UderFrykte vs PreZidict
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-02-05 at 05:34 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

PreZidict has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-05 05:50 PM.

UderFrykte has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-05 05:58 PM.

wtf nigga spit ya fuckin verse i aint post up bars 4 nothin dude

...Er...crip does not rhyme with lilacs, I never cried when you said I spit first...what in the fuck are you talking about in that verse?

nigga stfu lol who da hell said u were really "cryin"?? like u said its da "net", its a verse, its not that serious

so all ya "personals" about me in ya verse is "true"? lol come da fuck on calm down and shut up


VOTE NIGGAS

You're stupid. I didn't really even use personals, but you used a fake one. Is it okay for me to go say 'Nigga came over to my house one day and started crying because I lied about my hamster having died, true story'. It's a fake personal, I never said anything about anyone spitting first...

i know, its a VERSE, niggas come up wit random lines like that one all da time...u stressin it, we all know u ain really "cry" on da fuck on man damn

I know. But that doesn't make it less of a fake personal...I mean, if you are going to say I do something make it funny, not 'he cried'...oh no, you said I cried...what an original insult.

But I do love you. :love:

This was feedback posted for PreZidict
 

polzzz............................................ ...

chea lata we can rematch without "fake" personals then....its nothin, vote up niggas

This was feedback posted for PreZidict
 

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voooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooote up

Voted For: PreZidict

how are u fuckin with greatness? when your a nobody who's nameless?
u'll neva get famous, cuz ya lines "flat-ASSed" so dudes "ignorin ur anus"!!
- Good Punch here...Nice wordplay

u must be itchin for L's, cuz ur gettin smoked quick..like blunts outside jails
feel satans fury i'm givin u hell, u mention me well...ur cursed, i'ma "spell"!!
- Nope Not a Good Punch....

who said ur good? dats a lie, must be prone 2 fakes dey feedin u bribes
dis battles no tie, he'll probably rhyme about lions, tigers, bears...OH MY!
- Weak

lmao how u winnin me nigga? when all ur bars consist of using a trigger..
to kill me, how can u call yourself gangsta?? when your gun is ur printer!!
- Meh OK punch

nigga set it up for nine oh two oh five, remember...thats da date u'll die
i cant believe dis guy, look up 2 Jesus...so he must wanna be "crucified"
- Alright Nice bar Punch here with a wordplay..

u nice i lied, dont even try, 2 contest dez "shots" dey'll eat ya "jays" alive (shots in bball r called jays)
dis bee got hives, told him to DROP FIRST....he fell on his face den cried!
- Weak

i'll keep u chilled like its winter, fagget dont touch my bars u'll get splinters
half da lines i wrote werent "strong" but "weak" enough 2 keep urs injured
- First Line played but worded differently, the 2nd line is weak (Bar Punch)

kid i'm grippin ya chest u'll feel it, keep drippin that "red"...you feel "crip"?
what da fuck is a tomb? after your shot...i'll lay u before a bed of Lilacs!!
- Ok Nice lil personal Punch, good closure.

Meh I felt you game average in this battle, rarely you come good with wordplays and Meta's with decent Punches but i don't see that here...weak Punches good flow though and wordplays but the punches were weak.

We know you love to go shopping, but that's not the only time you're mauled;
I'm not talking of sharks in prison when I say we want you to shut your Jaws.
- Ha Nice opener Punch

Don't go audio, if we played it backward's we'd hear Satan. Don't get me wrong...
If we listened to it forwards we'd have to go and hear the fucking song.
- 1st Line is good but the 2nd line as the following up punch was not good...weak Punch

Shit, that was great, thanks man, I needed a laugh. Nice verse, Pre....
I know I'm not much for text at the moment...but goddamn, you must be free.
- Ok personal Punch...but weak

You know, this is the net, we're playing around, but this isn't that funny:
I said,"five bucks says I win this" and you thought I had some talking money.
- Ok closure.

I felt the opener was the best Punch in your verse, the others were weak...could've put more personals and flip them into Punches.

Overall- My vote goes to Prez cause basically even though his Punches were weak and some-what played out..He still came harder though than underfrykte...Underfrykte your Punches were weak and should've came up with more personals...

v/ Prez

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=207202 RTF

chea it aint my best i did this shit quick but its whateva good lookin

UP

uppin this shit for us, niggas vooooooooooooote up

Lmao

kid i'm grippin ya chest u'll feel it, keep drippin that "red"...you feel "crip"?
what da fuck is a tomb? after your shot...i'll lay u before a bed of Lilacs!!
- Ok Nice lil personal Punch, good closure.

^ How is that good closure? It doesn't rhyme, for god's sake.

Whatever.

voooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooote uppppppppp

voooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooote up

gotdamn...........................................

Voted For: PreZidict

vote: pre only cuz he had alot more fire in hes verse, more bars, more punches, and was more creative, if you 2 would of had a set line limit it would of been close
cuz UderFrykte was creative and made me laugh more but just aint have enough of the fire...

RTF of a vote.

voooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooote uppppppp

This was feedback posted for PreZidict
 

I Think Pre Won No Doubt..He had Better Punches...WORdplay...multis...enjoyment.....flow was tie...

Voted For: PreZidict

ok this battle was aiight... both had some good shit...

UF - your verse had some very played lines, that were unoriginal, it flowed well but in some parts it feel off and got hard to read, your punches were ok, even though u coulda made em hit alot harder...
you needa use more hard hittin personals than some wack shit about his audio, you also need to up your vocabulary a fair bit, you coulda used sum multis to make it flow a bit more..
i didnt reali have a favorite line or bar.. nothin realli stood out to me.. so elevate some more brah... no hate..

PreZ - you took advantage of the unlimited lines, and used that to bring out some good lines, although your verse was long it flowed well and only fell off in mabey 2 bars, so i liked ya flow, had some good vocabulary in there too.. but u needa up ur vocab too, your punches were alot more thought out and not as rushed, and you too need to use some hard personals.. that woulda made ya verse sick.. but i gotta give you this win because of all over a better verse...

Vote - PreZ.. no hate..

chea, upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin

This was feedback posted for PreZidict
 

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Voted For: PreZidict

Although PreZididict brought a lot of punches to the table like he himself admitted in his verse they were mostly rather weak... with that being said... he still easily had the better verse... Uder's verse didn't really punch at all and the few that might be cosidered punches had no real impact... making this decision a rather easy one... Pre took this hand over fist....

Vote: PreZidect

Voooooooooooooooooooooote Up, Prez Is Back......make It 16 Wins



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Voted For: UderFrykte

nothing

v.s.

Don't go audio, if we played it backward's we'd hear Satan. Don't get me wrong...
If we listened to it forwards we'd have to go and hear the fucking song.


vote for underfrykte for a 1 ok bar...

return the favor in one of these battles please

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=227954

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228394

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=229492

thanks