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MeTaFo' vs L.I.
Battle Rules:
20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting LL Vs C.S Good Luck. Minimum posts to vote: 300 Check in by: 10-17-05 at 10:36 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
MeTaFo' has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-05 10:39 AM.
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You've been banned on one account, and humiliated on the other*
A Loss can be a tragic event, but your experienced, so you wont mind another! Dog, i'm like ya own mother...in the simple fact I Own you Brother we all got a trick up our sleeve ........but i never expected your 'Lethal Weapon' to be danny glover Ya raps in a slump-huh?...well maybe i can be of some assistance... when its time to brawl...Your like new cellphones...you try to keep your ''distance'' If you drop a hot punch, its a mis-print, or our eyes actin all deseptive so you go and tell us the true meanin'...and the mistake was being corrective so in other words...you rappin hot shit...once in a blue moon... even ya mom spankin your ass for tryin...she even nicknamed you baboon... i'ma make like a balloon...so you can go right ahead and BLOW ME People told me you was nice...but then again, here's what they Showed me! Man you know me, homie..And maybe i'm being unfair provinding your worst link... But i'm not the one to blame, there is consicences when you put up a mic and dont THINK. Maybe ya just took a drink, or had a little toot...and decided ya didnt wannabe on mute Whatever it was, I just say you saw your own foot and decided to shoot!!** All ya flirtin is cute....I guess the rumour of me n tha Q got you Excited... Now dudes all pissed off and cussin like a girl...'cause he wasnt Invited. Your rhymes? I can ignite-it...You need my help, son...Don't fight-it... Scared kid!...the doc orderd elevation...So go head and try it, ya never know...YOU MIGHT LIKE-IT. explanation= *=he was banned on his old alias....and humiliated on the other (because of this battle...Jinx?lol) **shot yourself in the foot is an expression, just wanted to clear that up. |
L.I. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-05 06:46 PM.
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i need an extension until tommorow night. sorry for the delay
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nevermind i thought it was due tonight by 6 but its tommorow night. ill drop asap
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Good ^
'Cause I aint goin thru all this again, this is the last time we battle |
i know u bite my shit. man thats class
so give me my linebacker ill have to tackle yo ass dont let ya heart fail. the pain ull feel is brought to u through me cuz this kid'll be on an IV quicker than the third sequel to movies this guy is complete trash. tally my votes and score em cause M comes wacker then all of the verses in our cypher forum just leave the site. pick a new home and move please RV will be scared of your comeback like Tedy Bruschi's fucking lame bitch. get a life, dont start to sob and when i call you a mophead i aint insulting your job ALL I HAVE TIME FOR. pz |
This was feedback posted for MeTaFo'
with the exception of ur fucked structure i think u had ebtter everything props....... polls
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yes an u have an exceptional lack of skill. never were good...never will be
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our battle is up for votes...... thanks willa...and L.I, don't diss willa,. on the evidence of this battle, dog she would murder you. |
This was feedback posted for L.I.
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lmao no she wouldnt. |
LOL...^^^
Aight...... Well uppin this......... stop checkin polls and vote, you'll still see what the polls are if you vote you know.... :thumbup: |
i aint crew votin n shit.. days why me n mystic dint vote
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This was feedback posted for MeTaFo'
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lol how is this still 0-0 god damn >(
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Voted For: L.I.
MetaFo': You've been banned on one account, and humiliated on the other* A Loss can be a tragic event, but your experienced, so you wont mind another! ^^ok opener not too witty 4/10 Dog, i'm like ya own mother...in the simple fact I Own you Brother we all got a trick up our sleeve ........but i never expected your 'Lethal Weapon' to be danny glover ^^no 2/10 Ya raps in a slump-huh?...well maybe i can be of some assistance... when its time to brawl...Your like new cellphones...you try to keep your ''distance'' ^^good meta good punch 7/10 If you drop a hot punch, its a mis-print, or our eyes actin all deseptive so you go and tell us the true meanin'...and the mistake was being corrective ^^ok 5/10 so in other words...you rappin hot shit...once in a blue moon... even ya mom spankin your ass for tryin...she even nicknamed you baboon... ^^no 2/10 i'ma make like a balloon...so you can go right ahead and BLOW ME People told me you was nice...but then again, here's what they Showed me! ^^ok 5/10 Man you know me, homie..And maybe i'm being unfair provinding your worst link... But i'm not the one to blame, there is consicences when you put up a mic and dont THINK. ^^ok 5/10 Maybe ya just took a drink, or had a little toot...and decided ya didnt wannabe on mute Whatever it was, I just say you saw your own foot and decided to shoot!!** ^^stupid 1/10 All ya flirtin is cute....I guess the rumour of me n tha Q got you Excited... Now dudes all pissed off and cussin like a girl...'cause he wasnt Invited. ^^ok 6/10 Your rhymes? I can ignite-it...You need my help, son...Don't fight-it... Scared kid!...the doc orderd elevation...So go head and try it, ya never know...YOU MIGHT LIKE-IT. ^^dope closer good multies 8/10 Overall: 45/100 (45%) L.I i know u bite my shit. man thats class so give me my linebacker ill have to tackle yo ass ^^dope opener dope meta 9/10 dont let ya heart fail. the pain ull feel is brought to u through me cuz this kid'll be on an IV quicker than the third sequel to movies ^^ok 4/10 this guy is complete trash. tally my votes and score em cause M comes wacker then all of the verses in our cypher forum ^^no 3/10 just leave the site. pick a new home and move please RV will be scared of your comeback like Tedy Bruschi's ^^ok 5/10 fucking lame bitch. get a life, dont start to sob and when i call you a mophead i aint insulting your job ^^decent closer 6/10 Overall: 27/50 (54%) Vote: L.I. he was more witty RTF with an honest vote on a battle in my sig |
ill hit one up tonight.........................upping
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Voted For: MeTaFo'
I shouldnt have to explain........................Metafo killed L.I Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Yeah but you should of explained fool.
anyway...uppin this, 1-0 to L.I lmao. |
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Voted For: L.I.
Well...kinda awkward battle here. An obvious line differnce,but..as always,it's quality > quantity.L.I.'s lines were better,more creative,and str8 to the point. Meta fore..you had some gay lines,like that baboon/mom line..i mean..wtf was that?That sounds like something an infant would say.And in ya' 1st bar..i really don't think losing an alias is considered a "tragic loss" to L.I...so that line was pretty weak.The audio shit had potential..but you didn't use it well.. L.I got this. Vote-L.I. |
Voted For: L.I.
i know u bite my shit. man thats class so give me my linebacker ill have to tackle yo ass dont let ya heart fail. the pain ull feel is brought to u through me cuz this kid'll be on an IV quicker than the third sequel to movies vs. nothing Seriously, LI's first 2 bars were decent wordplay, metapho came with nothing good imo, simple bars, and really streched, so v/LI |
Voted For: L.I.
know u bite my shit. man thats class so give me my linebacker ill have to tackle yo ass ^^decent opener, good wording dont let ya heart fail. the pain ull feel is brought to u through me cuz this kid'll be on an IV quicker than the third sequel to movies ^^this was koo this guy is complete trash. tally my votes and score em cause M comes wacker then all of the verses in our cypher forum ^^ok, nothin special just leave the site. pick a new home and move please RV will be scared of your comeback like Tedy Bruschi's ^^nah, i got it but it lacked a punch fucking lame bitch. get a life, dont start to sob and when i call you a mophead i aint insulting your job ^^lil chuckle here your verse was short was some decent punches good wording throughout, a coouple punches connected wish you had put more effort/time into it though. You've been banned on one account, and humiliated on the other* A Loss can be a tragic event, but your experienced, so you wont mind another! ^^ok, nothing great, pretty simple Dog, i'm like ya own mother...in the simple fact I Own you Brother we all got a trick up our sleeve ........but i never expected your 'Lethal Weapon' to be danny glover ^^nah, not feeling this punch Ya raps in a slump-huh?...well maybe i can be of some assistance... when its time to brawl...Your like new cellphones...you try to keep your ''distance'' ^^ok, but not connecting well If you drop a hot punch, its a mis-print, or our eyes actin all deseptive so you go and tell us the true meanin'...and the mistake was being corrective ^^eh, wack so in other words...you rappin hot shit...once in a blue moon... even ya mom spankin your ass for tryin...she even nicknamed you baboon... ^^lol wtf,..not good i'ma make like a balloon...so you can go right ahead and BLOW ME People told me you was nice...but then again, here's what they Showed me! ^^lol, thats old, couldve been worded way better Man you know me, homie..And maybe i'm being unfair provinding your worst link... But i'm not the one to blame, there is consicences when you put up a mic and dont THINK. ^^lol,...good shit Maybe ya just took a drink, or had a little toot...and decided ya didnt wannabe on mute Whatever it was, I just say you saw your own foot and decided to shoot!!** ^^im feelin this All ya flirtin is cute....I guess the rumour of me n tha Q got you Excited... Now dudes all pissed off and cussin like a girl...'cause he wasnt Invited. ^^um, ok,..thats scary yo Your rhymes? I can ignite-it...You need my help, son...Don't fight-it... Scared kid!...the doc orderd elevation...So go head and try it, ya never know...YOU MIGHT LIKE-IT. ^^ok,..not a great closer . . your verse was hella stretched n couldve done with some trimmin, i think 1 punch connected, but your verse was personal n kudos for that but it just didnt seem up to par w/L.I's verse..... L.I, ive seen alot of variations of those lines b4, try to come more original w/ya text next time |
^ word thanks for the vote bro.
upping for the final vote.......... |
This was feedback posted for L.I.
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Voted For: L.I.
for quality not quantity ...return wit a vote... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220983 |
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