Theory vs Natural killa
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No d/r
No hate

3-0 Ko

"I cannot get Dq'd for having more than 3 battles open"

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-08-05 at 11:49 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

let's go, accept right away and drop..............

ite...I'm check in now...you do the same muther fucker.

Theory has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-08-05 08:53 PM.

haha, ayo, beef or no beef, let's try to have a good battle. :rolleyes: :laugh:

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-08-05 08:54 PM.

Let's count the factors, your played, dumb, gay as hell
& when we atom together, it's easy to see ya aint stable as well
Aint mushroom fo' ya wack crew, they lettuce diss 'em, fuck
i'll have ya'll garden your pride, when I say olive you suck
I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved
'm ill, this guy just loves the dick
Island my punches, and yours? Jamaicin me sick

i ain't even takin this shit serious....i'ma just get up 'n tattle
cos c'mon,i ain't losin..this cat doesn't even kno how to set-up a battle
I'ma dent up his saddle 'n raddle..kill him 'n bury his heart in the clinic
& his flow's is like his name.....shit's just "TEARY" from start to finish
ya cards diminished...this shit could be B-ball 'n u'd try to cough on the batter
I'll snap a finger in ya face... cos that's how quick ya fell off the ladder
Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position

W/e....this kid is annoying me. -_-

Voted For: Natural killa

Nk ripped his verse
''I'ma dent up his saddle 'n raddle..kill him 'n bury his heart in the clinic
& his flow's is like his name.....shit's just "TEARY" from start to finish''
good punch
'm ill, this guy just loves the dick
Island my punches, and yours? Jamaicin me sick
bad punch
there explained

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nice wordplay...............should i know ur alias?
cuz ur style is familar
good verse too NK

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NK got ripped by a newb, lmao.

LMAO I hope to god you never vote in one of my battles.

lmfao, ya, NK did get ripped pretty bad, your d/r bitch black queens vote will get removed, sorry.

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checkin pool......................................

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lmao @ a 15 year old calling anyone a kid...
i've seen better from you NK.........:nono:

Voted For: Natural killa

this was ok, i liked it, i guess you can say it was short and sweet, this is how i saw it:

punches:natural killa
wordplay:theory
multi's:natrual killa
personal:natural killa
overall:natural killa

winner:natural killa

explination:
well i simply felt natural had it from the start and theory seemed like he was trying too hard for the wordplay, although it was very creative but i do feel natural had more impact against theory with the way he worded his punches and personals so imma give the win too natural killa

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checkin pollz....nice job both....keep at it...peace

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pollz, idk...he had some queer wordplay.....n ok punches...ur punches were meh....ive seen better from you...but i think you'll take it for originality

LMFAOOOOOOOO @ this site. Wow.....................

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checkin......................................polls

Voted For: Natural killa

aight yo you won you both where hella wack

killa you had wack lines and if the other guy was good you would have lost

theory you had good consepts but it was wack and worded wrong so you lost

vote=killa

i know i gave wack feedback but even strobe will say you lost

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Voted For: Natural killa

rofl yewa ur opener killed him 2nd bar too damn mad good
loved the personals and multis the battle lne killed it lol
theory not very good no personals structure off in parts but not abd jsut work on personals kid

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Voted For: Natural killa

lmao @ theory's themed punches
the jamaican one is real played out tho lol

nk's was more of a battle verse tho
the punches hit hard, good multis in most of the bars

good battle from both of u tho :thumbup:

NK, please RTF to the link in my sig
thx

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Lmao at M's vote getting DQed for inadequate feed...tf?

haha at my vote i knew that was gettin d/q lol oh well g/l

This was feedback posted for Theory
 

pollz....omg......and you said i was weak :laugh2:

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Voted For: Natural killa

Natural killa - Good spit, you flowed well had good wordplay, and hard punches.

Best Line - Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position

Worst Line - ya cards diminished...this shit could be B-ball 'n u'd try to cough on the batter
I'll snap a finger in ya face... cos that's how quick ya fell off the ladder

Theory - Good spit, had some wordplay in there, ok flow.. and some iight punches.

Best Line - Aint mushroom fo' ya wack crew, they lettuce diss 'em, fuck
i'll have ya'll garden your pride, when I say olive you suck

Worst Line - I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved

OVERALL - This was an ok battle, I give it to NK. He had better wordplay, harder punches and a solid flow. Theroy I liked some of your shit, but you didnt have hard hitten punches.

Vote - Natural Killa

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Voted For: Natural killa

Theory

Let's count the factors, your played, dumb, gay as hell
& when we atom together, it's easy to see ya aint stable as well
Naw wasnt feelin this...........
Aint mushroom fo' ya wack crew, they lettuce diss 'em, fuck
i'll have ya'll garden your pride, when I say olive you suck
MEH.....ok
I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved
MEH
'm ill, this guy just loves the dick
Island my punches, and yours? Jamaicin me sick
LMFAO.....NOOO

Overall.....5/10

vs

Natural

i ain't even takin this shit serious....i'ma just get up 'n tattle
cos c'mon,i ain't losin..this cat doesn't even kno how to set-up a battle
MEH....ok...coulda worded better
I'ma dent up his saddle 'n raddle..kill him 'n bury his heart in the clinic
& his flow's is like his name.....shit's just "TEARY" from start to finish
Aight....
ya cards diminished...this shit could be B-ball 'n u'd try to cough on the batter
I'll snap a finger in ya face... cos that's how quick ya fell off the ladder
Ha...aight
Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position
Aight....decent

Overall....7/10

v/natural for a better overall verse....theory work on better and more direct punches....also work on your wordplay as well as wording

Voted For: Theory

i ain't even takin this shit serious....i'ma just get up 'n tattle
cos c'mon,i ain't losin..this cat doesn't even kno how to set-up a battle
:wtf: the concept is newbish and played, delivery is weak..
I'ma dent up his saddle 'n raddle..kill him 'n bury his heart in the clinic
& his flow's is like his name.....shit's just "TEARY" from start to finish
rhymin was meh, and his name ain't fuckin "TEARY" its "THEORY" they are 2 completely different words..
ya cards diminished...this shit could be B-ball 'n u'd try to cough on the batter
I'll snap a finger in ya face... cos that's how quick ya fell off the ladder
falling off, played concept and u know it..
Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position
finally, an ok punch..

:wtf: muthafucka...u are battlin wack lately, the last like 3-4 battles i've seen of ures have been weak and inconsistent....you need to stop battling so much cuz its like ure draining ure punches. flow was aight, you had like one decent punch though and that wasn't all that great either, now start battling decent like i've seen you do or i won't vote on ure shit anymore, lol :thumbup:


Let's count the factors, your played, dumb, gay as hell
& when we atom together, it's easy to see ya aint stable as well
wordplay was meh, punch was meh..
Aint mushroom fo' ya wack crew, they lettuce diss 'em, fuck
i'll have ya'll garden your pride, when I say olive you suck
[B}lol, decent wordplay here..[/B]
I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved
decent..ok flip on a fairly used concept..
'm ill, this guy just loves the dick
Island my punches, and yours? Jamaicin me sick
punch was wack..wordplay was aight..

first battle i've seen of ure's, it was an average verse, the concepts you used in two bars at least were played, u put a nice flip on the one of them, ure wordplay was ure strongest factor, it was nice, forced in places, but it flowed nicely, punches were....ok. one point, from all the big talk you make saying everyone is wack, if ure battles are generally like this, then u need to elevate. NO HATE. just criticism, cuz this verse whilst not bad, it wasn't exactly dope either.

V/ - Theory

Voted For: Theory

DAMN!!!!!! this was a good battle....... both of u had good punches and metas........ Theory had better wordplay........ too bad i was sorta lookin for somebody to take own him, but i've gotta say he took this one.....

vote: Theory........ u got this u conceited bastard.....

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Voted For: Theory

Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position

vs

I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved

Despite having only 1 quotable, Theory took this with relative ease. His none quotables were quite creative and had some alright wordplay, if they lacked the punch to go with it. Nat on the other hand came pretty garbage with the exception on that one punch, hardly any creativity and his concepts were played and not hitting.

V/ Theory

Voted For: Theory

Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position

vs.

Let's count the factors, your played, dumb, gay as hell
& when we atom together, it's easy to see ya aint stable as well
I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved

Laid Back says:
v/theory, he came with harder punches, his other 2, one was forced and one was a diss at a crew, not the oppenant, and NK, yours were either corny or didnt make sense/bad. Theory got it

Voted For: Theory

Let's count the factors, your played, dumb, gay as hell
& when we atom together, it's easy to see ya aint stable as well
Aint mushroom fo' ya wack crew, they lettuce diss 'em, fuck
i'll have ya'll garden your pride, when I say olive you suck
I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved
'm ill, this guy just loves the dick
Island my punches, and yours? Jamaicin me sick

All that was so fuckin creative, ill verse.

Vs

i ain't even takin this shit serious....i'ma just get up 'n tattle
cos c'mon,i ain't losin..this cat doesn't even kno how to set-up a battle
Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position


one sided to fuck.

no hate, but he deof took this one.


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Let's count the factors, your played, dumb, gay as hell
& when we atom together, it's easy to see ya aint stable as well

NICE WORDPLAY, IM FEELIN THE CONCEPT...WAS ORIGINAL.

Aint mushroom fo' ya wack crew, they lettuce diss 'em, fuck
i'll have ya'll garden your pride, when I say olive you suck

PROLLY THE MOST CREATIVE BAR I EVER SEEN ON RV, ILL SHIT SERIOUSELY.

I'll make you trip up, slip up, wack is what your called
You'll head off to a loss with no decapitation involved

NICE WORDPLAY..DECENT PUNCH

'm ill, this guy just loves the dick
Island my punches, and yours? Jamaicin me sick

AGAIN NICE WORDPLAY, KIND PLAYED BUT A NICE FLIP ON IT.


DOPE VERSE.

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i ain't even takin this shit serious....i'ma just get up 'n tattle
cos c'mon,i ain't losin..this cat doesn't even kno how to set-up a battle

NICE PERSONAL, SOLID OPENER

I'ma dent up his saddle 'n raddle..kill him 'n bury his heart in the clinic
& his flow's is like his name.....shit's just "TEARY" from start to finish

NA TEARY N THEORY MEH.

ya cards diminished...this shit could be B-ball 'n u'd try to cough on the batter
I'll snap a finger in ya face... cos that's how quick ya fell off the ladder

DECENT ATTEMPT BUT WASNT FEELIN THE WORDING

Swell up ya bladder,then maybe you'll shut up with ya thin ambition
'n you won't last in this fight.................but u'll sure finish in that position

THIS WAS A DOPE PUNCH, DEFO YA BEST.

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THEORY PLAIN CAME MORE CREATIVE AND HARDER.

PROPER EXPLINATION.

Voted For: Theory

word.............................................. .........

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so, upping........................................