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Apostrophe vs Mystic Chaos
Battle Rules:
6-10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 tko Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 10-11-05 at 08:01 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Apostrophe has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-05 08:55 PM.
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I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp….
&& no one would have fun watching your words play even if.. …………………………..you were the scrabble champ… I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool… Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s… From Detroit, Piston Fan? Kid give me a reason.. You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace.. ……………………………………….last season.. Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it.. While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat… …………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it… Thank You Sir... :thumbup: |
Mystic Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-11-05 02:28 PM.
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You wanna be a net thug with rhymes cheesier than cheddar The only Hood that you reppin is on the back of your sweater Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused* N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause You wasn't never meant to be born. I swear it was accident You talkin mean game for being a veteran in abstinance Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito *4'S mettas=metaphor, and they paused..meaning...its not happening :thumbup: |
ayyo, good battle right here......even though you told me you were going 6 lines thats iight lol :thumbup: g'luck
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^fuck my last post, we agreed to go 8...duh...im an idiot :confused:
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ok i left a vote for mystic but it said i checked the pollz...when this is my first response....this is what i had.......haha im liking mystic chaos lil more he had much better punches and his structure was good unlike Apostrophe...that was just weird structure but yeah iight battle ...yeah and that mosquito line lmao man funny shit
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lol @ my structure being weird.. when the majority of the site uses it... meh.. its coo.. nice battle mystic.. no offense to u tho.. but i think u have some corny lines.. like mosquito line and the sweater line.. they just sound like jokes flipped in to punchlines.. but u def have alot of potential.. word up.. + im upping this shit
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos
[Mystic Chaos] You wanna be a net thug with rhymes cheesier than cheddar The only Hood that you reppin is on the back of your sweater 7/10, if u worded it different da effect woulda been stronger Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused* N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause 5/10, kinda old punch man You wasn't never meant to be born. I swear it was accident You talkin mean game for being a veteran in abstinance 7/10, feelin this line...shit was iight Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito 8/10, lmao funniest line in ya verse altogether [Apostrophe] I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp…. && no one would have fun watching your words play even if.. …………………………..you were the scrabble champ… 3/10, didnt move me I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool… Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s… 5/10, ehh that was iight nothin new though From Detroit, Piston Fan? Kid give me a reason.. You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace.. ……………………………………….last season.. 5/10, that was iight but u word it sloppy Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it.. While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat… …………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it… 6/10, probably ya strongest line but not too serious multiz- neither punchlines- mystic (less played) personals- tie flow/structure- mystic (apos thru me off wit all da dots) humor/enjoyment- mystic (his lines were more appealin) wordplay- mystic creativity- both were creative jus used old concepts OVERALL VOTE= mystic chaos if i have one up, vote in it BOTH of yall...1 |
Voted For: Apostrophe
You wanna be a net thug with rhymes cheesier than cheddar The only Hood that you reppin is on the back of your sweater 3...i remember doing a hood line like this before...and that was in the cyphers...so,for a written line...this was bad. Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused* N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause 3....didn't like this..why?..becuz for the reader to catch it..we'd have to read the explanation.And explaining punches is considered atrocious nowadays. You wasn't never meant to be born. I swear it was accident You talkin mean game for being a veteran in abstinance 4...bah...decent,i guess........tho i actually remember using an abstinance line in cypers as well..LoL. Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito 4....bah.... I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp…. && no one would have fun watching your words play even if.. …………………………..you were the scrabble champ… 4.....didn't like how u had the dots 'n shit.decent punch nevertheless. I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool… Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s… 3...nah...sounded cheesy. From Detroit, Piston Fan? Kid give me a reason.. You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace.. ……………………………………….last season.. 5...Dope concept..but again...why the fuck you had the dots?..just weakened the punch by makin us pause for no reason. Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it.. While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat… …………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it… 5....good. OK...compared to the majority of battles in Fl,this was good. Apos.... Well...you had some good punches 'n shit..but u had dots in there that fuked it up a bit.Like..when we readin it..the dots make us pause and it's annoying.So stop that.Only line that sucked was the countin by 2's one..as that was just cheesy.The others were ite. Mystic... You had played lines.Hood/sweater,Abstinance...both played concepts that u used.And the metta's pause line..i didn't like it due to the fact that no one would be able to understand it if u didn't explain. Also...how is it ur verse in our battle was sooooooo much better than ANY other shit u wrote? it was a whole different style and everything....pre-writing doesn't allow u to conjour a verse beyond ur own level like that. This just leads me to MORE suspicion that u bit it from somewhere... Anyways... Vote-Apostrope Drop a vote in the link below http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210976 |
^yea i bit a verse that had ur names and personals about you in it?.....i was just tryin out new punches that came to my mind.....might be played...but i worded thiem differently....
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actually.. im not accusing u of biting cause im sure u dont mystic. but i read ur battle versus Natural Killa.. and i was like wow this is good competition then i saw your verse and was kinda meh..
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos
Mystic gets this both verses were str8 but i liked mystics better because h ehad more wordplay therefore more appealing, these are the strongest lines mystic Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito Apostrophe You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace.. ……………………………………….last season.. this vote goes to mystic Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^dawg thats a shitty ass vote.....anyways...uppin for votes
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This was feedback posted for Mystic Chaos
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Voted For: Apostrophe
Mystic...... You wanna be a net thug with rhymes cheesier than cheddar The only Hood that you reppin is on the back of your sweater PLAYED OUT.... Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused* N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause EHH...OK You wasn't never meant to be born. I swear it was accident You talkin mean game for being a veteran in abstinance SEX JOKES = PLAYED Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito PENIS JOKES = PLAYED... WHOLE VERSE = PLAYED EXCEPT FOR 1 BAR...GET MORE CREATIVE WITH IT APOS I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp…. && no one would have fun watching your words play even if.. …………………………..you were the scrabble champ… PLAYED..... I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool… Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s… NICE......... From Detroit, Piston Fan? Kid give me a reason.. You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace.. ……………………………………….last season.. PLAYED..... Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it.. While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat… …………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it… DOPE...NICE CLOSER.... OVERALL....COUPLE PLAYED LINES...COUPLE NICE LINES.. THIS BATTLE GOES TO APO BECAUSE HIS PUNCHES WERE MORE CREATIVE AND HIT HARDER.....MOST OF MYSTICS WERE TOO PLAYED.... |
^^ooh shit...invektive voting on a text battle..
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prob p/med or aimed for votes :cool:
j/p anyways....uppin.................... |
Voted For: Mystic Chaos
Mystic Chaos- Your verse was pretty funny, you had some played concepts...but you re-worded them to become doper and comical...you had good incorporated wordplay that appealed to me...your personals...was a penis line...we all know thats played...but then you had some pretty strong lines to back that up best line : Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused* N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause overall: 7/10 Apostrophe- Your verse was ok, hard to read due to the font, nonetheless you had some good punches there in ur verse....kinda some played scrabble line....backed it up with a couple good punches...had some good wordplay and personals...but lacked in the flow...hard to flow ur verse...so it didnt make the punches that appealing best line: Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it.. While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat… …………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it… overall: 6/10 v/mystic chaos |
^thanks for the votes...uppin..................................
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the best part is.. no one realizes that the scrabble line is a personal on ur sig..
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Voted For: Mystic Chaos
Mystic Chaos You wanna be a net thug with rhymes cheesier than cheddar The only Hood that you reppin is on the back of your sweater The First Line was kinda To Expected but the second line was a lil more original Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused* N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause .......The Concpet was sick but you Spell The other word menoupause... You wasn't never meant to be born. I swear it was accident You talkin mean game for being a veteran in abstinance ...Aii.... Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito .LOL corny but Made me laugh at how corny it was.. Overall Man You came quit decent and you had some original lines and some nice concept so I had to give my vote to you in this battle ................nice work man keep it up ....:) Apostrophe I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp…. && no one would have fun watching your words play even if.. …………………………..you were the scrabble champ… /..........Nice....../ I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool… Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s… .........Weak Concept and a Def Played punch........ From Detroit, Piston Fan? Kid give me a reason.. You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace.. ……………………………………….last season.. ........Weak........... Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it.. While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat… …………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it… ..........Aii...... Overall man You couldve Used more of an Original verse I say That you Should try to make up some good and dope concept and turn them into dope punchez ...........but in this battle you failed to do so ....so i couldnt give you my vote sorry :( my v/ goes to Mystic |
The favor is returned Now stop Buggin Me LOL
Yea Thanx for Yo vote though |
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Voted For: Apostrophe
I've Got To Say Apo Took This One. Myst's Bars Were ENTIIIIIRELY Played Out, And The Majority Of His Personals Were Fake. Dissing Apo's Shit With Women And Such, Eh... It Doesnt Have Much Effect For Me. Especially Since No One Knows Eachother So You Clearly Wouldnt Know. Myst's Best Line Was: 'Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused* N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause' I Mean, That Was The Most Original, And Legitamite Punch That He Threw At Apo. If You Spit Like That The Whole Time You Would Have Won. Apo... You're Punches Were Much More Original, And Throughout You Stayed Much More Consistant. While Myst Had A 'High Point', You Had Rather, A Single 'Low Point'. 'I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp…. && no one would have fun watching your words play even if.. …………………………..you were the scrabble champ…' Kind Of A Poor Opener In My Eyes. The Punch Just Fell Short Of The Rest Of The Verse. And It Also Lacked The Creativity Of The Other Lines. 'I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool… Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s…' I Dont Even Know Why But That Was My Favorite Line. It's Simplicity Yet Impact Was Just Real Nice In My Eyes. So Ya, Overall Apo Took This Easy. |
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http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=209572 ^Apos...you think u could RTF plz?^ |
Voted For: Apostrophe
Apostrophe: I spit hard on your verse… Leaving this battle damp…. && no one would have fun watching your words play even if.. …………………………..you were the scrabble champ… Lol Ouch...Good personal and punch...Really nice I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool… Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s… Lmfao good shit... From Detroit, Piston Fan? Kid give me a reason.. You wont rebound from this loss.. Like Ben Wallace.. ……………………………………….last season.. good shit Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it.. While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat… …………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it… Fucking owned... Overall: Your verse was sexy man. So dope, I had to touch myself. Nothing played, you had some hard-hitting punches, creative concepts, and dope personals. This verse will be hard to top. Mystic: You wanna be a net thug with rhymes cheesier than cheddar The only Hood that you reppin is on the back of your sweater Played as fuck. Lack of brains,you cant think of 4s so your mettas paused* N you aint got no flow man like you have mettapause Hot concept, but worded horribly...Would've been dope though You wasn't never meant to be born. I swear it was accident You talkin mean game for being a veteran in abstinance Meh...Decent...But again, you need to work on wording Dawg you aint get girls, ill end it...yo this shits feneto Girls c between ya legs, think you got bit by a mosquito Lol this made me laugh...Pretty good Overall: You had some played concepts, some wack lines, and some horrible wording in this verse man. Stay away from the played shit, and word your shit better man, because your verse DID have potential. You just didnt give him all you had, and he's not someone who will let you get by that easily. V/ Apostrophe |
Voted For: Apostrophe
Yeah you can write a verse but G you cant kill with it.. While I Lodge mine soo far down your throat… …………………………………..........S kiers will Chill in it… I Predict A KO’ the whole way.. I’ll be Routing this Fool… Cause The Odd’s Are Against You.. Like Counting By Two’s… vs. You wanna be a net thug with rhymes cheesier than cheddar The only Hood that you reppin is on the back of your sweater the skiers/lodge line killed....mystic chaos you had s al otta played lines, next time come wittier and more creative..but apostraphe gets this that skier line was dope... v/apos |
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