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-Cezar- vs. Sin`cere
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g'luck... |
yea check....
ur goin to need it....lol......and drop on time too.... |
We get hearing problems by ya style,its your voice we cant stand
Might aswell be Russel Simmons,From the way you make Def Jams blah...bored so i key'd mine up now |
Ya punches aint hitting, yea im right even if ya tried o hit me wit a left
Cuz mine is like knives that killed J(u)lius -Cezar- so now ull be Seeing Death EXPLANATIONS..... Ok right like im right and at the same time talking bout directions "left" and Cezar, J(u)lius that i killed him with knives....julius cesar died from being knifed....and seeing death is his OM in his sig....kinda of a good explanation....lol.... |
i dont see why you had to explain it...pretty simple
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V/Cezar.............. for having the better bar...
Ps. You dont need to explain 2 lines with 4 lines. |
We get hearing problems by ya style,its your voice we cant stand
Might aswell be Russel Simmons,From the way you make Def Jams ^^man saying his jams are deaf ain't really a punch, also jams doesn't rhyme well with stand Ya punches aint hitting, yea im right even if ya tried o hit me wit a left Cuz mine is like knives that killed J(u)lius -Cezar- so now ull be Seeing Death ^^this is a much better concept, poorly executed, don't just throw wordplay in like the left right stuff for the hell of it, make it work, make it funny/witty, make it have a point v/Sin'cere |
v/ sincere
slightly better, even though the explanation almost killed it cezar def jam lines arent effective in PL battles |
V/ - Cezar
both bars were pretty much as weak as each other..... but then Sin`Cere explained his, so it made it wacker |
v/ sin`cere...dat def jam shit was super wack lol
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Pretty close...but honestly...I gotta give it to cezar
His one seemed to hit more as a punch. Sin 'cere was too technical......try to avoid explainin ya shit too.. V/Cezar |
^^^Ooh shit....I forgot i was still logged on that account..
it's me...just to let you know... |
hotshh! n marvjay are'nt in the league?...so there vote cant count
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ohhh they arent????..... Quote:
aint this swaying????...ok then....Either count them or DQ....i think...if mimesis think so...cuz i do think this is swaying???? |
stop whinging that's not swaying at all
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yea it is....in my opinion.....jus let mimesis..decide..or wuteva....uppp...
and theory cant vote.... |
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v- SS
No time to explain. |
im up 3-2....and Theory can vote unless you directed that here couldnt vote in you check in or drop
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well im saying it now....cuz i found out he hatin on me...so.... |
^well it doesnt matter cuz it sorta like me saying whoever voted for you cant vote cuz me and that person have beef...so unless you address it in you "Check In or Drop" he can still vote...now just move on.
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wow
v/ cezar for not having an explanation longer than the actual punch |
4-2...im up....
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Yay, a close battle to vote on.
Sincere, maybe if you'd have executed your concept better as the idea for the nameplay was decent you'd get my vote. However, I felt even without the explanation, it came off as terribly forced. Cezar, I liked your bar, I thought it was nice. Vote - Cezar |
aight then 5-2 cezar's up...
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v/cezar
next time say I can't vote in your check in. and this aint even hate, you seriousy lost this. |
tooooooooo close to call
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im up 6-2...next say THEORY CANT VOTE
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wuteva....i didnt say that in my check cuz i saw his punchline afta my check...and knew he ahtin..but wuteva..... |
yeah umm.....V/ Cezar... sincere's wasnt that good of a personal... i think it coulda been better
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7-2.....keep em coming
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-Cezar- wins.
Sin`cere loses. |
This thread is now closed.
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Moved to Closed Battles.
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