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Vaskez vs. Makeveli Trained
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checkin in. Who the hell are you? ;) hehe
let's drop early Mak, if we can |
Bah, forget waiting for you to check in....
I'll make ya bleed with a kick, ya weaker than shit, while I'm meaner and sick They say you are what you eat, and you're always seen as a dick |
hehehe, hey vasky
i'll drop in a few |
ha, this'll be fun..........
He may be my fam, but i still say FUCK YOU...ya not clever Truth is, ya only purpose in the crew is recruitin newer members |
Perhaps you should explain that we're in the same crew on RB
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^^^^well yea, you pretty much just said it for me lol
but yea, we both in AM....i kinda hinted at it in the set up but yea, w/e |
As dope as AM is, I'm not sure everyone on here knows us...but they will hehehe
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wow...weak battle but vote vaskez for adding creativity on his verse
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lol SOMEBODY didn't get punches why do you guys even bother? but thanks for the vote 1-0
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ACTUALLY READ MY FEEDBACK CUZ I'M TRYING TO HELP YOU HOES.
ok, I was not impressed here. Vaskez - Your line was PLAYED AS FUCK. And I HATE played lines. I saw you do a lot better in Jr. son. (Don't take that as an ego boost, I wasn't watching you in particular, I peep everyones battle on a basis) This line was weak though, maybe you didn't realise it was played though, either way, not very good. Try to stay fresh and just try to always know what is played and what is cool these days, cuz you have the ability to drop decent. I noticed you have been kind of slacking and you've been REALLY inconsistent in some battles. Actually put your effort, fine tune your verses, read it and say if someone else wrote this would I think it was good? And then you should be dropping pretty good all the time. Makaveli Trained - I seen you on RB and some of your shit here also, look, your good but ALWAYS inconsistent, you'll have a good battle, then a CRAP one, you'll have 3 good lines in a row and then a shit one. You know? Well anyways this week was your crap week so to speak. That punch was just plain terrible, the personal didn't even hit, AND that line is actually played out by wack noobies. Basicaly same shit I told to Vaskez. You should REALLY focus on spending MORE TIME on your verses, and fine tune them, and you should be good, remember, MORE TIME, make sure everything about it is good to you. Therefore, it came down to this Horible and played punch vs. Good punch but played So I gtg with Vaskez on this one. V/ The guy with that mexican name. |
Who are you theory? Calling me son and shit, you talking like a vet.
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nooooooooooo, were not a vet, were random noobs. -_-
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neither came hot....but...
v/vaskez.. |
:wtf: vaskez that was wack as fuck
the concept you used was played to fuck, i mean ure basically saying he eats dick which is a homo line and they are probably the most played out lines on RV and the added multi didn't help you any. MT....ure fuckin bar was weak as fuck to, i got the whole sorta punch you were going for after Vaskez made it apparent that you two are crew on RB, but still weak V/ - Makeveli Trained..........for not coming totally played!! |
lol 3-1 to me
Though for one I've never seen that punch like that and for 2, you can't just break a punch down into what it basically means and say it's played! LMAO. Almost ALL punches either say the opponent is wack or fat or gay. So you can't say a punch is played cos it says the opponent is wack/fat/gay! Lol poor argument KS |
llol, vaskez i'll battle you on rb, not this punchline shit
don't know why but now i just wanna battle you........n you better fuckin try! |
Both were weak but Vaskez had the less-wack bar...
V/Vaskez............. |
lol who has the wackest bar contest....me, Mak, KS and Spek are all in it this week
damn forget this, I'ma come nice in LLL this week tho hopefully |
both weak,
vask came harder... V/ vask. |
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hehe, fuck it.......i'll see you in LLL
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Do you REALLY wish that? :D
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both were really not that good....v/vazkez....betta punch....
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v- MT
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Vote- Vaskez, yours was played but MT's was even wacker..
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V/vaskez.....he came wit a less wack punch
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duh, the fuck kinda question was that :laugh: |
A simple kind of question: do you really wanna face me in LLL? hehe, you might get sonned lol just messin wit you
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Yea, I don't gotta say by now since it's already been said both were weak. Vaskez had a cliche at least with some sort of twist to it. Mak just made a statement really. I mean, everyone in the crew recruits new members and even if Vaskez was the only one to, it's not much of a punch, nah mean?
Vote - Vaskez |
v/vaskez...... kinda played concept but i really didnt even feel a punch comin from MT
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vaskez won. his punch wasnt that played. makevelis was played. people always use shit like that when battling crew members. vaskez won.
v/vaskez |
Vaskez wins.
Makeveli Trained loses. |
This thread is now closed.
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Moved to Closed Battles.
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