InfiniteStan vs ryda
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dickriding


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-13-05 at 08:29 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Ryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-05 08:30 PM.

InfiniteStan has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-05 08:32 PM.

im takin control of this louzzy cat who dreams a win
he had his chance to shyne his lights but were to dim
u dug a rabbit hole but you dug to deep to get back out
im da night prowler dat smelled ur fear without a doubt
your a dick "RYDA " and you still aint got a single vote
just drop the verse or the towel cuz youz a funny joke
my beats and rhymes are melting you down like liquid
im the hard solid "RYDA" or u can just call me wicked
your mind is hurting and crying cuz my shit is pure
my position of power diteriates with out a cure.
now u got it twisted thinking you got the best agility*
but im Infinite_Stan kid so picture the possibilitys......


Ryda* is his name


i tryed ....G- luck kid!!!!!

where u at ryda!! .. dont duck on me!!!!





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dude im almost done its a 3 day drop y u wanna get beat that bad

Infinatestan hope u came wit a gameplan
cause wen i KO u you'll fell lonley like a divorced man
this kid is 17 and he is a pussy says he is gettin honeys
but all he is fucking is infladable dummys
it says he is from the redland
afta this battle mentally u'll be drippin red man
man u got nothin i was rappin before ur life began
compare our rhymes im tippin the scale
cause my rhymes r betta and i now ill prevail
i seen ur battle wit unrestricted
wit ur weak lines u dont now im already ahead
this is the battle for the avatar
you and ur rhymes are bizarre
wen i spit you'll run like i am a police car
cause u scared of me u aint no real MC
you cant even beat me i guarantee
this kid thinks he's tough cause he called me out
i'll merk this kid then he'll now wat im bout
im gunna win this battle aint no doubt
He's tryin to figure out my game like he's a scout
This kid im deffinatley gunna bang out
Thats it is it game over for your rap Infinatestan
But dont worry u can go back to being an eminem fan

This was feedback posted for Ryda
 

Infinate won this so easily...ryda,you dropped this as a try-out for TL,your not gon make it bro...at least i dont think you will...keep elevatin mayne,i wont vote

i said this was a battle im in so they could check it out

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Infinite vs ryda

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vote to get this over with

Voted For: InfiniteStan

stan-your verse was iight, nothing special..you had good structure...well better than ur opponents...punches kinda played and un original...but aside from that iight verse....overall 5/10

ryda-sry to say i wasnt fealin ur verse u had played punches concepts everything...0/10...u need to elevate a hella lot

v/infinitestan

rtf within 49 hours or this vote is gone...1

upping this shit......





Stan vs ryda

Voted For: InfiniteStan

this was a weak battle from both

InfiniteStan - you had a few good ideas with the light line. you just need to learn to word it better. your rhymes were basic. nothing really special. no good personals or nothing. but you did TRY some punches

ryda - wow @ the wackness that this verse possessed. no punches. no personals. no wordplay. nothing. absolutely nothing. work on tryna come up with personals or something. or go topical.


vote - infinitestan

uppin vote for this ..



Infinite_Stan v.s ryda

Voted For: InfiniteStan

ok this was a pretty weak battle... but lets break it down..

Ryda - your verse was ok, the structure was realli off i didnt like it at all, you had some very, very corney lines they were played as hell, some punches you had were good, the vocabulary needs to be worked on becuase it was a bit shallow in that area, need some multis to make your flow better, but not a bad try.. keep elevatin...

IS - your verse was constructed alot better, punches hit harder, your structure was on point, had some nice vocabulary, the verse flowed pretty well throughtout, some of ur shit didnt realli make sence but overall i gave you this because of harder punches, better flow and nice structure good work

overall - IS

This was feedback posted for Ryda
 

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Infinite_Stan V.s Ryda..

c'mon people.. vote for this!!!

Voted For: InfiniteStan

InfiniteStan

im takin control of this louzzy cat who dreams a win
he had his chance to shyne his lights but were to dim
Nah..
u dug a rabbit hole but you dug to deep to get back out
im da night prowler dat smelled ur fear without a doubt
Not a punch..
your a dick "RYDA " and you still aint got a single vote
just drop the verse or the towel cuz youz a funny joke
Didn't connect..
my beats and rhymes are melting you down like liquid
im the hard solid "RYDA" or u can just call me wicked
Not a punch..
your mind is hurting and crying cuz my shit is pure
my position of power diteriates with out a cure.
Still not a punch..
now u got it twisted thinking you got the best agility
but im Infinite_Stan kid so picture the possibilitys
Not a punch..

Ryda

Infinatestan hope u came wit a gameplan
cause wen i KO u you'll fell lonley like a divorced man
Didn't connect..
this kid is 17 and he is a pussy says he is gettin honeys
but all he is fucking is infladable dummys
Not a punch..
it says he is from the redland
afta this battle mentally u'll be drippin red man
man u got nothin i was rappin before ur life began
Not a punch..
compare our rhymes im tippin the scale
cause my rhymes r betta and i now ill prevail
Not a punch..
i seen ur battle wit unrestricted
wit ur weak lines u dont now im already ahead
Not a punch..
this is the battle for the avatar
you and ur rhymes are bizarre
wen i spit you'll run like i am a police car
Too simple..
cause u scared of me u aint no real MC
you cant even beat me i guarantee
Not a punch..
this kid thinks he's tough cause he called me out
i'll merk this kid then he'll now wat im bout
im gunna win this battle aint no doubt
Not a punch..
He's tryin to figure out my game like he's a scout
This kid im deffinatley gunna bang out
Not a punch..
Thats it is it game over for your rap Infinatestan
But dont worry u can go back to being an eminem fan
The concept had potential, but it was worded wrong..

Overall, this battle wasn't that good at all. InfiniteStan only had two punches, neither of which connected. The rest of his bars were worded into statements, which amount to nothing in battles. He attempted wordplay.. it usually didn't come out, but it was their nonetheless. Ryda went almost twice as many lines as InfiniteStan did. Ryda also had two punches in his verse, neither of which connected. Ryda attempted more wordplay, but it didn't come through for him. But, in the end, InfiniteStan gets my vote. He came with half as many lines as Ryda, but came with just as many punches and just as good wordplay.

Vote - InfiniteStan

Both of you should sign up for the Punchline League, too.

upping for this !!!



vote..


Inifinite vs Ryda

Voted For: InfiniteStan

v/ infinite

reasons- he actually had punches. and some of his lines had nice humor in them.. decent drop

ryda- you need to upp ya vocab, punches, flow... read some battles in the efl, n you'll know what i mean. word