Big Jay R vs Satans spawn
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 KO
4-1 KO



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-10-05 at 04:15 PM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.


Win by 3-0 KO

Big Jay R has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-07-05 04:16 PM.

You didnt Ask me for this battle?

Who The fuck are you?

Well Anyway You Done Set it Up So I Guess I'll Rip Your ass

Satans Spawn has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-07-05 04:36 PM.

Step Up Bitch You Set Up the Battle and I Want To Know Who The Fuck Are You?

You say you role with t town but they call me the don.
Look at you with your whack ass nike's and your fake sean john.
Cuz im Kickin your ass and takin your bitches number.
Nigga your raps are boring they put people in deep slumber.*
You think your gonna rip my ass.
Fuckin homo Ill deffinately pass.
Ill fuckin cap you 4 times with a 12 gauge.
Bitch ass nigga cant even act his fucking age.
Cuz my rhymes are electric Making dead bodies move like frankenstein
Man you should just stop righting cuzs my time to shine.
Do you really think your Satan's Spawn?
In that case the apocolypse well never see dawn.
Cuz your rhymes are all based on what you imitate.
Ill kill your ass..youll be standin at tha pearly gate.
Damn i cant believe you think your the adversary
Cuz your you cant rap Your verses put people in a torpor.**
People askin wtf is this nigga on stage for?

**torpor-state of inactivity-inability to control motor skills-"retarded"

I made a few grammatical errors but im sure you get the just.

This was feedback posted for Satans Spawn
 

checking polls on this..................................

This was feedback posted for Big Jay R
 

What The fucks Up With this Guy I Never Heard Of Him Before
He Settin Up Battles he'll Never Win like Money Goin To A Whore
^^whack,bad opener...not feelin it at all

Why Should I Even Say Anymore Im Droppin My Weakest On J.R
Plus This Guy Has More Fruity Punchez Than A Voilent Gay Bar
^^not feelin it,iight attempt at a punch but didnt connect,whack

No Personals on This Guy and Low Level Punchez Yet Im Winnin
They Gonna Call This Guy Geovoni The Way I Left Him Spinnin
^^how can you say your winnin when nobody voted b4 you dropped?...wasnt feelin this at all...bad once again


You say you role with t town but they call me the don.
Look at you with your whack ass nike's and your fake sean john.
^^whack as fuck...dont say this ever again

Cuz im Kickin your ass and takin your bitches number.
Nigga your raps are boring they put people in deep slumber.*
^^feelin it,nice vocab mixed with a jab,first line was played though

You think your gonna rip my ass.
Fuckin homo Ill deffinately pass.
^^childish,whack,NO!

Ill fuckin cap you 4 times with a 12 gauge.
Bitch ass nigga cant even act his fucking age.
^^wherez tha punch?...nope,not gon work

Cuz my rhymes are electric Making dead bodies move like frankenstein
Man you should just stop righting cuzs my time to shine.
^^liked tha first line but 2nd line blew monkey balls

Do you really think your Satan's Spawn?
In that case the apocolypse well never see dawn.
^^lovin tha vocab and i think it was a more of a jab than a punch,nice

Cuz your rhymes are all based on what you imitate.
Ill kill your ass..youll be standin at tha pearly gate.
^^iight punch,pretty good

Damn i cant believe you think your the adversary
Cuz your you cant rap Your verses put people in a torpor.**
People askin wtf is this nigga on stage for?
^^last line was bad...other 2 were nice and i like tha vocab

iight lemme break it down...satans spawn,not a great verse,you can do better,get better vocab...no hate though,we still fam

Big Jay R...i felt that you started out weaker than weak but i like that you came back stronger and stronger...i loved tha vocab...your iight but still need a lot of elevation

NICE JOB BOTH OF YOU...KEEP AT IT AND JUS ELEVATE..SATANS SPAWN IVE SEEN BETTER...JUS KEEP WORKIN ON IT BOTH OF YOU...HIT ME BAK

VOTE OR DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ill return the favor...

Upiinnnnngggggggggggggggggggggggggg@@@@@ Please Vote!!!1

Voted For: Satans Spawn

one sided battle, you win

v/satans spawn

rtf lol

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

wtf kinda vote is that............................

you should DQ that whack ass vote...uppin for this battle and for real votes

Yea You Can DQ that vote only Real Votes Allowed

But You Have to Report it If you Want it Gone Im not Bothering With It

I PMed Strobe about it........Oh yeah...and im upping this.

This was feedback posted for Big Jay R
 

What tha fuck is up with "*" or w/e they are called an spelt....

This battle is....

Voted For: Satans Spawn

lmao...once again u merk anotherone

spawn-your verse was short n sweet...ur punches was down to the point..nothing that hard hitting but worth more than ur opponent...ur structure and flow was remarkable....personals was dope...overall 6/10 keep at it

jay r- ur a joke lol no hate but "they call me the don" if ur gunna take someones lines.....dont make it 50 cent lmao...ok anyways...mostly self glore...nothing to special or hard hitting overall i think u needa elevate fo real 4/10

v/satans spawn

rtf wen eva u want...no battles open now so...

This was feedback posted for Satans Spawn
 

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Upppppppppppppppppppppin.......................... ..............

Aii Yo Thanx 4 da Vote

Still Uppin ,................................

Yeah So Lets Uppin This
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Voted For: Satans Spawn

vote for satans spawn>>>... you got my vote cuz your structure was pretty perfect and beacuse even though you didnt write much. it looked like u knew wat you were doing and it seems like your better than wat you just did.. also because of " fruity pucnhes than a violen...
.. yeah and your vocab was also pretty koo..but next time drop a harder verse and and also drop more lines.


Big Jay R. you need to fix your structure.. you need to know that you gotta keep control of it.. you also gotta drop harder punch lines.. but your vocab was better and played harder but it seemed like your just getting the hang of it.. but just elevate.. no hate. just elevate...

Infinite_Stan

Thanks for the help man...Im not askin for votes Im asking for CONSTRUCTIVE! Critism and thats what you gave. Record isnt why i rap. Its to have fun and get better.

Uppin...................................for The Last Vote for 3-0 Ko

Nice Battle Big Jay

Maybe We will meet again and battle

Yep Its Getting Close To Closing ........................

^^i have an open battle please rtf with an honest vote...1

Voted For: Satans Spawn

Stanza had a better verse overall...punches to the whole concept...JR strcture was way off and the flow of it seemed forced in some points..punches didnt hit as hard as Stanzas...vocab was basic from both...this battle was basically one-sided the whole way...no hate just use this as motivation to become less wack.

vote-Stanza....

Thanx for RTf Man

Thsi Battle will Now be closed

3-0 Was the KO

Nice battle Big J

This was feedback posted for Big Jay R
 

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