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Status vs shodown
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6 - 10 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Keep your hands up at all times. No punching below the belt. Come out swinging. *Rings Bell* Minimum posts to vote: 69 Check in by: 10-09-05 at 06:59 AM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. Win due to banning |
shodown has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-05 06:32 AM.
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man wtf is this, yo 30 minute check in, LOL yo im about to go to sleep once i fucking download this beat..lol well let me do some math and see how long i got till after i check in, LOL
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yo the beat i was downloading fucked up so i gotta restart my download so i will accept and try to post up today
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Status has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-05 06:37 AM.
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yo status you gone drop....ima drop in a few...aight peace..
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honest then, when the fuk have you ever been dominant
i promise friend i'll wet ya gems like this whole tsunami ABdomant you like a kwame blend mixed with kid rock put ya fist to this c0ck and lip lock, ya shits pop my joints dirty and grimmy you little bastard your raps a disaster off beat poetry you've mastered your "hammer taps" while my mallet straight smashes this wak kids a grad from guerilla blacks rap classes you rap average...my bad, below that sombody call kojak, to give this little hoe a smack sorry kinda rushed..... |
yo i forgot about this, LOL funny shit, man this was made last night and i hella forgot about it, LOL damn i cant believe i for got, i will write my verse and drop it tommroow night about this time
aight peace |
nah nah blind flow it crazy fool.............................................. .......
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^^thats what i mean.........i will be back on in afew hours
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yo im mad tired wrote this really really fast yo im real tired....lol i typed that twice, lol wordness
Kid you put out 3 cds yet no body knows you, sorry the facts hurt Bitch u couldn’t make a name for urself until signed onto rap verse ^^^that was just the opening act you can tell it’s not the show down u could rap with canibus about aids, still wouldn’t be pro-found* after this battle you couldn’t come close to the status in here I’ll cut this short…….but yo im not talking about your career *Yo profound means insightful or deep And as I stated in my verse hes a nobody and he is found by canibus Something like that I don’t know im hella tired |
kk ayo people now vote man DAMN,,,,,,,nice drop status....
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This was feedback posted for shodown
check check checkin pollz.............................
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yo that was a certifiably sorry dope from me, i took like no time writing that
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hahaha....yea i noticed.....it had really nothing pertaining to me.........except for my name....
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we'll rematch later or how about tighr now.....
i'll set it up....???? |
umm set it up on friday....upppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Voted For: shodown
shodown - iight spit, it flowed well. I liked your multi's. Some ok punches. Best Line - honest then, when the fuk have you ever been dominant i promise friend i'll wet ya gems like this whole tsunami ABdomant you like a kwame blend mixed with kid rock put ya fist to this c0ck and lip lock, ya shits pop Worst Line - you rap average...my bad, below that sombody call kojak, to give this little hoe a smack Status - iight spit. it flowed ok, and you had some ok punches. Best Line - after this battle you couldn’t come close to the status in here I’ll cut this short…….but yo im not talking about your career Worst Line - Kid you put out 3 cds yet no body knows you, sorry the facts hurt Bitch u couldn’t make a name for urself until signed onto rap verse OVERALL - This was a weak battle, both did there thing.. but I gave my vote to down cuz he had stronger punches. Vote - Shodown RTF - or vote be DQ'd http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210106 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Status
wow, this battle was weak..... status, i can see that you rushed ure verse cuz it was weak and i've seen you drop hella dope. the opener was on a played concept and had a weak delivery, the middle bar was not the best nameplay, but the 2nd line made the punch quite gud, the closer was too basic and simplistic for me, lacked ure kinda usual creativity. shodown, ure verse was weak, the flow was cool and you had a few multies going for you, but i can't see where any real punches came into the battle, that kojak thing you used at the end was wack, u cud've used it along with suckin lollipops for a concept and get a decent punch, all ure bars had weak delivery, the only plus was the multies which i think u may have focused too much on. V/ - Status.......better verse. ....but Status, u need to try and get back to the flow you used to have, back to the times when you cud merk sumbody with an invisible verse, you know what i'm talking about :laugh: that was dope, lol. plz...plz...plz...RTF on my NK battle, link is in the siggy, it is a fair length, but well worth the read. problem is it is getting mad slept on. :( |
kk....MAN uppin i wil rtf LATER today......................
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This was feedback posted for Status
checkin the polls.........................................
I mite vote on my Natural Killa account later... |
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yp i could still rip hard but honestly those where all prewritten....not sure if thats bad but most of my verses back then where prewritten well not really prewrtitten i just took my time now i just record a freestyle and take the best lines ....lol funny shit but yo i remeber those days...how do you know about that? |
yea who ever that kid was i owned with 1 bar never came back to the site, LOL word upping
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Voted For: shodown
you rap average...my bad, below that sombody call kojak, to give this little hoe a smack VS after this battle you couldn’t come close to the status in here I’ll cut this short…….but yo im not talking about your career My vote def. Goes to SHowdown.......................... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^obviously thats gunna get dq'd why do you bother voting?
and status just reading ur last message...can u get a link to where u merked a kid so bad...i wanna see that lol |
Voted For: shodown
both were weak..and i dont think its beacuse you 2 rushed.. you 2 just suck ... ..] Infini.stan... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^FOOL i'll BLAST YA ASS.....me and status will demolish you without even trying....you fuckin HERB.......
yo big O MAKE your vote more DETTAILED........so it can count even you infinitstan.... |
word i wont dq no votes im just gonna make sure that first line aint bitten and im gona drop the link for th einvisble spit in anything goes in LL
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it was Bertie i think who you beat with that invisible verse
OH SHIT!!! that's like still the most creative verse i've ever seen on RV...ever!! |
This was feedback posted for shodown
meh not feeling the fake personals from status so i think you got this work on ur personals though structure was better on this
bump |
uppin this shit........yo comeon....................
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Voted For: shodown
honest then, when the fuk have you ever been dominant i promise friend i'll wet ya gems like this whole tsunami ABdomant your "hammer taps" while my mallet straight smashes this wak kids a grad from guerilla blacks rap classes VS after this battle you couldn’t come close to the status in here I’ll cut this short…….but yo im not talking about your career __________________________ Sho: you had a solid flow throughout and a coupla original concepts i was feelin, you defo elevating mate, stay up. Status: I thought you would have taken this before i read your verse, this is the weakest i seen from you in a while, you came too played like your first bar, that concept was way overused nowadays... your closer was decent though. V./ shodown NO HATE RTF IN SIG PLEASE |
Voted For: shodown
I say Shodown in this battle..... no d/r... but i think his shit stuck out more. had good multi's both were enjoyable. sho sounded as if he had more punches that stuck. "your "hammer taps" while my mallet straight smashes this wak kids a grad from guerilla blacks rap classes"- SHO, good lines there man, as well as everything else. "after this battle you couldn’t come close to the status in here I’ll cut this short…….but yo im not talking about your career" - statue. Those were the only things that stuck out to me. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ok status bitched at me so by fake personals im talking about ur opener he hasnt put out 3 cd's lol
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yo he posted that he did put out 3 cds so no there are no fake personals....stupid hoe
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Voted For: Status
Shodown honest then, when the fuk have you ever been dominant i promise friend i'll wet ya gems like this whole tsunami ABdomant Nah.. you like a kwame blend mixed with kid rock put ya fist to this c0ck and lip lock, ya shits pop Not a punch.. my joints dirty and grimmy you little bastard your raps a disaster off beat poetry you've mastered Didn't connect.. your "hammer taps" while my mallet straight smashes this wak kids a grad from guerilla blacks rap classes Played as shit.. you rap average...my bad, below that sombody call kojak, to give this little hoe a smack Nope.. Status Kid you put out 3 cds yet no body knows you, sorry the facts hurt Bitch u couldn’t make a name for urself until signed onto rap verse Played.. ^^^that was just the opening act you can tell it’s not the show down u could rap with canibus about aids, still wouldn’t be pro-found Nah.. after this battle you couldn’t come close to the status in here I’ll cut this short…….but yo im not talking about your career Played as shit.. Overall, this battle wasn't very good at all. Shodown's verse was full of lines that didn't connect, weren't punches, or just sucked. Status had two played punches and one crappy punch. But, regardless, Status had punches.. and shodown didn't. That's what separates the winner from the loser in this battle. Status wins. Vote - Status Both of you should sign up for the Punchline League. It's one of the best leagues this site has ever seen, with over 50 people in it right now. It's a good place to elevate without messing up your records. You should sign up. |
yo implcit said this cat was wack and i could beat him with played lines so thats what i did, lol funny how mimesis and King solo are the ones who voted for me, LOL funny shit yo
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He isn't that good.. I don't really think you should be behind, but whatever.
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yo.................uppin............yea status i aint even equaled to you but i just wanted veterans so i could not be known as that wack kid.............i know im skilled just too many haters......and DR's
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Voted For: shodown
yo dis the battle you told me to vote for u on on aim, if not im sorry tell me what battle on aim... oh yea shodown took it ^. |
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