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Tha Notorious D vs wyteknyte
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6 - 10 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Bullshit 3-0 tko No DQ'in votes no matter wut! Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-01-05 at 09:52 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
wyteknyte has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-05 09:23 PM.
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ThA NoToRiOuS D has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-01-05 09:28 PM.
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Dis mo'fucka got all his wins off newbies.....dawgs straight herbin it lmao :laugh:
Dawg you battle newbies religiously,:laugh:im given you a beatin Another easy win , these battles should be considered cheatin I stop and laugh :laugh: ,you throwing a punch is hard to see On a battle site, still aint trhown a punch...ya whole verse dont diss me Ya rap skill, nah man ya lack skill..dawg seriously your a herb Try n rap wit a verb..Smack tha shit out you plant ya face on a curb Ill end this battle with your structure, so its a close race Shit now I suck ass, this structure to rap is a big disgrace blah blah blah....aint nuffin |
I'm tired of you talking about you claiming you can rap-
When all you talk about is hoes, money, and things you wont dare to grab// HIV is the only thing about you that's positive Stop your lyrics cause they getting norrogitive// Jersey City, Nj Is my hometown the realest niggas you will ever see But in beantown, you posing niggas, yall wanna be me// I've seen mad fake niggas in beantown and i think its lame Ya'll so fictionated you look like a fuckin video game// I could see your future and it aint no record labels A job at a low class resturaunt trying to set the tables nigga who set your goals better yet who set your fables// *** *fables-a fictitious narrative or statement |
wyteknyte
BeAnToWN rEp Posts: 240 Joined: Jan 2005 From: boston (u.c.) Status: Online Text Record: 2-0 IP: 0825 899A Dis mo'fucka got all his wins off newbies.....dawgs straight herbin it lmao dis guy is not serious im straight herbing it wtf.........u must be outta ur mind......uppin 4 dis shyt |
^yo dawg for future reference...just hit quote....saves time..and looks prettier lol...and y up it if its at the top? ne ways...............
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Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D
I'm tired of you talking about you claiming you can rap- When all you talk about is hoes, money, and things you wont dare to grab// i give this a 7.5/10 i didnt really feel this HIV is the only thing about you that's positive Stop your lyrics cause they getting norrogitive// 8/10 good punch i really liked this line Jersey City, Nj Is my hometown the realest niggas you will ever see But in beantown, you posing niggas, yall wanna be me// 9/10--had good punch on this he took a shot at ur hometown... I've seen mad fake niggas in beantown and i think its lame Ya'll so fictionated you look like a fuckin video game// 8.5/10--nice i liked this line...this is my favirote I could see your future and it aint no record labels A job at a low class resturaunt trying to set the tables nigga who set your goals better yet who set your fables// 8/10--good closer....nice way to use your multi overall: 41% Dawg you battle newbies religiously,im given you a beatin Another easy win , these battles should be considered cheatin i give this a 8/10...nice punch I stop and laugh ,you throwing a punch is hard to see On a battle site, still aint trhown a punch...ya whole verse dont diss me this line is always being used now...5/10 Ya rap skill, nah man ya lack skill..dawg seriously your a herb Try n rap wit a verb..Smack tha shit out you plant ya face on a curb 7/10...its was ok....ehhh Ill end this battle with your structure, so its a close race Shit now I suck ass, this structure to rap is a big disgrace 5/10 bad closer was not feeling it at all.... overall: 25% vote goes to tha notorious for he had better flow structure n punches...... |
gud lukin out u got any open battles so i cud RTF...?? i seached but no but just post the link
uppin 1-0 c'mon....i want dis shyt to finish |
Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D
this battle was weak as hell for real and i swear i didn't see a single proper punch in this.....all attempts at punches ended up coming across as statemnets n shit so that aint good. wyteknyte you seriously need to reconsider if you're intending on coninuing to write rhymes because that was pathetic notorious d i didnt like the way you majorly stretched your last line, that fucked up your whole flow for real but as i actually saw a couple attempts at punches i'll give this to you as it seemed that you were actually tryna make your punches connect....didnt work though but you blatantly put the most effort into your verse v/notorious d |
na man i forgot to indent dis was supposed to be a mutli but w.e i forgot but yea ayo dont you think youre a little to new to RV to be telling people that shit w.e uppin for dis shyt
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This was feedback posted for ThA NoToRiOuS D
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this is simply pathetic, his verse has no punches......anyway uppin
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Voted For: wyteknyte
tha notorious d-overall man, your verse wasnt that dope..your structure needs upping....and your vocab and multis were soft and weak....you dissed his hometown...thats played and weak..you need a better concept for that...overall ur verse was weak and played...4/10 vs wyteknyte-your verse was good, i liked how you proved your point with the links and you incorporated good personals...your punches were soft, but still present in the battle...your multis were absent and your vocab wasnt so great..your last 2 lines was mad funny, cuz his structure is just like that so thats a good personal...overall 6/10 |
Voted For: wyteknyte
WyteKnyte-Your verse was pretty dope, im feelin the personals...you got em good wit the newbie line..your punches was iight...nothing special.....but the last 2 lines basically got you good man......your vocab and multis was absent but your got this 6/10 tha notorious d-man your verse was whack...no hate but you dissed boston....uh oh...shits played and whack.....you need up your punches and personals....man...your structure was iight..i got an ok flow...vocab and multis need to up...overall 4/10 v/wyteknyte |
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y u mad???????????dont be a bitch bout this i said no bitching before we started this.....uppin... |
^cat tryna sound dominate.....you trying to be the man?......dawg you got the same dude votin fo u in ya battles ..................
anyways uppin |
tha same dude whose the same dude??? wtf are you talking about..........this guy is real mad right now cause he thought he could win me easily because im supposely a newb man STFU
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fool please you seriously have no idea who your talking to..... anyway i would merk you and never forget it :thefinger |
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lmao but your losing to a newb!!!!!!i was peeping dat....lol just leave my site man u pathetic |
This was feedback posted for wyteknyte
Came weak here............
You can come a lot harder... |
^lmao u aint but joined 4 months ago...shit u still a newbie....yo i did think id win u easy...cuz u aint got no skill wutso eva.....a battle record does not mean anything ok.....i mean half the catz on here could be 4-6 but still lyrically dope...so u got a .500 record....you still shit man.......seriously quiet that mouth of yours....mad tired of herbs like u sayin this yo site.....man you get owned by everyone daily.....grip up bitch
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nope not really.........i think your mad becuase people actually like my flow.....you prolly thought u had an easy win your such a bitch man |
^set up another battle....bitch u got a nice flow...suck a cock
ya flow is shit ya structure is shit dawg u shouldnt be allowed on this site seriously...ur trash man....u dont throw punches no personals u talked about boston..oh shit...like thats not played seriuosly u aint on a level......sayin others are newbies dude ur a newbie.....fag uppin |
uppin.............................................
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Voted For: wyteknyte
this dude won because he had nice smiley faces. and the other dudes "punches" were just too lame. |
This was feedback posted for ThA NoToRiOuS D
checkin pollzz niggaz....................................
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uppin............................................. .q
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Voted For: wyteknyte
this verse just flowed better.....wyte knyte took this one |
that was the worse i've seen in my life.........upppppin
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Voted For: wyteknyte
I'm tired of you talking about you claiming you can rap- When all you talk about is hoes, money, and things you wont dare to grab// 3...choppy rhyming...weak punch. HIV is the only thing about you that's positive Stop your lyrics cause they getting norrogitive// 2..not serious here...seems ur just relying on big vocab. Jersey City, Nj Is my hometown the realest niggas you will ever see But in beantown, you posing niggas, yall wanna be me// 2...weak. I've seen mad fake niggas in beantown and i think its lame Ya'll so fictionated you look like a fuckin video game// 2...no......maybe if you worded this better..then it could have been something. I could see your future and it aint no record labels A job at a low class resturaunt trying to set the tables nigga who set your goals better yet who set your fables// 3...weak... Dawg you battle newbies religiously,im given you a beatin Another easy win , these battles should be considered cheatin 4....decent enuff i guess... I stop and laugh ,you throwing a punch is hard to see On a battle site, still aint trhown a punch...ya whole verse dont diss me 3....eh...kinda played as a concept.... Ya rap skill, nah man ya lack skill..dawg seriously your a herb Try n rap wit a verb..Smack tha shit out you plant ya face on a curb 2...no...these aren't punches...just threats..and that's a no. Ill end this battle with your structure, so its a close race Shit now I suck ass, this structure to rap is a big disgrace 4...decent... ok..one-sided Notorious... Try to stop puttin this(//) at the end of ur lines.It makes ur shit look herbish.I felt at times,like ur 2nd bar,you tried to rely on big vocab alone.And that's a no.You were too basic as well.Don't just state shit..... Wyteknyte.... try to avoid puttin links in battles...it's considered played.People hate to click on those.But still...I think ya won for actually having some decent bars... Vote-wyteknyte Drop a vote in the link below..... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210224 |
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