Rile1 Vs. Defined
 

aight here is me check....goodluck

wordness...checking in...good luck to u too

All the Illiteracy be done youngin..rile1(real1)...Learn quick
ill Teach,Screw over,& Squash you
..................like i was English carpenters quick to Drop shit

blah

come on rile dont wait till tuesday to drop man lets go

aight here are 3 links ill give the last after rile drops

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211541

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211520

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211523

ill drop...I've been busy yo... but Ill prolly have it tomorrow or Tuesday..dont worry, it will be good haha

comp nerd, ur not threatening, all u do is type, but im here, so its mayday
he sure isn't going to heaven...but he would die if I smashed his gateway

meh... at least I posted schweet lol

All the Illiteracy be done youngin..rile1(real1)...Learn quick
ill Teach,Screw over,& Squash you
..................like i was English carpenters quick to Drop shit
^^yeah like you said, "blah" no real punch to this, threat and "like" bar combined = hard to make dope

vs.

comp nerd, ur not threatening, all u do is type, but im here, so its mayday
he sure isn't going to heaven...but he would die if I smashed his gateway
^^good concept, badly worded and stretched, but it hits saying he's a comp nerd etc.

v/rile1

I meant to put " he would go to hell if I smashed his gateway" but its w/e... thanks Vas

i thought defined's carpenter like was pretty weak to be honest. the punchline was poorly structured. rile1 got straight to the point with a wittier punch.

v//rile1

v/ rile1

wow real1 and rile1 sound nothing alike so i don't even know what the point of defined's set up was

^^LOL well thats how I pronounce it...thanks for votes...keep them coming!

v/ rile both punches were subpar but his was at least decent

Defined:
All the Illiteracy be done youngin..rile1(real1)...Learn quick
ill Teach,Screw over,& Squash you
..................like i was English carpenters quick to Drop shit

Blah, this punch was ok nothing special. no personals. it was a self glorifying diss basically. it wasn;t a direct punch feel me...6/10


[b]Rile:

comp nerd, ur not threatening, all u do is type, but im here, so its mayday
he sure isn't going to heaven...but he would die if I smashed his gateway

LOL wtf. this was garbage. i wasnt feelin this at all. it didnt even make snes. i give it. 2/10

vote: defined

weak battle

thank you....and to you makaveli it was sayin that since he spells real1, rile1...i was sayin he was illiterate cuz he spells it wrong so yea

^^yeah, at least u actually knew that lol....and KonTayJuz...fuck outta here lol

Oh I thoguht we could edit this lol... heres my linkage

Section 1
http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...29&postcount=14
http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...32&postcount=12
http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...305&postcount=9
http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...03&postcount=12

Section 2
http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...925&postcount=8
http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...301&postcount=7
http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...300&postcount=7
http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...97&postcount=11

I didnt know if u ment just his section :p

Vote - Rile1

His concept was just better..

v/ rile 1

better wording
better punch

~closed~
R:1+
D:1-