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K.S. vs Natural killa
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30-40 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No d/r No HATE 3-0 KO "natural killa cannot get DQ'd for having more than 5 battles open" Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 10-04-05 at 06:22 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-05 06:24 PM.
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K.S. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-05 06:27 PM.
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*shit son, time to beat you a 4th time*
Check it, Trini ain’t got no life, so stop with the hateful shouting He only has all them RV accounts so he can have a family outing Ya repertoire’s lookin’ limited, its time for NK to hit the books Cuz he used to ‘blow BIG time’……and now, he just sucks Stupid fuck! Kid’s got a low intellect, Well that’s what I’m told Yo, I said “NK, ure on fire!” and he ‘stopped, dropped and rolled!’ I’ve set myself up for a loss, lookin’ at the rules I shud’ve took note Cuz NK emphasized “NO HATE” so how the hell am I gonna get a vote Kid’s head is up his ass, no wonder he’s got shit for a brain Fo`real that ain’t constipation ya seeing, its NK with a migraine U like pain…well I ain’t gone physically hurt you, so it don’t matter Cuz bitch I’d smack you silly, but yo…shit is known to splatter Little shit, ure wack, I’ll beat ure ass, there’s nuthin’ left to tell We’d recognise ure skill, but DAMN! U hide it just so well Ure a cut above the rest, fuck that! bitch, don’t get confused Ya cudn’t look down on a midget if ya was wearin’ platform shoes Don’t know how ya win battles, cuz really ya never bring the goods I mean shit yo, NK comes under par more than Tiger Woods This battles getting hairy for Trini, but he’ll still take it on the chin Cuz ya see natural facial hair just don’t seem to grow on him Yo, I’ll match a ton of bars, and still have time for lunch Cuz whilst I got punches for dayz, NK takes dayz to throw a punch Ayo, y’all know homo lines are played, but against Trini one can’t hurt It’s just he keeps beggin’ me to “Hulk Out” so he can see me rip off my shirt Check it out man, Trini will do his best to win, seriously yo, I ain’t playin’ I’ll say “I’m doper than Trini” and he’ll try and have me DQ’ed for swayin’ Fuck Trini, u ain’t killin nuthin, thinking ure unique, son you ain’t iller I’ll eat you up cuz I chomp down on Special K’s like a fuckin Cereal Killer!! What is with ure obsession with me, I mean dawg, why you actin silly I’m sick of beatin you ‘n’ then ya pop back up, its like playin’ “Whack-A-Trini” I get fuckin mean in battles and NK’s a pussy, he don’t wanna start me Cuz I’ll have his ass finished faster than a cake at a fat girl’s party NK’s collecting wins; I’m told his shit’s too tough to bear But I’ll erase his streak, and I don’t mean washing his underwear Man Trini’s set to fall, its like putting lambs up to the slaughter Cuz he was a legend amongst his piers, until I pushed him in the water This bitch is hooked on me, facin me a 4th time, dunno why ya hatin us Just quit rappin ‘n’ stick to what ya good at……go make another alias I tell ya I knew this was gone get messy, I shud’ve just ducked ‘n’ ran Now its raining NK rhymes, looks like the shit just hit the fan!! *ure done* yea, if ya don't get anything then pm me or don't vote... |
I'm ya idol ,so no matter wat..ur too much of a poser to stay wit me
I mean,look,u changin ya name 'n stressin the K so it'll be closer to K-trini I could spit one bar 'n have ya layed out....holdin ya ass on the floor insisting on 40 lines..why?..when cats won't even read past 2 of your's I'm blasting ur shores 'n gunning......have u runnin back to the boards Ur never the "CENTER" of attention but ur shit's still whack to the "CORE" ur punches never hit me,I mean....all of your letters goes right through cos damn....I seen newbies in Front Lines with a better flow than you call me a rapist..but i'm tearin a bunch a pussies that Solo calls his crew like alarms clocks wit the old models.....their raps are all a big "snooze" get mauled up 'n lose,ya reputation just deserves no praise or glee u'd get a lot of cats at ur concerts..but that's if no one have to pay to see cos ur gay,for real,don't fuck with me,ur gay...if you strike..then you'll bleed ^^see..I spit whack..sumtin i that never,ever do...just like you and multis get cut up like culties....seriously....Solo outta pop the "BOTTLE" on my win cos all lines used 'gainst me before?...Solo went 'n "RECAPPED" on it again -_- he's actually here rapping here to win...wit no chance of catchin it or trim and after this shit's done...he'll be one...to say thanks for rappin wit him Clappin ur rims....like mechanics....damage u,makin u beg out ur skin He's admiring the upper "LIMB" of his verse....but still can't "LEG" out this win(20) map it south cos i got u tappin out 'n the thread already piled up wit towels 'n I'd "EGG" the fuk outta you too................if ya style wasn't so "FOWL" get soured like bowels......'n then get fuked up 'n razed,u suck 'n those lines 'bout my aliases 'n accounts?...yea,they PLAYED AS FUCK -_- I'm grazing this duck who got a lot of wins but he met it from luck 'n ur bars ain't tied nor tight...but still...you should have kept it all tux(tucked) ur rep's been all struck...I've sonned this bore..so now i'll gun this whore i mean..c'mon,all the lines Solo's used in this battle has been done before -_- So now,I'm done..I'm tired 'n exhausted wit the flu..but advantaged the paper AnD take a look,bitch...I'll spit 30 lines...and I STILL mananged to merk-ya REMEMBER PEOPLE....IT"S QUALITY OVER QUANTITY :thumbup: UNDERSTAND THE VERSES OR DON'T VOTE.......... |
This was feedback posted for Natural killa
pollz, sry im to lazy to read that all............
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This was feedback posted for K.S.
nice battle... jus checkin pollz..................
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werd, uppin for my win............................
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LoL Someone's pretty cocky......... but w/e....I did kinda half ass this verse...'s why i ain't go 40.Too tired. . . . .Meh... |
its cool
....cuz i just did mine punch for punch without really thinking, shit was just flowing for me when I was doing it though......:D |
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This was feedback posted for K.S.
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Voted For: K.S.
I'm ya idol ,so no matter wat..ur too much of a poser to stay wit me I mean,look,u changin ya name 'n stressin the K so it'll be closer to K-trini WEAK FLOW, GOOD CONCEPT. I could spit one bar 'n have ya layed out....holdin ya ass on the floor insisting on 40 lines..why?..when cats won't even read past 2 of your's DECENT OPENER I'm blasting ur shores 'n gunning......have u runnin back to the boards Ur never the "CENTER" of attention but ur shit's still whack to the "CORE" NICE WORDPLAY ur punches never hit me,I mean....all of your letters goes right through cos damn....I seen newbies in Front Lines with a better flow than you MEH call me a rapist..but i'm tearin a bunch a pussies that Solo calls his crew like alarms clocks wit the old models.....their raps are all a big "snooze" WEAK CONCEPT, NOT FEELIN. get mauled up 'n lose,ya reputation just deserves no praise or glee u'd get a lot of cats at ur concerts..but that's if no one have to pay to see WORDED BADLY BUT GOOD PUNCH cos ur gay,for real,don't fuck with me,ur gay...if you strike..then you'll bleed ^^see..I spit whack..sumtin i that never,ever do...just like you and multis FLIPPED CONCEPT, ALRIGHT THOUGH get cut up like culties....seriously....Solo outta pop the "BOTTLE" on my win cos all lines used 'gainst me before?...Solo went 'n "RECAPPED" on it again -_- MEHHHH he's actually here rapping here to win...wit no chance of catchin it or trim and after this shit's done...he'll be one...to say thanks for rappin wit him GOOD FLOW WEAK PUNCH Clappin ur rims....like mechanics....damage u,makin u beg out ur skin He's admiring the upper "LIMB" of his verse....but still can't "LEG" out this win(20) ITE I GUESS map it south cos i got u tappin out 'n the thread already piled up wit towels 'n I'd "EGG" the fuk outta you too................if ya style wasn't so "FOWL" NICE NICE get soured like bowels......'n then get fuked up 'n razed,u suck 'n those lines 'bout my aliases 'n accounts?...yea,they PLAYED AS FUCK -_- PREDICTIN PUNCH, DECENT I SUPPOSE. I'm grazing this duck who got a lot of wins but he met it from luck 'n ur bars ain't tied nor tight...but still...you should have kept it all tux(tucked) GOOD CONCEPT. ur rep's been all struck...I've sonned this bore..so now i'll gun this whore i mean..c'mon,all the lines Solo's used in this battle has been done before -_- FALSE REALLY... So now,I'm done..I'm tired 'n exhausted wit the flu..but advantaged the paper AnD take a look,bitch...I'll spit 30 lines...and I STILL mananged to merk-ya DOESNT RHYME AND BLAH CLOSER. __________________________________________________ __________________________ Check it, Trini ain’t got no life, so stop with the hateful shouting He only has all them RV accounts so he can have a family outing PERSONAL BUT BLAH Ya repertoire’s lookin’ limited, its time for NK to hit the books Cuz he used to ‘blow BIG time’……and now, he just sucks LOL NICE PUNCH Stupid fuck! Kid’s got a low intellect, Well that’s what I’m told Yo, I said “NK, ure on fire!” and he ‘stopped, dropped and rolled!’ DECENT PLAY AND PUNCH I’ve set myself up for a loss, lookin’ at the rules I shud’ve took note Cuz NK emphasized “NO HATE” so how the hell am I gonna get a vote LOL GOOD PERSONAL Kid’s head is up his ass, no wonder he’s got shit for a brain Fo`real that ain’t constipation ya seeing, its NK with a migraine LOLOLOLOL U like pain…well I ain’t gone physically hurt you, so it don’t matter Cuz bitch I’d smack you silly, but yo…shit is known to splatter MEH OK I SUPPOSE Little shit, ure wack, I’ll beat ure ass, there’s nuthin’ left to tell We’d recognise ure skill, but DAMN! U hide it just so well NICE Ure a cut above the rest, fuck that! bitch, don’t get confused Ya cudn’t look down on a midget if ya was wearin’ platform shoes MEH Don’t know how ya win battles, cuz really ya never bring the goods I mean shit yo, NK comes under par more than Tiger Woods PLAYED This battles getting hairy for Trini, but he’ll still take it on the chin Cuz ya see natural facial hair just don’t seem to grow on him NICE DOUBLE PUNCH Yo, I’ll match a ton of bars, and still have time for lunch Cuz whilst I got punches for dayz, NK takes dayz to throw a punch NICE FLIP. Ayo, y’all know homo lines are played, but against Trini one can’t hurt It’s just he keeps beggin’ me to “Hulk Out” so he can see me rip off my shirt LOL YEAH OK. Check it out man, Trini will do his best to win, seriously yo, I ain’t playin’ I’ll say “I’m doper than Trini” and he’ll try and have me DQ’ed for swayin’ TRUE PERSONAL...GOOD PUNCH Fuck Trini, u ain’t killin nuthin, thinking ure unique, son you ain’t iller I’ll eat you up cuz I chomp down on Special K’s like a fuckin Cereal Killer!! PLAYED PUNCH What is with ure obsession with me, I mean dawg, why you actin silly I’m sick of beatin you ‘n’ then ya pop back up, its like playin’ “Whack-A-Trini” ILL I get fuckin mean in battles and NK’s a pussy, he don’t wanna start me Cuz I’ll have his ass finished faster than a cake at a fat girl’s party DECENT NK’s collecting wins; I’m told his shit’s too tough to bear But I’ll erase his streak, and I don’t mean washing his underwear LMAO...NICE PLAY Man Trini’s set to fall, its like putting lambs up to the slaughter Cuz he was a legend amongst his piers, until I pushed him in the water HAHAHAHA...BEST PUNCH YET. This bitch is hooked on me, facin me a 4th time, dunno why ya hatin us Just quit rappin ‘n’ stick to what ya good at……go make another alias DECENT, BUT ONE OF HIS BARS PREDICTED THIS... I tell ya I knew this was gone get messy, I shud’ve just ducked ‘n’ ran Now its raining NK rhymes, looks like the shit just hit the fan!! HAHAH DECENT CLOSER. __________________________________________________ _ WOW, ILL BATTLE REALLY... TRINI ELEVATED A TON... SOLO HAD A FEW PLAYED CONCEPTS BUT SOME WERE JUST HEAVY AS FUCK...TRINI HAD ORIGINAL PUNCHES BUT IMO THEY AINT HIT AS HARD, SOLOS MADE ME LAUGH THEREFOR RIPPED HIM MORE. NO HATE, VOTE SOLO. |
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Voted For: K.S.
Natural Killa: I'm ya idol ,so no matter wat..ur too much of a poser to stay wit me I mean,look,u changin ya name 'n stressin the K so it'll be closer to K-trini ^^weak opener 3/10 I could spit one bar 'n have ya layed out....holdin ya ass on the floor insisting on 40 lines..why?..when cats won't even read past 2 of your's ^^ok 4/10 I'm blasting ur shores 'n gunning......have u runnin back to the boards Ur never the "CENTER" of attention but ur shit's still whack to the "CORE" ^^dope bar 8/10 ur punches never hit me,I mean....all of your letters goes right through cos damn....I seen newbies in Front Lines with a better flow than you ^^basic 4/10 call me a rapist..but i'm tearin a bunch a pussies that Solo calls his crew like alarms clocks wit the old models.....their raps are all a big "snooze" ^^ok meta and punch 6/10 get mauled up 'n lose,ya reputation just deserves no praise or glee u'd get a lot of cats at ur concerts..but that's if no one have to pay to see ^^lol dope 8/10 cos ur gay,for real,don't fuck with me,ur gay...if you strike..then you'll bleed ^^see..I spit whack..sumtin i that never,ever do...just like you and multis ^^didnt rhyme 1/10 get cut up like culties....seriously....Solo outta pop the "BOTTLE" on my win cos all lines used 'gainst me before?...Solo went 'n "RECAPPED" on it again -_- ^^ok 4/10 he's actually here rapping here to win...wit no chance of catchin it or trim and after this shit's done...he'll be one...to say thanks for rappin wit him ^^no 2/10 Clappin ur rims....like mechanics....damage u,makin u beg out ur skin He's admiring the upper "LIMB" of his verse....but still can't "LEG" out this win(20) ^^ok 5/10 map it south cos i got u tappin out 'n the thread already piled up wit towels 'n I'd "EGG" the fuk outta you too................if ya style wasn't so "FOWL" ^^good meta 5/0 get soured like bowels......'n then get fuked up 'n razed,u suck 'n those lines 'bout my aliases 'n accounts?...yea,they PLAYED AS FUCK -_- ^^ok 4/10 I'm grazing this duck who got a lot of wins but he met it from luck 'n ur bars ain't tied nor tight...but still...you should have kept it all tux(tucked) ^^good bar 7/10 ur rep's been all struck...I've sonned this bore..so now i'll gun this whore i mean..c'mon,all the lines Solo's used in this battle has been done before -_- ^^good bar 6/10 So now,I'm done..I'm tired 'n exhausted wit the flu..but advantaged the paper AnD take a look,bitch...I'll spit 30 lines...and I STILL mananged to merk-ya ^^merk-ya and paper dont rhyme 2/10 Overall: 69/150 (46%) K.S.: Check it, Trini ain’t got no life, so stop with the hateful shouting He only has all them RV accounts so he can have a family outing ^^dope opener 9/10 Ya repertoire’s lookin’ limited, its time for NK to hit the books Cuz he used to ‘blow BIG time’……and now, he just sucks ^^ehh 4/10 Stupid fuck! Kid’s got a low intellect, Well that’s what I’m told Yo, I said “NK, ure on fire!” and he ‘stopped, dropped and rolled!’ ^^lol good 7/10 I’ve set myself up for a loss, lookin’ at the rules I shud’ve took note Cuz NK emphasized “NO HATE” so how the hell am I gonna get a vote ^^ok 4/10 Kid’s head is up his ass, no wonder he’s got shit for a brain Fo`real that ain’t constipation ya seeing, its NK with a migraine ^^ehh 5/10 U like pain…well I ain’t gone physically hurt you, so it don’t matter Cuz bitch I’d smack you silly, but yo…shit is known to splatter ^^good bar 6/10 Little shit, ure wack, I’ll beat ure ass, there’s nuthin’ left to tell We’d recognise ure skill, but DAMN! U hide it just so well ^^ok 4/10 Ure a cut above the rest, fuck that! bitch, don’t get confused Ya cudn’t look down on a midget if ya was wearin’ platform shoes ^^decent 5/10 Don’t know how ya win battles, cuz really ya never bring the goods I mean shit yo, NK comes under par more than Tiger Woods ^^dope 7/10 This battles getting hairy for Trini, but he’ll still take it on the chin Cuz ya see natural facial hair just don’t seem to grow on him ^^ok bar 5/10 Yo, I’ll match a ton of bars, and still have time for lunch Cuz whilst I got punches for dayz, NK takes dayz to throw a punch ^^played 2/10 Ayo, y’all know homo lines are played, but against Trini one can’t hurt It’s just he keeps beggin’ me to “Hulk Out” so he can see me rip off my shirt ^^lol good 7/10 Check it out man, Trini will do his best to win, seriously yo, I ain’t playin’ I’ll say “I’m doper than Trini” and he’ll try and have me DQ’ed for swayin’ ^^ok 5/10 Fuck Trini, u ain’t killin nuthin, thinking ure unique, son you ain’t iller I’ll eat you up cuz I chomp down on Special K’s like a fuckin Cereal Killer!! ^^good meta ok punch 6/10 What is with ure obsession with me, I mean dawg, why you actin silly I’m sick of beatin you ‘n’ then ya pop back up, its like playin’ “Whack-A-Trini” ^^ok... 4/10 I get fuckin mean in battles and NK’s a pussy, he don’t wanna start me Cuz I’ll have his ass finished faster than a cake at a fat girl’s party ^^good bar 6/10 NK’s collecting wins; I’m told his shit’s too tough to bear But I’ll erase his streak, and I don’t mean washing his underwear ^^played 3/10 Man Trini’s set to fall, its like putting lambs up to the slaughter Cuz he was a legend amongst his piers, until I pushed him in the water ^^good bar 6/10 This bitch is hooked on me, facin me a 4th time, dunno why ya hatin us Just quit rappin ‘n’ stick to what ya good at……go make another alias ^^good personal 6/10 I tell ya I knew this was gone get messy, I shud’ve just ducked ‘n’ ran Now its raining NK rhymes, looks like the shit just hit the fan!! ^^good closer 6/10 Overall: 107/200 (54%) K.S took this one. NK had a couple of good bars but it seemed he'd throw a punch and fall off track keep your pieces consistent, throw a dope punch opr dope meta in every line to wow the voters, you just wrote some bars to get by, write bars to K.O ya opponnent. As for K.S this piece was weak compared to your older pieces but still a win for you. |
werd. but sum bars were sum of my better ones. :thumbup:
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This was feedback posted for Natural killa
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Voted For: K.S.
umm you win....iwas gonna just go bar by bar but that would take forever, LOL aight so here you go solo: you had some hot lines i was glad you stayed consistant with your lines the only thing i would have done different would be more personals and i would have tried to do somehitng creative to get the poeple guessing becuase so many lines gets boring after awhile, so yea other than that you had alot of dope lines there where some played consepts but you made them different so you get a 80 out of 100 good shit but ive seen better but you also had to spit 20 bars so IMO goood shit NK: you had some Ok bars i liked the Core line what i didnt like was how you capitalized some words to make the bars seem to match like the BOTTLE, RECAPPED that shit was wack and you could have spit alot beter considering you only dorpped 40 lines considering you already knew he was gonna drop 40 lines and you spent alot of time telling use what he was gonna do, not feeling that..you should have had alot of personals and since he got hella battles its hard to use somehitn gthat somebody else hasnt done so i will give yout he benifit of the doubt word... you got a 65 out of a 100 vote =IMO..KS |
....werd. i win.
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