+Gunz+ vs Black Arts
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-01-05 at 02:09 AM

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+Gunz+ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-05 05:42 PM.

Man Black anit "creative"......so his "art" his nonsense
cuz he steady "Drawin Blanks"....like a retards consience
Male of Female..hell whos really kno's his state of health
Dick and pussy on oppasite legs.............
so it's a undertstement to tell him to fuck himself
Who's the boss...saw Gunz srtobe said your loss
6point stairs reject him devil repented and copped a cross



quick key...................

Black Arts has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-30-05 06:48 PM.

Guns? now i know this kids gonna talk some tired shit
Wouldn't know an auto, if i left your face in my tyres grip
Like Stephen Hawking, you just dribble, can't spit, you're lame
How you gonna aim punches, when your crosshairs can't even hit your name?
Final question...............why'd do rap? can't hide you're wack, surprised at that?
Nigga couldn't blow up if he sucked a dick, he can't disguise the fact
G please you're wackness personified in the shape-of-a-herb
You writing all your shite should be classed as "rape-of-a-word"

right let the voting begin

This was feedback posted for +Gunz+
 

polls............................................. .

good verse.

Voted For: +Gunz+

gunz-your verse was pretty dope, you incorporated some pretty decent vocab although minor spelling problems..it was nice...ur structure wasnt all that but didnt take off the flow..nice man....nice punches and personals...wordplay was good...overall ur verse was about 6/10 g'job

black arts-Your verse was poorly structured. The problem with this was that ur lines was stretched and it flowed bad....ur vocab lacked any greatness...hard to see a good intact verse...ur punches really werent well incorporated....they were pretty weak, ur personals...were kinda whack..wasnt really fealin ur verse..overall 4/10

v/+gunz+

Rtf gunz within 72 hours or less, or this vote will be dq'd

Voted For: Black Arts

G please you're wackness personified in the shape-of-a-herb
You writing all your shite should be classed as "rape-of-a-word"

VS

saw Gunz srtobe said your loss
6point stairs reject him devil repented and copped a cross

lmao^^^^^

dick head.

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Voted For: Black Arts

Man Black anit "creative"......so his "art" his nonsense
cuz he steady "Drawin Blanks"....like a retards consience
^^^
Nice intro, had creativity...good punch nice...

Male of Female..hell whos really kno's his state of health
Dick and pussy on oppasite legs.............
^^^
No whats up with this....sorry but this is not even dissin him

so it's a undertstement to tell him to fuck himself
Who's the boss...saw Gunz srtobe said your loss
^^^
biggin youreself up here...doest work on battles

6point stairs reject him devil repented and copped a cross
^^^^
ok ender....

4/10 good intro and closer but the midle ones sucked.....no hate



Guns? now i know this kids gonna talk some tired shit
Wouldn't know an auto, if i left your face in my tyres grip
^^^
Iite intro here, biggin ure self up here bt had a decent punch

Like Stephen Hawking, you just dribble, can't spit, you're lame
How you gonna aim punches, when your crosshairs can't even hit your name?
^^^
hhaa aiite thas a good bit here , nice punch

Final question...............why'd do rap? can't hide you're wack, surprised at that?
Nigga couldn't blow up if he sucked a dick, he can't disguise the fact
^^^
basic ishh but funny here....

G please you're wackness personified in the shape-of-a-herb
You writing all your shite should be classed as "rape-of-a-word"
^^^
Ok closer

I was feelin Gunz's intro and closer better, but ure mid shit was better, much better, and ure into and closer werent bad jus a lil mediocre...7/10

wow your votes so wrong, you broke down the wrong bars mate^

look closely.

Voted For: Black Arts

imma go with black arts for this one...+gunz+ waz good too buh i think black arts was a bit better...i liked ur 3rd nd 6th line

Voted For: Black Arts

im voting for black art only cause he tried to land more punches

v/black arts

This was feedback posted for Black Arts
 

polllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..............if i were to vote i would have voted for black arts..........

dam can these explanations get more pathetic?????pm if they can :huh:

Voted For: Black Arts

Black Arts Verse

uns? now i know this kids gonna talk some tired shit
Wouldn't know an auto, if i left your face in my tyres grip
^ blah @ opener like the auto/tyre grip thing but it's written in a self-g style

Like Stephen Hawking, you just dribble, can't spit, you're lame
How you gonna aim punches, when your crosshairs can't even hit your name?
^ lol @ personal liked this bar personally

Final question...............why'd do rap? can't hide you're wack, surprised at that?
Nigga couldn't blow up if he sucked a dick, he can't disguise the fact
^ na not feelin it blow up if he (shoulda changed the concept instead of dick sucking)

G please you're wackness personified in the shape-of-a-herb
You writing all your shite should be classed as "rape-of-a-word"
^ multi rhyme closer...2nd line shoulda been better though

Overall
it was an aight verse some bars coulda been better...but disses were aight in places...lose the self-g re-word it so ya sayin the same but jus not goin im gonn do this and that ya feel me?...keep droppin though

+Gunz+ Verse

Man Black anit "creative"......so his "art" his nonsense
cuz he steady "Drawin Blanks"....like a retards consience
^ rhymes aight ok opener the drawin blanks & retards consience thing ws a weak connect though

Male of Female..hell whos really kno's his state of health
Dick and pussy on oppasite legs.............
so it's a undertstement to tell him to fuck himself
^ 3 line bar ain't a fav of mine to be honest...na not feelin flow is stretched

Who's the boss...saw Gunz srtobe said your loss
6point stairs reject him devil repented and copped a cross
^ no connection...weak closer

Overall
1st bar was "ok" but everything else was meh...if you new it's not a bad start but look up others verses...and analyse them to elevate yourself...but you didn't win this one unfortunately in my eyes.

Vote
Black Arts

RTF in my sig vs E.C :thumbup: