yo yo yoimbatman vs Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dickriding

Itz on an Poppin now

G'Luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-07-05 at 04:48 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

Tha 1 An Onlii B has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-05 04:49 PM.

yo yo yoimbatman has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-05 04:54 PM.

AHHHHHH mike.....i kinda dont want to do this. Youll probably go yap to all the little bitches at school about you you beat me. LOL. G'luck man!

good luck to you too joe and i wont yap...too much

Bitch ass nigga dont know who he is
Wtf is this white ass crack doin in the rap biz?
I choke your ass up and take your money.
Last night I had your girl and she was callin me honey.
Cuz Mike i know who you really be.
Your a gay ass homo thats all to me
B no hard feelings man.
I know you do what you can.
But in this case your best aint good enough.
Cuz My rhymes are like shattered glass...real rough.
Damn nigga your rhymes cant touch me.
Cuz im like ali floatin like a butterfly stinging your ass like a bee.

typo crack in second line supposed to be crackaaaa

no hard feelings mike you still my homie fo lyfe. CHA!

do you know what a punch is, no1 can see any type of diss
idk who your tryin to play cuz we all know who tha real batman is*
itz pathetic that your close to losin to Big_O**
your sorry, and know you cant beat me JOE!!***
idk why you keep sayin nigga, bitch your white****
come on,your a newb and you know im right
look theres batman! i jus found robin
hes tha one in batmans pants with his head bobbin
your name should be tha joker cuz your rymes make everyone laugh
i got the whole rappin package,but you bitch ass barely has half
say tha wrong shit and get cut, callin you two face
batman says hes returns but never began,jus like mase*****

Explanations

*I used to be Batman
**He has or had a battle with big_O who is pathetic and was onlii winnin by 1 vote
***his real names Joe
****i noticed he says nigga alot but he is actually white(i know him)
*****if you notice,mase had like 2 hits when he came back so i would consider him never somin back,well he says hes batman(when i said batman returns,i meant as in tha movie) batman never returned cuz i was tha original batman.

all tha stuff bout two face and robin and shit was jus nameplay

Im Not Bat Man! My Rap Nanme Is Jay R!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

UPPING FOR THIS SHITT RIGHT HERR NIGGAS...come on vote

upin homies.......................................

Voted For: yo yo yoimbatman

Ight Tha 1 an onlii B won that with ease but to the one and onlii you stole my line man --

look theres batman! i jus found robin hes tha one in batmans pants with his head bobbin

I used that same line agianst batman in are battle but even with out that line you still won


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But i gotta vote for bat man cause you stole my line ^^^^^^^^^^^^

Then wheres Robin?
He's got his pants down and your the one bobbin*
^^^thatz your line dumbass...definatley different from mine...iight tho cuz ya votez gittin DQ'ed...fucked up vote...gay ass shit right therr...you dont accusse some1 of shit,especialy if ya wrong...thatz gay as fuck...and tha worst part was that you aint vote for me cuz of that wrong accusation...thatz gay

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

holy shit so much explinations... 3/10
you verse was a "wtf verse"
the other one 2/10
you verse was "Lmfao verse"

upppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn even though its not down that far.........

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

vote for yo yo yoimbat....

u got my vote cuz your verse was better in personal punches. but your vocab is simple . so just elevate on that and keep your structure straight.cuz its loppy ass fuck just like the other cat..keep your shit straight .. u got my vote though just because of the personal punches! and other cat didnt have nothing!

That one and...* you need to elevate on your vocab and u need to keep your structure straight because its real loppy and u gotta stop self glorification and start making them punches!! no hate just work on ur verses !!

wait..! i fucked up .. i voted for the right one but accidently put vote for yo yo yoim...*..shit my bad. but keep the VOTE!!!!!!!

ohhhh fuck!!!!!!! delete my vote.. i voted for the wrong one.. fuck!!!!!!!!!!.. my bad.. shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!delete my vote!!! sorry bout that

so wait... are you voting for me? or the one and onlii?

uppin for more votes on this battle........come on

upping homiez.....................................

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Bitch ass nigga dont know who he is
Wtf is this white ass crack doin in the rap biz?
wack who cares
I choke your ass up and take your money.
Last night I had your girl and she was callin me honey.
wack played
Cuz Mike i know who you really be.
Your a gay ass homo thats all to me
wack
B no hard feelings man.
I know you do what you can.
wack
But in this case your best aint good enough.
Cuz My rhymes are like shattered glass...real rough.
wackc
Damn nigga your rhymes cant touch me.
Cuz im like ali floatin like a butterfly stinging your ass like a bee.
meh close to biting a line and it was still wack

ok ur glass line was your best and it was wack probably one of the worst verses ive ever seen on rv work on vocab personals creativy wordplay




do you know what a punch is, no1 can see any type of diss
idk who your tryin to play cuz we all know who tha real batman is*
personal but it was wack
itz pathetic that your close to losin to Big_O**
your sorry, and know you cant beat me JOE!!***
not good its a personal but yea
idk why you keep sayin nigga, bitch your white****
come on,your a newb and you know im right
wack but true
look theres batman! i jus found robin
hes tha one in batmans pants with his head bobbin
lol thsi was funny
your name should be tha joker cuz your rymes make everyone laugh
i got the whole rappin package,but you bitch ass barely has half
wack
say tha wrong shit and get cut, callin you two face
batman says hes returns but never began,jus like mase*****
funny line semi creative
overall u had personals but they werent good ones except for the batman ones the robin line was funny so props
work on vocab personals wordplay and creativity ive seen better from you

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

damn bro you got some skillz

im givin this vote to tha 1 an onlii because he had better punches and i thought his flow was a bit better...overrall this battle was weak but im givin it to tha 1 an onlii bcuz he had the better verse

Mike used pretty much the same line Big O did there was a little bit of re arrangement. So...quit giving him props for that. Hes pretty much biting but changing it a little bit.

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Bitch ass nigga dont know who he is
Wtf is this white ass crack doin in the rap biz?
^No punch, kinda childish...3/10^
I choke your ass up and take your money.
Last night I had your girl and she was callin me honey.
^played concept, no punch 0/10^
Cuz Mike i know who you really be.
Your a gay ass homo thats all to me
^nice personal..u used his name..not! 0/10^
B no hard feelings man.
I know you do what you can.
^feeling sympathetic? fuck outa hear 0/10^
But in this case your best aint good enough.
Cuz My rhymes are like shattered glass...real rough.
^oh shit nice reference....not! 0/10^
Damn nigga your rhymes cant touch me.
Cuz im like ali floatin like a butterfly stinging your ass like a bee.
^oh nice, stealin ali's quote..and you worded it weak as fuck 0/10 ^

overall man you need tons of elevation!!! and ur vocab ur punches ur personals really need to be upped...u had no good concepts or wordplay...just plain jibber jabber.....2/10


do you know what a punch is, no1 can see any type of diss
idk who your tryin to play cuz we all know who tha real batman is*
^right, thanks for tellin me...no punch 3/10^
itz pathetic that your close to losin to Big_O**
your sorry, and know you cant beat me JOE!!***
^No personal, oh shit u used his name...2/10^
idk why you keep sayin nigga, bitch your white****
come on,your a newb and you know im right
^so wut...no punch....and ur a newbie also 0/10^
look theres batman! i jus found robin
hes tha one in batmans pants with his head bobbin
^lol nice punch....kinda fucked.....but oh well 4/10^
your name should be tha joker cuz your rymes make everyone laugh
i got the whole rappin package,but you bitch ass barely has half
^nothing there.....dont know wut to say 0/10^
say tha wrong shit and get cut, callin you two face
batman says hes returns but never began,jus like mase*****
^nope, so bad lol..0/10^

overall...kinda weak man..ive seen better....and its annoying that u half to explain everyfucking thing....so bad...u should word ur verses better and make them more easier to put together...overall 4/10

v/tha 1 n onlii b