gkillaz killed this with a complete verse,i mean his verse had what it takes to win a decent battle...gd looking :thumbup: rtf on http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=204885 ^ me vs what ever it takes -wun |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
gkillaz-Your verse was good to read, you had good multis...that made me like your verse the most...you had good intact punches that hit hard...and good back up personals..that were appealing...your structure was tight...i was able to cop a good flow man......overall..8/10 Fraud-Yo man your verse was not very good to read.You had messed up structure that was hard to follow.up on ur structure for real yo...your punches were iight...some concepts played....u had a couple good personals man...your flow was tacky...hard to get....your verse lacked a lot...overall 6/10 v/gkillaz05 rtf within 48 hours or this vote is dq'd |
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This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
You're starting to annoy me.
After I battle K.S. we're going to battle. |
This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
you go Gkillaz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Your lyric's are 'bad bitch'... you will never find a dime... Couldnt flow a decent line even if Mike Jones wrote ya rhyme... 3.......woulda hit better if ya said someone else besides Mike Jones..cos mike jones ain't all that lyrically. Should be a crime to pick up a pen, puttin' ya text to rest... Your raps are fake, the only cheese you'll make is processed... 4....decent. Smashin' fraud like glass... my lyrical test you cant pass... Fraud your like a student skippin'a period you got no class... 3...played. Fraud's raps are ass like cheeks... time to smash this geek... Kid wears high heals when he raps to be at his highest peak... 4...decent punch,nice flow wit the internals Slash this hoe, your rap flows are like a hose with a leak... Aint runnin' smoothly, time to end this wannabe with a kink... 2...kink and leak don't rhyme... Shut him off like a sink wash all of his shit down the drain... Every line you write blows, like Fraud was blowin' cocaine... 3....drug lines are played as well... Writing phoney shit... just quit it... man your a disgrace... Threw a fan in his speaker just so he could have a fan base... 5....good Your losin' this race, your lines are awed cuz there flawed... Mods say your spits are fraud, because your really a broad... 2...seems like ur sayin shit just cos it rhymes...why would mods call him a fraud cos he's a broad???..makes no sense. you want a battle you know how the story-go's you'll get beat N put in a black N white suit like oero 1...no punch...just you threatning him. Damn, First it was a amateur,……Now you’re just as ‘Weak Too’ RV must think your a hand job, the way the want me to ‘beat you 3...forced multi there...ok punch In dungeons I keep you, Ya wack raps I quickly damage with these spits I just wanna know how did you ‘Get Retarded’ b4 Canibus released it?? 1...this was whack. The verse of stealth,the purpose felt, gkillah dont hurt ya self "never ill" cuz your as bout as "sick" as people with perfect health 0...the punch here was played to death..and a lot of pointless multis there that are saying nothing. 500 degree's bars makin you melt, this aint a spiritual bout Couldnt even win in "structure" if you had an even syllable count 2....no,even sllyable counts don't ensure perfect structure Like "hail" I drop hard, win with a "smile" cuz im a "southstar" gkillah you couldn't "spit hot" if "lava" was a type of "mouthwash" 2...no...set-up was irrelevant and spit hot lines are played. Your pathetic, I flow genetic, Gkillah it's "BOLD to see "drunkies"wouldnt like ya"bars"even if you gave away for free 2...gave what away for free?...weak punch. I refuse to staul, your loosing all, Gkillah hot? he's confussing yall Cuz I flow like "fire extinghishers" how easily I "cool him off" 2...man,another played line... ok...seemed to be a quick battle by both. Fraud... I see ur trying to incorparate multis in ya verse...but it's not working.Ur either forcing them or wreckin a good concept of a punch wit it.Try to stay away from multis for now and get used to using punches first.U also had too many played lines.All those "spit hot" and dick lines are played... GKillaz.. Not the best shit in the world...but it was enuff..U also had played lines.You also seemed to force some internals.(ie..Your last bar) V/Gkillaz. *favor returned* |
Voted For: GKillaz05
AIGHT AIGHT FRAUD....your shit was GOOD......NOT GREAT but GOOD......... Damn, First it was a amateur,……Now you’re just as ‘Weak Too’ RV must think your a hand job, the way the want me to ‘beat you:>>>NICE LINE I refuse to staul, your loosing all, Gkillah hot? he's confussing yall Cuz I flow like "fire extinghishers" how easily I "cool him off" :>>>NICE LINE ALSO..... G KILLAH Your flow went good.......Vocab was aight.....NOTHING SPECIAL FROM BOTH OF YOU......G ive seen better drops from you.......so come out the way THE G is suppose too homie..... Your lyric's are 'bad bitch'... you will never find a dime... Couldnt flow a decent line even if Mike Jones wrote ya rhyme... >>>NICE PUNCH... Fraud's raps are ass like cheeks... time to smash this geek... Kid wears high heals when he raps to be at his highest peak...>>>>>SHIT WAS GOOD....FAV. LINE BOTH did ya thing ya know.......but overall....to me G won this by a lil edge...... V/GKILLAH....Better VERSE...... Nice punches...multi's and FLOW............. |
Voted For: fraud
fraud: you want a battle you know how the story-go's you'll get beat N put in a black N white suit like oero ^^^DECENT OPENER...NOTHIN DAT HARD Damn, First it was a amateur,……Now you’re just as ‘Weak Too’ RV must think your a hand job, the way the want me to ‘beat you ^^^LOL FUNNY SHIT I NEVA SEEN ANY1 USE IT In dungeons I keep you, Ya wack raps I quickly damage with these spits I just wanna know how did you ‘Get Retarded’ b4 Canibus released it?? ^^LMAOO DOPE..DAT SONG WAS HOT The verse of stealth,the purpose felt, gkillah dont hurt ya self "never ill" cuz your as bout as "sick" as people with perfect health ^^^UHHH NAH 500 degree's bars makin you melt, this aint a spiritual bout Couldnt even win in "structure" if you had an even syllable count ^^OKAY Like "hail" I drop hard, win with a "smile" cuz im a "southstar" gkillah you couldn't "spit hot" if "lava" was a type of "mouthwash" ^^^U KIND OF FORCED DIS 2 RYHME Your pathetic, I flow genetic, Gkillah it's "BOLD to see "drunkies"wouldnt like ya"bars"even if you gave away for free ^^^U SHOULD OF WORDED DIS BETTA I refuse to staul, your loosing all, Gkillah hot? he's confussing yall Cuz I flow like "fire extinghishers" how easily I "cool him off" ^^^WEAK CLOSER gkillaz05: Your lyric's are 'bad bitch'... you will never find a dime... Couldnt flow a decent line even if Mike Jones wrote ya rhyme... ^^^NAH Should be a crime to pick up a pen, puttin' ya text to rest... Your raps are fake, the only cheese you'll make is processed... ^^^LOL OKAY Smashin' fraud like glass... my lyrical test you cant pass... Fraud your like a student skippin'a period you got no class... ^^PLAYED... Fraud's raps are ass like cheeks... time to smash this geek... Kid wears high heals when he raps to be at his highest peak... ^^^NO Slash this hoe, your rap flows are like a hose with a leak... Aint runnin' smoothly, time to end this wannabe with a kink... ^^^^NOPE Shut him off like a sink wash all of his shit down the drain... Every line you write blows, like Fraud was blowin' cocaine... ^^^U WORDED DIS TERRIBLE Writing phoney shit... just quit it... man your a disgrace... Threw a fan in his speaker just so he could have a fan base... ^^^LOL DATZ HOTT Your losin' this race, your lines are awed cuz there flawed... Mods say your spits are fraud, because your really a broad... ^^^NAH v/fraud...g u had 2 hott lines da rest were wack |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
you want a battle you know how the story-go's you'll get beat N put in a black N white suit like oero no, weak. Damn, First it was a amateur,……Now you’re just as ‘Weak Too’ RV must think your a hand job, the way the want me to ‘beat you played to fuck, no. In dungeons I keep you, Ya wack raps I quickly damage with these spits I just wanna know how did you ‘Get Retarded’ b4 Canibus released it?? didnt rhyme well but still a good punch. The verse of stealth,the purpose felt, gkillah dont hurt ya self "never ill" cuz your as bout as "sick" as people with perfect health played flip...decent flow. 500 degree's bars makin you melt, this aint a spiritual bout Couldnt even win in "structure" if you had an even syllable count me, not really a diss...original conceot tho. Like "hail" I drop hard, win with a "smile" cuz im a "southstar" gkillah you couldn't "spit hot" if "lava" was a type of "mouthwash" nooooo...weak played concept and dint rhyme well. Your pathetic, I flow genetic, Gkillah it's "BOLD to see "drunkies"wouldnt like ya"bars"even if you gave away for free again flipped played concept, was ight. I refuse to staul, your loosing all, Gkillah hot? he's confussing yall Cuz I flow like "fire extinghishers" how easily I "cool him off" weak rhyme good punch. __________________________________________________ ____________ Your lyric's are 'bad bitch'... you will never find a dime... Couldnt flow a decent line even if Mike Jones wrote ya rhyme... ok i guess. Should be a crime to pick up a pen, puttin' ya text to rest... Your raps are fake, the only cheese you'll make is processed... nice Smashin' fraud like glass... my lyrical test you cant pass... Fraud your like a student skippin'a period you got no class... played concept but meh. Fraud's raps are ass like cheeks... time to smash this geek... Kid wears high heals when he raps to be at his highest peak... flipped pleayed concept, was ight. Slash this hoe, your rap flows are like a hose with a leak... Aint runnin' smoothly, time to end this wannabe with a kink... meh... Shut him off like a sink wash all of his shit down the drain... Every line you write blows, like Fraud was blowin' cocaine... no, not feelin this one Writing phoney shit... just quit it... man your a disgrace... Threw a fan in his speaker just so he could have a fan base... played Your losin' this race, your lines are awed cuz there flawed... Mods say your spits are fraud, because your really a broad... meh. __________________________________________________ __________ Both came played, GK came less played. V GK... hit up my oreo battle or i will delete this vote :thumbup:. |
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