warrior vs ryda
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6 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-05-05 at 02:06 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Ryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-05 01:36 PM.
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Warrior battlen me it's showtime
KO this kid like Ali in his prime how u feel..........a newbie is gunna beat ur ass ur like school on saturday no class this kids got nuthin on me with his shitty ass rhymes im on my way to victory |
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warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-05 01:55 PM.
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Ima Rip this person apart. My bars is hurtin his heart.
Make his rap career hit the ‘campus man merkins an 'art. We all knew from the start that ima damage ya son. U read my verse and start holdin ya chest like sanford and son. Makin ryda cry cause this site defines ya life. Make it where RV don’t gotta listen to ruff ryders to hear ryda died.(ride or die) |
lol its obviously been a while aight here i go
Ima Rip this person apart. My bars is hurtin his heart. Make his rap career hit the ‘campus man merkins an 'art. We all knew from the start that ima damage ya son. U read my verse and start holdin ya chest like sanford and son. Makin ryda cry cause this site defines ya life. Make it where RV don’t gotta listen to ruff ryders to hear ryda died.(ride or die) |
Voted For: warrior
This battle was one sided as hell. Ryda came with pretty played wordplay (Ali/KO, school) and his other line was just a blatant statement that didn't connect at all. None of his bars really came close to doing anything, his rhyme scheme was simple as hell, his flow was unstable, and his overall verse just wasn't that good. Warrior didn't come that good either, but at least he attempted wordplay and punches throughout his verse. His first bar about art could have been worded way better, but the concept had potential. Same with the last bar, the wordplay was a little forced, but the concept was there. The second bar had wordplay in it, but the punch didn't connect. Overall, he just had a way better verse. Vote - Warrior |
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Voted For: warrior
Nothing Vs Ima Rip this person apart. My bars is hurtin his heart. Make his rap career hit the ‘campus man merkins an 'art. We all knew from the start that ima damage ya son. U read my verse and start holdin ya chest like sanford and son. Makin ryda cry cause this site defines ya life. Make it where RV don’t gotta listen to ruff ryders to hear ryda died.(ride or die) Owned here mate no hate, you need to work on your struct and get some decent concepts, warrior cam ill with personals. no hate, rtf in sig please. |
Voted For: warrior
u rhymed same word twice, thats a no no but better flow, and punches v/warrior |
Voted For: Ryda
man both of you are fucking wack man!! i dont see how u guys even got a vote!! who the fuck would vote for u lame fuckers!!!.... just elevate............. if u wanna spit back at me then drop a message on my shit and well battle!...peace...Infinite_Stan |
Voted For: warrior
you did a lot better, so you win............................. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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This was feedback posted for Ryda
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This was feedback posted for warrior
checkin pollz...ryda, you need to stop battlin for a while and jus elevate, then when your better. start battlin again so that you might actually have a win or maybe at least a decent verse once in awhile...no hate to either..i woulda voted for warrior but im not gon vote...keep at it both of yall...nice job to both guyz,much respect to both of my niggaz herr...uppin fo this battle...hit me bak niggaz
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Voted For: warrior
Warrior battlen me it's showtime KO this kid like Ali in his prime 1...this bar doesn't diss him at all... how u feel..........a newbie is gunna beat ur ass ur like school on saturday no class 2..this saturday/no class shit is played. this kids got nuthin on me with his shitty ass rhymes im on my way to victory 1...weak..... Ima Rip this person apart. My bars is hurtin his heart. Make his rap career hit the ‘campus man merkins an 'art. 5..nice multis..decent punch. We all knew from the start that ima damage ya son. U read my verse and start holdin ya chest like sanford and son. 4...good concept for the punch but wording was bad and i didn't like how u rhymed the same words Makin ryda cry cause this site defines ya life. Make it where RV don’t gotta listen to ruff ryders to hear ryda died 6...strong nameplay here. Ok...One-sided battle here. Ryda... next time...make every bar diss the other guy.Like ur 1st bar,for example...how is saying "U gon KO him like Ali" a diss?The point of a battle is to diss.And the middle bar u had....played out. Warrior won this for actually puttin out a punch with every bar.That last bar killed it.. Vote-Warrior Drop a vote in the link below..... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210224 |
Voted For: warrior
ok man this was an easy battle to vote on.. ryda - your verse was very basic, it was played, no punches, no vocab, no wordplay, and no personals or multis.. elevate kid.. n if u dont like what i say battle me... warrior - man ur verse was better, u had punches, flow, nice structure, good wordplay and vocab, just work it a bit better dawg, so nice battle for u.. and u get the win easy.. overall - warrior..... |
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