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Vaskez vs. Fraud
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check, haha, we meet again
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check your ass in then we can try and drop early
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yea yea this is my check-in,
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Girls, screwing ugly losers should be a crime, resulting in punishments galore
And I guess the government agrees cos doing fraud's punishable by law |
A Alias Or A Waste of Space? I Couldn't Tell; Flames? Musta Held 'em Back And Fled
I'll Assure This: Destroy U With This "Key" And " Push U Under The Welcome Mat" Instead * People usually put keys under their welcome mat |
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sorry but this warrants an explanation, no swaying, just explaining it if he screwing ugly loser's a crime and screwing/doing fraud's a crime, then what does that mean? Aaaaahhh THERE's the punch ;) |
this was a real nice battle...
close... but imma give it to fraud it seemed more original to me v/ fraud pz |
v/didnt like either...but w/e Fraud
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thanks for the vote upp'in for more votes.....
3-0 |
V/ Fraud
Both came good but the welcome mat line stood out to me more |
Ok...Neither of you had any flow watsoeva....for real.
But....I'll give it to Vaskez. For one....his bar was a personal...Fraud's one was not.... And two...his set-up had relevance to the punch and Fraud's set-up was bassically a filler. Next time...both of you actually try and make your shit flow. vote-Vaskez |
yeah good point, I'ma make it flow nicer next time
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Frauds sucked, all he said was he was gonna put you under the welcome mat, wich makes no sense, "key" wordplay is played the fuck out anyways.
v/Vaskez still Vaskez, your punch coulda been A LOT better. |
your punch is your goin to push him under a welcome mat? and i get the key wordplay, but how is that a punch?
v/ V he called u names with his meta, which is a punch |
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flow means nothin in this, your dumb... they just should keep out all the exra's and write normal |
yeah I know Jack, I underestimated
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anyway, 3-4, more votes please
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who's winning this butthole?
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at the moment it's the other dude :( well let's get some more votes
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real close here
props to both i was digging vas bar better, cuz frauds was kinda crowded but coulda went either way v/ vaskez |
V/Vaskez.....this was an ight one.......but Vask he came wit the harder hittin punch
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thanks, 5-4 to me
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Vaskez, your concept was really good, but you executed it pretty poorly. Either way, I honestly don't know how anyone could vote for Fraud. His bar was ass, there was no punch to it.
Vote - Vaskez |
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Word, make it look real pretty or people won't vote for you, lol. A Alias Or A Waste of Space? I Couldn't Tell; Flames? Musta Held 'em Back And Fled I'll Assure This: Destroy U With This "Key" And " Push U Under The Welcome Mat" Instead As played as "key" wordplay is, I got a feeling that this bar could've connected. Just wasn't worded right, and that results in a good ol' "wtf?". vs. Girls, screwing ugly losers should be a crime, resulting in punishments galore And I guess the government agrees cos doing fraud's punishable by law A little stretched here, first line could've been shortened without effecting the bar. I've used the "fraud" play before, but it doesn't really matter considering you actually came with a decent punch. V// Vaskez |
Vote: Vaskez
Just word your punch better next week to make it come harder. |
wow @ fraud even getting a vote
the concept was played to fuck, and the delivery was weak as hell, the first line was filler and the punch itself was just too crowded, you need to shorten it and remove some of the words, cuz half of them arent even relevant vaskez, ure punch was weak to, the concept is played out, and the personal behind it was played out to, at least ure's resembled an ok punch and had a personal (albeit a played one) with it. V/ - Vaskez |
^^^ wow im serprized....
but K.S isnt this concider sway'in votes?? Jack The Ripper E-Style What?! Posts: 1 Joined: Mar 2005 Status: Offline Text Record: 3-2 IP: 591C A203 Frauds sucked, all he said was he was gonna put you under the welcome mat, wich makes no sense, "key" wordplay is played the fuck out anyways. v/Vaskez still Vaskez, your punch coulda been A LOT better. Jack Da Rizzle Middle Weight Posts: 5,287 Joined: Oct 2005 Status: Offline Text Record: 0-0 IP: 591C A203 who's winning this butthole? Vaskez Flyweight & Posts: 193 Joined: Jun 2005 Status: Online Text Record: 3-0 Audio Record: 0-0 Graphics Record: 0-0 IP: CF51 8482 at the moment it's the other dude FPRIVATE "TYPE=PICT;ALT=" well let's get some more votes not 100% sure but after he said that like the next 6 people voted for him WTF?? |
frauds punch was stupid. vaskez came with some originality which is what i liked. frauds was generic and keyboard punches suck now.
v/vaskez |
Vaskez wins.
Fraud loses. |
This thread is now closed.
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