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ThA NoToRiOuS D vs flow verse
Battle Rules:
6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 K.O 4-1 K.O Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-02-05 at 12:42 AM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
ThA NoToRiOuS D has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-05 12:13 AM.
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My lyrics sour to your ears like a lime
Masta Killah rapping don't even need to rhyme I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo My punchlines type hard like throwing a horseshoe My shit unrehearsed so you could call it impromptu I bet..i'll make this guy 4-9 in just 1 hush Hitting you and your town like a bum rush And flow verse whats going on through your mind? Too late, you're falling too far behind just a quick verse drop holla atcha boi |
flow verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-05 12:36 AM.
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Fools keep stating their “big” but please do tell
Y it only took “4 bars” to put this fuck in a “cell” Kid thinks he’s the sickest rapper better than me? Na here’s the truth By accepting this battle you got screwed over. Like fucking on a roof He thinks his lines are “funny” but here’s the fact If “ass” got a “PhD” he still wouldn’t be a “wise-crack” Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up |
ok.......uppin.............that was funny to read..
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good luck man.........
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yeah gud luck.....uppin 4 dis bytch.................
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Voted For: flow verse
Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up vs And flow verse whats going on through your mind? Too late, you're falling too far behind battles very even, but tha notorious D came slightly stronger in this. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: flow verse
one sided notorious d's 2nd and 3rd bars weren't even proper rhymes. most of his rhymes were just .... how do i say it ...... ah yes.... STUPID AS HELL his flow was below average and concepts were just weakness. anyway moving swiftly on flow verse actually had one decent punch in it unlike notorious d He thinks his lines are “funny” but here’s the fact If “ass” got a “PhD” he still wouldn’t be a “wise-crack” the setup was shit but the punch managed to slightly clip him so i suppose that won it for you seeing as nothing else stood out in this battle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
thanks for votes upping
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lol ysdat voted for the wrong person.........imma report that
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just notice that go ahead and get changed.............upping for votes still
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This was feedback posted for flow verse
pollz............................................
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uppin 4 dis shit........uppin...........uppin.......
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This was feedback posted for ThA NoToRiOuS D
checkin polllzzz homiez...notorious you need to git outta tha habit of using self-glorification...youve improved alot though...keep at it both of you
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wuht????when did i use self glorifcation..........anyways upppin.... |
Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D
alrite honestly both verses were weak but notorious had a better structure and better punches..and notorious uve elevated a little better since i battled you . and you steping you game up. but keep going... other cat u need to have a better structure and just elevate on your vocab . this includes to notorious too.. just keep your game up .. .. vote for The notorious D.... Infinite_Stan Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for ThA NoToRiOuS D
polls...wack......................................
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This was feedback posted for flow verse
you both fuckin suck.............................................. ....
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Voted For: flow verse
flow verse - iight spit, you had some good punches, attempts at wordplay. Best Line - Fools keep stating their “big” but please do tell Y it only took “4 bars” to put this fuck in a “cell” Worst Line - Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up ThA NoToRiOuS D - iight verse also, your flow was off, you had some ok punches. Best Line - I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo Worst Line - My lyrics sour to your ears like a lime Masta Killah rapping don't even need to rhyme OVERALL - This wasnt that good of a battle, no real hard hitten punches. I vote for Flow because he tried some wordplay, and had some ok punches. D you need to flow better, and put more thought into your punches. Vote - Flow Verse RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210106 |
Voted For: flow verse
I vote for Flow Verse mainly because of the last line plus i like the punches better but "Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up" is just a great line Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: flow verse
flow verse- I liked the wordplay flow was really really really basic....The punches were not really that great but ok the stucture was terrible maybe you could fix that again.... overall you did good enough to beat him. ThA NoToRiOuS D- Maybe i should be voting cause i didn't really understand alot of parts of it...Like the punches weren't that all too me...They sounded like threats not really nothin speical.. Wordplay was ok, your flow was like very basic too..Try makin it more real. no hate v/flowverse Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: flow verse
you both fucking suck Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for flow verse
both weak no talent Notorious dont forget about our battle I'm settin up now
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wow MADD disqualified votes....................upping..............pleas e i want to get this over with
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uppin!!!!!!!!! cant believe this shyt is styll up........
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please two more votes comon ppl........upping
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Voted For: flow verse
Fools keep stating their “big” but please do tell Y it only took “4 bars” to put this fuck in a “cell” 3...relating prison bars to rap bars is played Kid thinks he’s the sickest rapper better than me? Na here’s the truth By accepting this battle you got screwed over. Like fucking on a roof 4...decent He thinks his lines are “funny” but here’s the fact If “ass” got a “PhD” he still wouldn’t be a “wise-crack” 3....weak Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up 0....not much of a punch.. My lyrics sour to your ears like a lime Masta Killah rapping don't even need to rhyme 2....whack....first line self glorified. I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo 1...not a punch...just a threat. My punchlines type hard like throwing a horseshoe My shit unrehearsed so you could call it impromptu 1...self glorifing I bet..i'll make this guy 4-9 in just 1 hush Hitting you and your town like a bum rush 2....borderline self glorifing And flow verse whats going on through your mind? Too late, you're falling too far behind 2..whack..wtf? Ok...One-sided battle...for real. Notorious... Stop self glorifing.You have too much.Make every bar have a punch.Like the voodoo line/unrehearsed/bumrush....those lines self glorified as opposed to dissing the other guy. Also..don't separate ur bars like that..put it all together. Vote-FlowVerse ^Natural killa is my alias..so drop a vote in the link.... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209370 .......................or else this vote will be removed :thumbup: |
Voted For: flow verse
punches:flow wordplay:flow structure: notorious personals: niether winner:flow explination: ok to really breakdown the above reasons, this is how i saw it. flow was on point against D with the punches and wordplay, i feel the phd line was a valuble line to his win, the roof line was ok but not to special, a little played too but it had what needed to winn in this battle, the flow was good but choppy in spots as for notorious he had his bars structured right but failed to come strong with wordplay and punches and it takes those to winn a battle, structure alone cant do it so in my result i go with flow verse as the winner of this battle do to better word play and punches, thats my vote 1 |
uppin 4 dis bych..........uppin uppin uppin uppin...
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uppping i thought 3-0 ment k.o but for sme reason i still need votes
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still upping even though i already won....someone vote
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isn't 3-0 knockout then why is this battle still up?
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Voted For: flow verse
notorius no personals put all of ur liknes together you need to work on the coabs in ur rhyme scheme didnt really feel any of ur lines to be honest elevate better vocab and wordplay you didnt have any personals either so meh however i was felling ur fucking on the roof line and thats about it work on personals not a bad battle rtf explained honest votes on these battles or i will dq my vote http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210496 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=211555 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210494 |
upping cause i still need one more vote
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Voted For: ThA NoToRiOuS D
Vocab- Notorious Flow- Notorious Structure- Notorious Aiight, here my explenations. "I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo" Vs. "Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up" Honestly, Notorious had better vocab that made it sick. I didnt really notice anything that stuck out in Flow. Other than tha line i posted up. Notorious's shit stuck out like "whoa" Good battle 2 each. Notorious has my vote. |
Voted For: flow verse
Flow verse Fools keep stating their “big” but please do tell Y it only took “4 bars” to put this fuck in a “cell” Concept had potential.. worded wrong.. Kid thinks he’s the sickest rapper better than me? Na here’s the truth By accepting this battle you got screwed over. Like fucking on a roof Decent.. He thinks his lines are “funny” but here’s the fact If “ass” got a “PhD” he still wouldn’t be a “wise-crack” Nah.. Honestly the way I abuse you bitch you should call me pimp. You slut This battle is over so bitch Grab a coke and a smile and shut the fuck up Not a punch.. ThA NoToRiOuS D My lyrics sour to your ears like a lime Masta Killah rapping don't even need to rhyme Nah.. I clock and cuff your ass like a cop enforcing curfew I'm sticking pins in your head and I don't know voodoo Decent.. My punchlines type hard like throwing a horseshoe My shit unrehearsed so you could call it impromptu Not a punch.. I bet..i'll make this guy 4-9 in just 1 hush Hitting you and your town like a bum rush Nah.. And flow verse whats going on through your mind? Too late, you're falling too far behind Not a punch.. Overall, Flow verse came with one decent line.. one concept that had potential, and two lines that weren't that good. Tha Notorious D had one decent line and the rest weren't that good. Flow verse just had the better overall verse. He had better concepts, attempted more wordplay (he also had better wordplay) and more connecting punches. So, in conclusion, Flow verse gets my vote for the better overall verse. Vote - flow verse Both of you should join the Punchline League. |
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