Intermental...Status...Implicit...No One Comes Close...NEw hottness...
 

this is a track that started otu with intermental and me and implicit decided to bless it with our talent ...and man implicit blessed this song...WOW...the boy can sing....wordness

here is a link that has all the songs ive listened to...
so dommsday when you click the link you will see a list of songs i listened to
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...24&postcount=43



aight yo the link is right here...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=268333

and yo this is dopenes

The order for this goes

Me=first verse
intermental=2nd verse
implicit=3rd verse and chorus

and any singing is implicit

yeah man lets get some feed on this track. if you leave links i will personally leave feed on it.

word i will leave feed on your songs once we get feedback

listening:
good beat, nice flow status, chorus is iight, the intro with imclicit singing is cool only at one spot its like if u messed up i think its at the begining, each chorus begining, intermental, nice lyrics man, nice flow and finaly nice emotions, i think this is your best man, really good, okay i seriously aint feeling implicit on the hook, no hate man but its just that i dunno, but ur last verse is ill , really it is, wow really really nice rappin man, ur pretty good man im surprised, i like the singing while ur rappin, overall nice track yall
return the favor on my beat: wanted in the rythmic convergence
.::.Speats.::.

Yo I apreciate it, status feelin youre ish....implicit know its good

wow... implicit can sing.. you gotta be on one of my tracks man get at me on msn

dominic_hanson171@hotmail.com

status... i like your verse.. your voice is kool man flow is on point lyrics are kool. emotion is decent your mic presence is nicee you suit these sort of track... your quality is kool aswell

implicit your singing is ill mate nothig more i can really say im feeling your verse deffo

inter... iite you always soud ya like ya whispering its ot as noticeable on this 0one though... quality is straight.. lyrics are kool.. flow is pretty decent but out of place in places overall not a bad verse

implicit you've improved alot man your verse is kool on this emotion is kool and your lyrics are kool, nice verse man everything was decent no flaws except your quality

overall decent track i think implicit stood out on this track... with his singing nice track boys keep droppin em :shoot:

apreciate it....yea def implicit outshined on this...,the nigga can sing

lol damn i've been tryin to get this beat forever :(.. hey fam plz give it to me :(.. i'll give u one of the hundreds of beats i got which i know u'll like :(

damb this is nice gr8 flow love this beat lol i gotta do a love song lol i neva dun one inter this is ya best nice lyrics good flow good emotion status nice shit gtood lyrics gr8 flow implicit-good singing :D its nice you all dun gr8 keep up One

Thanks I apreciate it, yo Dabatos, ill send it to you over msn or yahoo if you got it:

skaz2000@hotmail.com

inter_mental2@yahoo.co.uk

im gettin AIM soon so if you give me that Ill add you there too...

yo fromt he sounds of it this is the best track on Rv at the moment?


lol wordness.....^^well maybe not but fromt he sounds of it i thinkit may be

Ha Ha Ha. Man this is funny. I didn't think that it would get this kinda feed. But that's cool. Thanks to everyone for leaving feed. Leave links and we'll return the feed. And hit me up on the pm's if you wanna collab or something.

^^once i fifnish these fuckign battles i will give you the topic for our collab

werd, dope song. nice beat. all 3 of u had good verses. n i didnt know that spicca could sing, lol, good shit mang, werd

apreciate that col...hollal..."werd" lol

can we get some more feed por favor?

I'm SSSIIIIIICCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK of beats with sped-up voices as hooks and choruses. Who ever EQ'd the live singing fumbled it since it's too dry. You can't leave a singers vocals dry like that. He's got talent, but it's just mishandled by who ever did the levels in this. Some light reverb and just enough echo that it's barely noticible, then turn the leves down about 1-2dB as a starting point and it'll seem more harmonic right off the bat. It's a little to abrupt and corse as it is now, with a pretty smooth voice hidden within. Also, as the singer, whne you sing in and out of lines, instead of saying a word like "I" at the start of your line, sing it like "hI" with some "h" on the breath so it transitions in and out smoother. Makes your voice sound more whispy and easier to zone out to which = good for your music.

In any case, the beat's cool, but the flow in the first verse is lumpy. Like some words are cut up, like instead of saying "maybe you're the one" for example would sound like "mibee yuhduwun" just so the line fits.

the second verse is bad. Texty to death, and listen to the last line that says " I cherish your every single hug". Thats' the same thing that happened in the first verse at points and as an ender, that's the WORSE time to put it. It coulda been much more on flow if it was edited to "I cherish every single hug" and cut the excess words out.

Third verse is the best one on the song, too bad it's the shortest. You hoes shoulda put Ike on this. this is like..his home base, tacks liek these, ya know?
The feel and aim of this song kinda reminded me of a PG-13 rendition of Perfect Groupie


oh, PS Status, don't do that again with the feedback unless you're gonna use all them links for one track. You rob yourself. Think about it and you'll see why.

Oh yeah, ALL THREE of you guys RTF here:http://community.rapverse.com/showt...772#post2475772

thank you for your feedback Doomsday. or Apexx. will return the feed.

returned the favor but I think you jus gave us sum shit about the beat when I couldnt care the less...

You might wanna re-read it. I spent spent one line out of 4 paragraphs talking about the beat it self. smh..

You actually spent one paragraph on the topic which was the same size as the next 3 paragraphs........

Nah son. These are the only two lines out of the entire feedbakc that I even mention the beat:
I'm SSSIIIIIICCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK of beats with sped-up voices as hooks and choruses.
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In any case, the beat's cool, but the flow in the first verse is lumpy. <--and this one talks abotu the flow, not the beat really.

The paragraph you think is about the beat is about who ever EQ'd the song, and tips for the singer. If that's not feedback, I got no clue what is. With that said, I'm not gonna debate about my feedback when everyone else got it. 1

yeah thanks for the feed. no more arguing. that was actually good feedback compared to other peoples one line feedback.

Listening...

I don't like the beat...

First Verse- Flow was choppy at the start...vocals are really loud over the beat...quality is good...delivery was coo...straight verse...

Hook- Wow...you can most definetly sing...some nice R and B shit...word...

Second Verse- Flow is choppy...quality is decent, nothin special...lyrics were coo...delivery was lacking...marriage proposal..? Haha...nice...decent, just work on ya flow..

Gawd damn that hook...

Third Verse- More singing...dope...rap comes in...nice flow...good quality...but damn...your singin is dope...go do some American Idol shit and win.

Overall...decent track...Implicit stole the show though...

thanks for the feed LE.

^^like how i made you the number one man on this track, lol the "chorus is dope"
thats what there saying....lol

Yeah def thanks for the feed...implicit did shine this track

^yeah thanks to everyone who showed support in leaving feed on this track. appreciate it.

everyone wants to sing nowadays


haaaaa


WTF...the track dropped out in the left in when the lyrics came in

haaa...weird


quaility sounds good


1st cat wasn't bad...flow is pretty decent


rhyming could be better...sounds personal though...or close to it



Intermental...sounds like you rapped some truth in that

"gimme some brain...last name"...not sure if someone u wanted to have ur last name u'd brag about getting brain from


verse sounds deep though


last cat...voice sounds EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK

flow is pretty coo


not bad dawgs


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iite thanks..............

uppin this for just a lil more feed?

yepperz...uppp...get at me on aim Imp..holla